So I'm gonna vent a little here. I just got my first review and it ain't that good. A lot of it makes sense, but it still is a blow to my ego I guess. I mean, of course, I'm an amateur author, what do people expect. I don't know every rule of writing out there, nor can I perfectly perform them. I'm way out of my comfort zone here and of course, I'm going to make a lot of mistakes. Heck, it's my first time writing a full-blown story rather than an essay for school.