BEST READ WITH THE BLACK ON WHITE TEXT(moon looking button):
Music to listen to.
Opening: Doughboyz Cashout – City of Dealers
Break: Fabolous ft. 2 Chainz – When I Feel Like It
Closing: Gunplay ft. Masspike Miles – Household Name
How will this end...
SKIP FOR THE WEAK HEARTED TO THE NEXT SET OF LINES
EXT. OUTSIDE OF TITAN'S TOWER DAY
FADE IN:
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Scream for him then.
RAVEN
Fuck you.
WONDER WOMAN
(Tears up in anger)
Stop it.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Scream for him.
RAVEN
(Trying not to show fear)
No...I won't.
SUPERMAN
(Rips the top of her costume)
Fine.
WONDER WOMAN
Stop it!
SUPERMAN
(Looks at Raven)
You're even more beautiful than I thought raven, I think I'll start here...
RAVEN
(Thinking to herself)
Ness...help me!
SUPERMAN
(Hovers his hand down Raven's body)
Now-
TOJI
(Barely starts crawling towards them)
Get...away from her.
SUPERMAN
Still have some fight in you huh?
Superman shoots a heat beam from his eyes right at Toji.
TOJI
(Feeling the burning pain on his back from the heat beam)
Aaaaaah!
RAVEN
(Crying as she can only watch)
Toji!
WONDER WOMAN
(She glares at him)
You'll pay for this.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Who's going to know when there's no witnesses?
WONDER WOMAN
(Has a realization that puts fear and anger into her heart)
You can't kill them...
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Can and will just like I killed Ness, can't you see that he's dead Diana, accept it, just like Raven has.
WONDER WOMAN
(Slowly losing her faith)
Raven don't lose faith, you can't lose faith...
SUPERMAN
Or you'll lose faith? How's this for faith.
All that can be heard is a rip...
SUPERMAN
(Gets a full look at Raven's body)
So lovely, I can't wait to destroy that flower.
RAVEN
(Crying in defeat)
Ness...
WONDER WOMAN
(Another tear falls from her face)
No...
SUPERMAN
(Smirks at the look in Raven's eye)
Yes it's about time! Now that you all given up hope it's time to-
Out of nowhere at a height of 6ft on all fours white tiger with blue stripes, appears and attacks Superman with a lightning claw barely missing him...
SUPERMAN
(Looks to see a brown wolf around the same height of the Tiger quickly bring Starfire, Wonder Woman, and collar free Larson sister next to the falling Titans)
What?!
TIGER
It's a shame, this is what a hero has falling to.
SUPERMAN
It talks, who are you two?
WOLF
(Looking at Superman with no fear)
Olcan, the Representation of Gaia.
WONDER WOMAN
(Shocked beyond words)
Gaia?
TIGER
(Keeps Raven's body covered)
Vice, Representation of Zeus, but our business isn't with you, that goes to the one above on Ra, the Representation of Vulcan.
RAVEN
(Crying with hope while covering up)
Representation of Zeus...
SUPERMAN
(Looks up at the black winged and red body phoenix)
I didn't think you would make it here in time...Ness.
CUT TO:
Opening:
[Verse 1: Payroll Giovanni]
My plans after high school simple get skrilla
My heroes ain't wear no capes just chinchillas
Living in the city where a nigga with a job is a nobody while the dealers treated like God
Street niggas looking like they just went platinum
Foreign on feet with the Rolex platinum
I wanted to get money with him but don't ask him
So I'ma sell my D and make the nigga come to me
I'ma real dealer nigga I don't finesse
Cause in my city that'll get your ass stretched
Learn from the best pass game to the pups toasting with my day one champagne in my cup
Posted at the spot and my sack still fresh
Looking up the block I look right then left
Saw a narc car and almost lost my breath rape van around the corner everybody clear the set
[Hook: Payroll Giovanni]
Raised in the city of the dealers and the hood full of killers keep the bullshit I just want money
So I hit the block and I got my own money
Was only 21 playing with grown money
(x2)
[Verse 2: HBK]
I'm from the city it's a competition not getting slugged
You gon jump behind the line or you gon hop in the front
That's your man you better watch him if he boxed then scrunched to have you looking at a dime, he only got 10 months
Murders going on everyday and time in the streets
Don't believe this shit real, follow crime in the D
I know niggas on my head, all these diamonds on me
But I can't stop shining, I just got it in me
Got it for cheap? Not from me but my nigga official had a connect when YG came and needed a pistol
