just clarity, i already published it
i have second chapter ready and i'm trying to not do the same mistakes
maybe you can read it and tell me what do you think?
Sure!
How do you want me to edit it? Do you want me to make major edits or just clarity edits?
You can consult me for punctuation, but keep in mind, I am no expert. I get things wrong too.
No problem! Always willing to help. Available 24/7 on weekends, and 7-8pm on week days. If you need any advice though I may not be an expert, I think I can offer some advice for your writing or anything in general.
grammarly isn't free so all it does is fixing grammar mistakes