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Japanese mythology fanfiction? No, there are plans to include other mythologies like Chinese as well. If you hadn't realized, the first city in chapter 7 was Hong Kong.
I gave readers enough information to understand the story. There are times when I didn't include certain information because Adam doesn't know the answer. The story is written in third-person limited.
Also, I am not sure why you would want to read infodumps, but hey, you do you.
shadow slave by guiltythree This is my favorite story one I consider masterpiece is it drama? Read it to find out then compere your stories.
Will not be responding anymore as I see it as pointless.
Masterpiece, indeed. I guess you want stories with development at the start and then no development later on?
Volume 1 is good. Very good. Volume 2- A lot of chapters, do not make sense. The author went along the path of the text, for the sake of the text. Lost dynamics. Volume 2 - a snail crawling in a small circle.
The character development in Volume 1 . Volume 2- development canceled and stuck in place. They have become dumber.
Thanks for the review.
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