Wanna cop me a 50, I just need it for issues but niggas wanna see us down signing papers with initials
Used to be on Sussex, peeping out the window
Just woke up but still dreaming bout a Benzo
Snapped in reality, a nigga hearing gunshots
Nothing new it's just that one block
[Hook:]
[Verse 3: Roc]
I got a message to deliver I demand to be heard
Before I got locked up I was on my way to a bird
It started from flipping grams, niggas was doing scams I was catching a sitting off I'm a blessing I been a boss
My presents had niggas still tryna get out a Dodge
Whether I just be by myself or the whole entourage
When my face tore up you better know I mean business cause in the next couple seconds my 40 gon start spitting
I get love from my city
Best believe niggas know me
And I got a black nigga who fosho kill for me
Real talk I got bands guy
Paid lawyer on stand by
Coupe muscle 22's ice got a nigga cool
Skin got a nigga tatted up from head to chest
A sticky situation show what friends the best, lord play to the left
I got stripes like a ref
Play in the D and it's death
(Play in the D and it's death]
bryf963 Presents
Teen Titans: Birth of Ness
Starring
Ness
The DC and OC owned Teen Titans and Villains
[Hook]
BACK TO:
We see Ness wearing all black long sleeve shirt with his swords poking under it, sweatpants, sneakers (Nike), and a Snapback cap forward, jumping down to the ground next to Raven...
RAVEN
Ness?...
NESS
(Takes off his shirt and looks away respectfully while giving it to Raven)
Here...He didnt...?
We now see what looks like a black tank, arms and wristbands on Ness with the rest of his arms and legs being bandaged from the neck down, a calm but angry and worried expression appears on the face of Ness...
RAVEN
(Quickly puts on the shirt, gets from under Vice, stands up and puts her cloak over the shirt)
No. You made it in time.
NESS
Good, maybe I'll show him mercy now...
RAVEN
(Looks at Ness)
Ness don't...Ness?
NESS
(Anger slowly building as he makes a his fist with both hands as he thinks out loud)
He did this to the women in my life, my friends, teammates...even my brothers...I'll...I'll-
RAVEN
(Tears up)
We tried hard not to...I tried hard not to...I thought you broke the promise.
NESS
All this was Superman's doing huh?
RAVEN
He wanted the females...in order to...make more heroes.
NESS
And so that's why he...alright I heard enough.
RAVEN
Ness...
NESS
(Smirks at Raven)
Don't worry, I promise.
RAVEN
(Smiles)
What I was going to say was, you better kick his ass.
NESS
Tru, keep my shirt warm for me.
RAVEN
(Looks away annoyed yet blushing)
Whatever.
With that Ness walks up to the fallen Titans...
TOJI
(Smirks)
it's about time you got here...oww...
NESS
(Looks at all the fallen Titans)
Looks like y'all seen better days.
TOJI
You think? Kick his ass.
NESS
Tru.
WONDER WOMAN
Ness, I'm so happy he didn't kill you, untie me so I can kick his ass.
NESS
He wishes he could kill me beautiful, I'll untie you as long as you stay out my fight.
WONDER WOMAN
(Angry)
Now's not the time to be reckless Ness, let me fight him.
NESS
And if I let you finish this shit? How does that make me look after all the training I was put through.
WONDER WOMAN
(Angry)
Alive, still breathing...less of a man...
The realization then hits her heavy...
WONDER WOMAN
(Starts calming down)
Less of a man...
NESS
(Unties her)
I got this beautiful.
WONDER WOMAN
(Stands up and looks into Ness's eyes)
I believe in you.
Walks up to Olcan and Vice...
NESS
Alright guys, I got this.
VICE
Ok then Young Ness, show him show that the power of the Gods and Goddesses aren't nothing to be played with.
OLCAN
I think I'ma take a nap now.
VICE
(Annoyed as he looks at Olcan while walking away to the other Titans)
What for another thousand years you bear.
OLCAN
(Follows Vice)
Ah shut up!
The two heroes stare each other down.
SUPERMAN
(Laughs)
You expect to beat me in that state?
NESS
(Emotionless to the comment while he continues to look at Superman with a serious look rarely seen on Ness)
...
RAVEN
Ness is different somehow...
TOJI
No it's not that, Ness is taking Superman extremely seriously now, especially considering what he did to us...
SUPERMAN
So, what makes you think this time will be different? You're a one trick pony.
NESS
(Gets serious)
Because, underestimation is the worst shit you can do, Rojo taught me that.
