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Thank you for the feedback I will make sure to spell check my chapters before posting them and I will also make sure to change the dialogue like you suggested please continue to support me like this and inform me if I am lacking anywhere else.
Thank you for reading till chapter 3 I am new to this platform and as a author. I hope that you could comment on chapter or send me your feedback I have decided to do daily updates of multiple chapters
Hi your work is not so bad, its just hard to read. I would suggest using Grammarly or another spellchecker for the spelling errors.
Formating the text helps the reader's immersion so for dialogues instead of doing:
MC: "text he said"
I suggest doing it like:
"text he said" mc's name said/yelled/whispered etc...
Additionally start using capital letters for names and when you start a sentence.
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