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Anonymous101 · Apr 14, 2022

Thank you for the feedback I will make sure to spell check my chapters before posting them and I will also make sure to change the dialogue like you suggested please continue to support me like this and inform me if I am lacking anywhere else.clear.pngclear.pngclear.png

Anonymous101 · Apr 13, 2022

Thank you  for reading till chapter 3 I am new to this platform and as a author. I hope that you could comment on chapter or send me your feedback  I have decided to do daily updates of multiple chapters

ExoticSenta · Apr 14, 2022

Hi your work is not so bad, its just hard to read. I would suggest using Grammarly or another spellchecker for the spelling errors. 

Formating the text helps the reader's immersion so for dialogues instead of doing:

MC: "text he said" 

I suggest doing it like:

"text he said" mc's name said/yelled/whispered etc...

Additionally start using capital letters for names and when you start a sentence. 

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