SUPERMAN
Then I won't show no mercy this time.
NESS
That makes two of us.
SUPERMAN
I warned you.
NESS
(Gets into his fighting stance)
Same, lets fight.
SUPERMAN
(Face gets serious)
Die boy.
Superman and Ness rush at each other and the two begin a clash of punches and kicks with nether letting up.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks while thinking to himself)
He seems slower than last time, lets step it up a notch.
Superman moves behind Ness sending a fist to his head...But Ness grabs his sword, spins away from the fist and quickly pulls out the sword for a downward slice at Superman.
SUPERMAN
(Backs away from the blade as Ness then gets into a one sword stance)
Not bad here, I thought you got slower.
NESS
(Still looking at Superman with a serious look as he brings another sword out and get into a dual sword stance with one blade vertically in front and the other horizontally lower behind him)
...
SUPERMAN
(Uses a mocking tone)
Oh so you don't trash talk no more?
Superman is brought down to the ground as Ness quickly gets in front of Superman and goes into another downward slash.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks and breaks free in time to move back from the sword)
Ni-
But before Superman can say a word, Ness spins at him with the sword behind him going for a horizontal slice...
SUPERMAN
(Barely moves away from the sword)
He baited me-
Ness continues to spin and brings the first sword back for another horizontal slash.
SUPERMAN
(Gets cut barely avoiding the blade)
Aaaah!
Jumps into air and attacks with his blades in front while he spins forward into a ball, seriously cutting into Superman...
NESS
(Kicks Superman into the air takes a huge breath)
Hades Blast!
Ness fires a huge blast of fire, sending Superman into the sky...
WONDER WOMAN
He did it.
TOJI
(Smirks)
I knew my little brother would kick his ass.
RAVEN
(Thinking shocked)
Ness, you gotten so strong.
VICE
No.
TOJI
(Looks shocked with everyone else except Vice, Olcan and Ness)
What?
SUPERMAN
(Floats down clapping his hands)
Good job Ness, you actually caused some damage, it's a shame that flying closer to the sun gave me my strength back. Your body is getting tired while mine is strong. Give up.
NESS
(Still looking at Superman with a serious look)
You right.
TOJI
(In denial)
No way...
RAVEN
Ness no.
SUPERMAN
Good, now that you know your pla-
Ness takes off what now turns out to be a vest with weights and arm band with weights as well, revealing his body's whole upper half to be bandaged...
NESS
(Throws them to the side eyes never once leaving Superman)
Much better.
SUPERMAN
So he was using weights, must of gained only a little more speed and streng-
An explosion of rocks appear as the shirt and arm bands make impact to the ground...
Shout out to Rock Lee, there fans you happy now? Get them vice grips away from my-
RAVEN
(Shocked with mouth open wide)
What?
TOJI
You gotta be kidding he's stronger than me now with strength.
ZARA
(Sits up awaken)
Hey stop shaking the groun-
SUPERMAN
Impressive, and here I thought this would be easy.
ZARA
(Waves at Ness)
Hi Ness! Where's Cyber Rider?
CYBER RIDER
(Ra lands revealing a smiling Cyber Rider)
Right here Mrs. Larson.
ZARA
(Looks at Ra in amazement)
Woah.
RA
(A smirk expression appears on its beak)
I see you are amazed by my beauty.
ZARA
(Shocked)
What she can talk?!
RA
(Gets somewhat annoyed)
Of course I can! I am the Representation of Vulcan after all.
ZARA
(Looks at Olcan and Vice)
So you and your friends saved Ness?
CYBER RIDER
(Confused)
Actually no and what do you mean if you don't mind me asking.
TOJI
Superman told us you two died, he even had both of you two's broken communicators and Ness's broken car.
ZARA
(Realizes Toji looks more beaten than)
Toji? What happened to you?
TOJI
Fucking bastard hit me with them laser beam eyes.
ZARA
If Ness wasn't here I'd...why is Ness all bandaged, what did he do to him.
CYBER RIDER
Nothing we left our things and went into this portal. Ness did a lot of training and we was going to come here to relax but Ness sensed something was wrong when his car was gone then he said Raven's name and we saved hours' worth of a trip getting here thanks Ra.
RAVEN
(Thinking)
He heard me all those times...but how?
SUPERMAN
Seems like you're spirit's still not broken, lets continue this, maybe I'll give you a whole in your chest like your brother. It felt good you know? Just imagining the look on your face when you would see all of your love ones beaten to near death. Tell me Ness, can you find it in your heart not to kill me.
