For the most part, things are going well. I took a hiatus in December because I lost my inspiration, but I regained some of it since then. The Mass Effect fic is coming to an end soon, and I’m already starting to lay the groundwork for my new project.

Thanks for asking!

Although this makes sense the plot line after leaving earth is jumping all over the place. Other than that it’s a good story might want to take a couple days and give a good looking over because there are spelling mistakes. For one you misspelled Thessia. All in all the story has potential but needs polishing.

First thing first, English is not my main language, so there's that. I do try my best using the tools I have at hand to improve but there's a limit on what I can do.

Regarding the writing style, I write as a hobby, and honestly, I have no time to improve my writing skills, as my studies take most of my time. I do my best trying to write a cohesive story and in doing so, I think the flashbacks and flashforwards are a good addition, as it helps me a lot, but I could be wrong.

As for the grammar errors, I can't do much about that. First: I write the chapter in my main language;

So, even though I do try my best, some small mistakes might still happen and unless I pay for a premium or for an editor, those small mistakes may pass and I rely on the reader to fix them.

My goal when writing is to put down the ideas I have on my mind and maybe inspire others to write something too, as if I could do it so could them. Also, if you go back to play ME, watch TWD, or play GOW, because of my fics, that would be amazing too.

I can finaly write again, thanks for checking on me.

BTW, nice new fic you posted, I liked it a lot.