Happy New Year, I wasn't online recently so a bit late getting back to your reply. Thank you for taking it well, as this results in more great creations from authors like you which will help entertain readers like us, so it becomes a virtuous cycle. Have a good year with health ,happiness and wealth.
A happy new year to you, too!
The pacing gets better as we move from cliche scenes and actually involve in the story more. Like learning about the top champions in LLO world, Lost gods, Gold fish evolution, side characters and interactions as such are adding to the story. These build the story and keep the interest of the readers. When in doubt always go back to your early chapters and memories why you made this story/character in the first place and stick with those reasons don't try to make changes when it's not needed.
Yep, returning to roots. That's what I've been doing recently. Ren Jingyi finally got a chance to shine again, though that did take some time. I'm quite proud of that bit. Thanks for writing all of this, because I know it took effort to say all of this. IP was the best novel I've written right now, and I don't really recommend the rest of my works IMO. I read all of your input, and I am taking it well.
now as a general advice, I personally have read too many webnovels to properly make a list, including so many trash ones, that i don't even leave reviews, I only take my time to connect with author if there is something good that can be made better.
Being humble is fine but not too lenient to the point everyone walks over him, right amount of force shown in short time will solve many unwanted dialogues which doesn't make it interesting anyways.
2) Adds to story, because it should be a seamless flow instead of forced intervention
3) Justification, why such change is needed and essential to the story progression.
4) Don't try to pull the character in too many directions, eccentric, humble, easy-going, light hearted, humorous, all in the same chapter or in very short time frame, it becomes distorted.
Let me take some time to provide constructive criticism, the Immortal Paladin is the only book I read from your works, so I will stick with that as reference. Evolving a character is fine as long as they have
1) Interesting and actually something that keeps the core values same because that's the reason people started liking the MC anyways, so don't go changing them in the name off evolution.
I wanted to message you, but it doesn't allow more than 500 characters. So I am leaving a review in Immortal Paladin.
It did get a rewrite if it counts, and will probably get more.
I only posted the rewritten version in RR, though
Da Wei is a continuously evolving/mutating person as a character. It has something to do with Divine Possession. I am glad you enjoyed it, though. It's my first novel that had an actual breakthrough in readership, so I've been working hard to make it right. I can say confidently that it would get better, but I understand if you dropped it for good. Time is a precious resource after all.
Hii, how are you doing?
Plenty alive, busy on two main projects and college.
Bruh Pls bring back Extra nobody. I could offer up my sister to you just for you to give it a proper ending??
Just wondering, are you planning on updating extra nobody to as far as the original one have?
or in the future?
I am crying right now, being reminded of the fanfic, I can't find my old drafts, and if I reupload the old ones that I have right now, the story won't connect. It's a mess...
I am glad you are enjoying Immortal Paladin though.
Just read a large portion of Immortal Paladin in one sitting.
Fantastic novel. Amazing work.
Kudos to you!
Thanks, I appreciate it!
Author, I beg you please release the chapters of extra nobody again, there use to be much more than 57 chapters if you still have it, please please upload it, even if it's not the rewrite version. I can't get over the fact that this use to have more than 200 chapters
It's a mess right now, hahaha. I couldn't find the old chaps of the earlier rewritten works and the story progression would be confusing if I post the old drafts
Author what about don't let tobi out ???
gosh... I feel so guilty, I have so many dead novels... and just as dead fanfics. I don't see them getting revived anytime soon. It doesn't help that I found writing fanfics way tougher than originals, since the former requires fact chesks, really sorry about dashing people's hope of seeing more of Don't Let Tobi Out, and Extra Nobody
Please, I come here on my knees dear author, could you please upload Extranobody again? Or at least go up as far as you have gone? I can't get that novel out of my head and now there are only 57 chaps when before there were more than 200.
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