WONDER WOMAN
Ness, don't fall for his mind games.
NESS
Too late...
Rain starts falling on the ground as dark clouds form...
V ICE
(Looks at Raven and smirks)
Looks like this is my cue to protect you all, half breed.
RAVEN
(Shocked)
What do you mean?
TOJI
(Smirks)
What bro got up his sleeve?
CYBER RIDER
(Curious)
I too am curious.
ZARA
(Raises her fist in a cheering motion)
Do it Ness!
RAVEN
Do what?
WONDER WOMAN
(Smirks)
You'll see, just watch.
SUPERMAN
(Uses a mocking tone)
Oh I'm sorry, can you forgiv-
Superman is restricted by an electrical cross...
SUPERMAN
(Screams in pain trying to break free)
Aaaaaaah!
NESS
(Keeps staring into Superman's eyes seriously as electricity forms around him)
Here it goes.
The electricity leaves his hand and goes up into the dark clouds causing lightning and thunder to appear within them.
RAVEN
(Shocked beyond words thinking to herself)
What's happening, this is Ness?
NESS
(Raises his arm to the sky)
Zeus's Strike!
Ness brings his arm down and a giant lightning bolt strikes down Superman.
SUPERMAN
(Feels the pain intensify as he disappears into a ball of light that covers the whole island)
Aaaaaaah!
The light slowly begins to clear...
VICE
(Protecting the other Titans, Mari, Toji and Wonder Woman by absorbing the lightning)
So, you used that fire attack to summon the rain in order to enhance lightning for a devastating attack.
CYBER RIDER
Amazing...
RAVEN
(Thinking as she slowly walks to Ness)
So that must be how he beat Aquaman.
NESS
(Holds his hand out telling Raven to stay back)
It's not over.
SUPERMAN
(Badly damage but easily standing)
Damn you! I will kill you.
NESS
(Unfazed)
I don't care.
WONDER WOMAN
(Glares at Superman)
I won't let you Clark, stop now.
SUPERMAN
(Looks at Raven and Wonder Woman)
And I'ma make you two girls watch
NESS
(Gets back into his stance)
I won't die.
SUPERMAN
(Laughs)
You think you can defeat me Ness?
NESS
(Still unfazed)
I'ma make you suffer.
SUPERMAN
(Flies back into the sky)
Then I welcome you try.
WONDER WOMAN
(Realizes what's about to happen)
Ness don't let him go to the sun!
ZARA
(Confused)
Why is he letting Superman recover?
WONDER WOMAN
It must be his pride, he wants Superman at his very best.
RAVEN
(Shocked)
Ness can't be serious.
TOJI
No, you wrong I'm afraid ladies.
ZARA
Toji your his brother, why is he doing this?
TOJI
He's trying not to kill him.
VICE
(A smirk expression appears on his face)
You really are his brother.
RAVEN
Ness wants to kill him?
VICE
Yes, when he had the feeling you guys were in trouble not only did I sense worry.
WONDER WOMAN
What else did you sense?
VICE
Murderous intent, most likely of the thought of your deaths.
RAVEN
What?
TOJI
Think about it Raven, what was Ness reaction especially when he saw what Superman did to you. Wonder Woman was only tied up but you.
Raven then has a flashback to what happened earlier...
NESS
(Takes off his shirt and looks away respectfully while giving it to Raven)
Here...He didnt...?
We once again see a calm but anger and worried expression appears on the face of Ness...
NESS
(Anger slowly building as he makes a his fist with both hands as he thinks out loud)
He did this to the women in my life, my friends, teammates...even my brothers...I'll...I'll-
Flashback ends...
RAVEN
(Shocked)
I never seen Ness worry about anything.
TOJI
Exactly, he would of killed him just like that skinhead whe told you about.
RAVEN
(Thinking to herself as she looks at Ness)
You can't become like that again Ness.
SUPERMAN
(Superman comes back even stronger)
I feel much better now, it's over for you Ness.
NESS
(Still looking at Superman with a serious look)
...
SUPERMAN
(Flies right at Ness)
Die!
Superman vanishes at a fast speed, appears in front of Ness and deliver a strong kick as Ness takes damaging from blocking it...
NESS
(Blocking a barrage of Superman's attack but taking damage)
Ugh...
Ness continues to try to block Superman's attacks until an uppercut sends his arms up...
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Got you now.
WONDER WOMAN
Ness!
Superman proceeds to deliver a punch at Ness's gut, sending him flying in there air into a rock so hard that he drops his swords.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Only a few villains have gotten me to use the sun for this much power. Ready to die?
NESS
(Thinking while he comes out of the rock)
Damn he's too strong.
SUPERMAN
I must admit, I respect and hate that will of yours. You backed up to reduce the power of that punch. But I still know I can break it.
NESS
You'll never break my will.
SUPERMAN
Then you'll have to suffer some more.
NESS
(Gets back into his sword stance)
I'll have to end this quick.
Superman appears in front of Ness but Ness disappears this time and sends a front flip kick behind the back of the head...
SUPERMAN
(Blocks and holds Ness's ankle)
Oh I knew you was hiding your speed. Now...
NESS
(Slams Ness to the ground)
Ahhh!-
SUPERMAN
(Sends a foot to Ness's neck)
Die.
ZARA
(Shocked screaming)
Noooo!
RAVEN
(Shocked beyond words by the snap she hears)
Ness!
WONDER WOMAN
(Thinking while shocked)
No this can't be...Ness!
SUPERMAN
(Smirks at everybody)
You see your hero, now he's dead, now for you ladi-
Superman is shocked by what turns out to be a scapegoat...
SUPERMAN
(In pain)
Aaaah!
Then as Superman breaks out of Ness's scapegoat...
NESS
(Ness appears and puts his hands on Superman)
Aeolus let's do this.
Superman becomes a part of a painful eye of the storm as a tornado forms around him...
NESS
(Forms two tornados in his hands with blades of wind sticking out of them)
Aeolus's Eye!
As Ness's hands clap the tornadoes leave his hands and combine with the tornado Superman is in...
Everybody watches in amazement a huge tornado is now formed...
SUPERMAN
(Being cut by many of wind blades)
Aaaaaaaaaaaah!
TOJI
(Amazed)
I wasn't expecting that!
ZARA
That's what I'm talking about Ness.
NESS
(Coughs up a huge amount of blood before falling in on one knee in pain)
Fuck!
RAVEN
(Mumbles quietly as she starts trembling in fear)
Not again...
WONDER WOMAN
(Worried as she steps closer)
Ness you ok-
NESS
(Holds his hand out)
Its not over...
The tornado dies revealing Superman to be gone...
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Impressive Ness a little more and I would of maybe been down for the count.
NESS
(Thinking)
Shit he's too strong...I can't win-
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
I know what you're probably thinking, "damn he's too strong, I can't win", right?
NESS
(Looks Superman with a serious look)
You're right...I can't win the way I am now, knew that before I started training...
RAVEN
(Fear sets in)
No...
ZARA
(Shocked)
No Ness, you gotta believe!
WONDER WOMAN
(Angry)
What happened to your pride?
SUPERMAN
It's gone Diana, I finally broke his will, isn't that right Ness?
NESS
No.
SUPERMAN
(Shocked)
What?
NESS
(Smirks)
I can't beat you the way I am now, you're right about that...but that's why I went beyond.
WONDER WOMAN
(Smirks)
That's good, because only I can make you submit.
ZARA
(Smirks and uses a teasing tone)
Oh really?
WONDER WOMAN
(Blushes)
In a fighting way.
ZARA
In a bed, while that one R&B song you like plays.
WONDER WOMAN
(Shocked)
How do you know about that? It's a good song by the R&B artist Joe.
TOJI
(Smirks)
Zara if I'm correct I can name it easily.
ZARA
Hmmm something about a master key.
WONDER WOMAN
(Thinking to herself)
No way he'd know.
TOJI
(Smirks)
All The Things (You Man Won't Do) or in this case All The Things (Superman Won't Do).
WONDER WOMAN
(Shocked beyond words, blushing)
I um…
SUPERMAN
(Overhears and a frown appears on his face)
I'm killing you first Asian.
NESS
(Smirks as he uses wind to bring his swords back to him)
Who knew Wonder Woman liked R&B?
SUPERMAN
(Slowly calms down and goes back to uses his mocking tone)
Back to the matter at hand, what makes you so sure you can win even if you "go beyond"?
NESS
(Crosses his swords together)
Only way to find out...
At first nothing happens...
SUPERMAN
(Senses Ness's energy)
Oh thats it, just a little increase of strength-
Of nowhere a lot of energy auras around Ness as the spirit and energy of a man with the head of an ibis appears above him...
RAVEN
(Thinks to herself as she senses the power coming from Ness)
What's this feeling? It's so holy yet wicked too, it's amazing!
WONDER WOMAN
(Amazed at the entity that appeared above Ness)
Hera...
TOJI
Remind me not to get on bro's angry side
ZARA
(Raises her fist in a cheering motion)
Go for it Ness.
SUPERMAN
(Shocked)
What?!
CYBER RIDER
(Smirks with amazement)
Truly astonishing, our second in command has proven himself to be elite.
NESS
(Completely takes in the energy)
This is the final battle.
CUT TO:
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EXT. DAY
Ness faces with Superman with a look of powerfulness...
SUPERMAN
(In denial)
What, you really think you'll defeat me.
Superman flies at Ness with a fiercely fast speed appearing in front of him and punching Ness in his stomach with the intent to kill him...
RAVEN
(Watches in fear)
Ness!
SUPERMAN
(Shocked as he looks at the other side of the crater)
What?!
Ness drops his swords and punches Superman, actually doing legit damage...
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Lucky shot, I guess I can get serious now.
Superman rushes as Ness even faster appearing right behind him...
SUPERMAN
(Punches at him with an intent to kill)
Die.
Ness disappears...
SUPERMAN
(Shocked)
Wha-
All Superman sees is a kick before flying towards Wonder Woman but then is stop right in front of her with an uppercut then thrown to the ground right when Ness finally is able to be easily seen as he punches Superman into the ground...
RAVEN
(Stands in front of Ness shocked)
Ness?
SUPERMAN
(Comes out of the ground and coughs up blood)
How-
What everybody save for Olcan, Ra, Vice, Cyber Rider and Ness are shocked to see that Ness's partially unbandaged arm seems to have been replace with metal...
SUPERMAN
So that's how you doing damage, you control metal now.
NESS
(Arm turns normal as he starts thinking)
My body can't take much, I gotta end this soon.
ZARA
Ness is destroying Superman, he's unstoppable.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Not bad but I know you can't last too much longer.
NESS
(Emotionless)
So you figured it out...
SUPERMAN
I remember your weakness, your body has to make up for all the power you use. So since your flooding with so much power...
WONDER WOMAN
(Shocked)
Most likely his body can't handle the pain.
SUPERMAN
So if I at last you which is going to be the case, you'll have to die or go back to normal meaning...
NESS
You win-
A sharp pain flares up Ness's nerves...
NESS
(Gets on one knee in pain)
Damn not now.
SUPERMAN
(Flies towards Ness)
Its over.
WONDER WOMAN
(Gets ready to fly to Ness)
Nes-
VICE
(Gets in front of Wonder Woman)
Stop.
SUPERMAN
(Appears in front of Ness fist swinging)
Die!
NESS
(Sees the fist coming right for his stomach)
Not good...
SUPERMAN
(Runs through a newly formed lava scapegoat Ness forms as he moves to the side)
Aaaaaaah!
RA
Ha! Told you guys he'd use my version.
VICE AND OLCAN
(Annoyed)
Shut up!
WONDER WOMAN
You knew?
TOJI
(Smirks)
Relax and let him handle it girls.
ZARA
How can you be so confident Toji?
TOJI
Easy, Ness never loses twice.
ZARA
Really?
ZARA, WONDER WOMAN AND RAVEN
What?!
TOJI
Ness jokes around with you if he thinks he'll pull off a fight with you but if he loses one, next time he's putting you on equal ground.
WONDER WOMAN
So even with such a big handicap last time, he...
RAVEN
He didn't take Superman himself seriously until he used that one move.
NESS
(Makes a weird hand sign then hits the lava covered Superman into the ground with a metal first then proceeds put his hand on Superman's chest again)
Enough. Now prepare for this one. Hade's Ignition.
A strong earthquake is felt as Ness blasts Superman with a huge fire blast into the ground for nobody to find him as a huge amount fire and rock flies deep into the sky, flames reaching close to everyone.
ZARA
(Amazed)
It's soo hot.
RA
He is indeed strong to of progress his powers to this extent. He should be dead.
NESS
(Backs away then coughs up blood)
Damn...
RAVEN
(Starts trying to walk up to Ness worried)
Ness?!
NESS
(Looks at the hole in the ground left by his attack annoyed while barely standing)
Why don't you give up?
SUPERMAN
(Floats out of the ground)
Why should I? You're almost out of energy.
VICE
This is bad he really is almost out of energy.
ZARA
Ness will find a way to win.
TOJI
(Smirks)
Got that right baby.
WONDER WOMAN
Please hera, watch over Ness.
SUPERMAN
Hey Raven, get ready for me. Because not only will I beat Ness, I'll make him watch our encore performance!
RAVEN
(Trembling at the memory as she looks away in fear of Superman)
No...
SUPERMAN
(Using a mocking tone at a serious looking Ness)
Aww Ness is mad now? Mad how I broke just about all of your love ones' spirits.
RA
He's despicable, I wanna destroy him.
OLCAN
(Yawns lays on the ground)
Just wake me up when the kid wins.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks and starts flying to the ground)
Now to end this.
But he his stopped...
SUPERMAN
(His body instantly gets covered in rock)
What?!
NESS
(Holding one arm in front in a fist while making hand signs with the other one in front)
I'm done hearing you talk, this is your final chance, walk away after this.
SUPERMAN
(Trying to break out)
I can't, break free.
NESS
That's made of the strongest rock known to life itself. And as for how bad this is going get, well since you love the sun...
Ness sends Superman into space...
SUPERMAN
(Angry)
I'll kill him once I absorb the sun's rays and break-
Superman sees something that leaves him in extreme shock...meanwhile back outside Titans' Tower...
NESS
(Makes more hands signs with both hands then coughs up more blood feeling closer to unconsciousness)
Fuck!
RAVEN
(About to run over to him)
Ness!
OLCAN
(Wakes up instantly)
Oh, looks like he's serious.
NESS
(Brings his arm)
Gaia's Slam!
TOJI
(Looking at the sky)
What do you...BRO WHAT THE FUCK?!
ZARA
(Looks at Toji's extreme shocked facial expression)
What's wrong?
WONDER WOMAN
(Extremely shocked
Oh Hera what the...?
ZARA
(Looking at everyone's shocked expression saved for the Representations and Ness)
What is it?
RAVEN
(Shocked at what is taken place)
Look up.
ZARA
(Looks at the sky)
Wooooah!
A giant comet the size of two Gaia's Throws appears from the sky and craters a small island further away from the Titans' Tower causing a huge earthquake...
NESS
(Caughs a huge amount of blood then falls on his knees while trying to keep himself from screaming in pain)
Aaahmmmmmphmmm.
RAVEN
(Runs over to him)
Ness!
Meanwhile...
SUPERMAN
Impossible I can't lose not to him. First he takes Diana away from me.
A flashback occurs...
WONDER WOMAN
(Smirks)
I see so you're mad that I got interest in a teen that's more man than you. He's seen and done things you could never recover from.
Flashback ends...
SUPERMAN
Then he insults me like he's my equal.
A flashback occurs...
SUPERMAN
(Uses a mocking tone)
So you're Ness? Why don't you leave, the grownups are talking.
NESS
Then you need to see your way out of my conversation with the lady Superboy, boy, boy, boy-
Flashback ends...
SUPERMAN
(Superman interrupts the flashback in extreme anger)
No, I won't be defeated by someone like you!
With that we are brought back to our favorite hero...
NESS
(Barely stands up and breathing heavily)
I'm ok.
RAVEN
(Puts his arm around and supports him)
No you're not, I sense your pain, why do you push yourself to such a extent.
NESS
Because-
R AVEN
(Gets pushed out of the way by Ness only to see him get uppercut'ed into the sky by a ground emerging Superman leaving her in fear)
Ness!
SUPERMAN
(Brings his arms up in a X)
Die!
NESS
(Leaves the earth's atmosphere, seeing Superman waiting for him)
He's really trying to kill me...Can't move...
Superman slams his fist into Ness's stomach...
NESS
(Fading in and out of consciousness as he's being sent extremely fast back to the earth)
Aaaaaaah!
All that can be felt and seen is something hitting the ground earth cratering heavy...
RAVEN
(Walks to the crater only to tear up at sight of Ness's dead corpse)
No no no, noooo!
SUPERMAN
(Lands down, now standing with pride while looking at Raven)
You see now, this world needs better heroes than this. Better than Batman, better than the Teen Titans, and definitely better than Ness.
RAVEN
(Eyes tear up as she glares at him)
...
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
Now Raven, come over here.
WONDER WOMAN
(Gets in front of Raven)
You wish.
SUPERMAN
Fine then guess we'll do this the hard-
Ness's metal scapegoat grabs a strong hold of Superman...
SUPERMAN
(Shocked)
What?!
?
I warned you.
RAVEN
(Smiles relieved as she looks across the crater)
Ness!
SUPERMAN
(In fear as he sees Ness form a green spear)
No it can't be. How, when?
NESS
While almost going up out of orbit I threw up a scapegoat. It took a while training to chemically make this with my powers, but I did it.
SUPERMAN
(Ness hits him through his leg with the spear before he can even dodge)
Aaaaaaah!
NESS
(Walks in front of Superman falling to the ground)
It's a shame, you was every way better than me, better than any hero. But you let it go to your head and became a god. But you forgot one thing due to thinking you're unstoppable and that everything belongs to you.
SUPERMAN
(Looks up at Ness in anger and pain)
What?
NESS
(Smirks)
Every God has a Kratos.
SUPERMAN
(Trying to remove the spear but can't)
You could of defeated me any time but didn't why?...
NESS
To show you the difference between me and you, I hope maybe now you can turn back to your former self.
SUPERMAN
(Watches Ness walk away)
You think you're better than me?
NESS
If you're better, then I never want to be you.
SUPERMAN
(Smirks)
You can let me live, after destroying those you care for...after what I've done to Raven?
Ness stops in his tracks...
SUPERMAN
How I made her lose hope, stripped her naked...made her call your name for help.
Ness turns around trying to hold his anger...
SUPERMAN
Oh yes she didn't tell you, right? She fought so hard to believe you was still living but I broke her, all because I guessed what you promised her. She cried out for you for help, knowing how I was going to make her mines, how I would taste her sweet nectar then impregnate her with my offspring aaaaah!
NESS
(Stabs Superman in the arm with another spear in anger)
Shut the fuck up.
SUPERMAN
Kill me Ness, you know you want to, or are you finally getting cold feet.
?
That's enough Ness.
NESS
(Calms down, turns away from Superman then walks away)
If you want death so much, look for someone else.
RAVEN
Ness?
NESS
Im o-
Ness falls to the ground...
RAVEN
Ness!
?
Don't worry he's just unconscious from exhaustion.
TOJI
(Annoyed)
It's about time you got here Batman.
BATMAN
(Puts Ness on his shoulder)
Sorry about that, we just got back from being stranded in space on a mission. Seems like we're down a hero now due Superman losing his mind.
WONDER WOMAN
(Glares at Superman while talking to Batman)
I want him thrown in prison now.
BATMAN
He will be, I make sure of that.
OLCAN
(Walks up to them)
Then we'll take the kid off your hands. Everybody else has been taken to the infirmary, as they call it.
BATMAN
(Nods as he gives Ness to Olcan and carries a quiet Superman)
You all should do the same.
WONDER WOMAN
We will, now take him away before I give him a beating not even Ness gave him.
BATMAN
(Leaves)
Duly noted
INT. ? DAY
FADE IN:
Titans Infirmary...
MARI
(Wakes up in fear)
Stay away!
ZARA
(Hugging while rubbing her back in a soothing manner)
Sis its ok, everything is ok.
MARI
(Feels her neck for the collar)
This isn't a dream right? Please tell me this isn't a dream.
MARI
Did we win?
ZARA
(Smiles)
Yep thanks to Ness.
MARI
(Looks to who Zara is pointing at)
Ness?...Ness!
ZARA
(Makes a be quiet hand sign)
Shhhh! He's sleeping, he's extremely exhausted from his training.
MARI
(Relieved)
I'm so happy Superman was lying.
ZARA
I wish you could have seen him.
CYBER RIDER
Indeed our second in command is a fierce-some threat to evil.
OLCAN
(Now in a form of an average size wolf)
Please, the kid still has a long way to go.
RA
(Now in a form of a smaller bird)
Will you put a sock in it you lazy bastard.
VICE
(Now in a form of an average size tiger)
Ugh this again, will you both be quiet if all you're going to do is miss represent us.
MARI
(Runs up to Olcan and hugs him fiercely)
You're all real I thought I was dreaming?! You're all so cute!
OLCAN
(Angry)
I am a Representation of Goddess Gaia and will...ooooooo awwww.
MARI
(Rubbing his belly)
Who's a good Representation?
OLCAN
(On his back howling in joy)
Aaaah yes mortal, this appeases me.
VICE
(Shocked thinking to himself)
This woman may be fierce-some...
RA
(Laughs)
Haha, look at the mighty Olcan reduce to a common canin...aaaaaah ooooo not that that's my favorite spot.
MARI
(Rubbing right under her neck)
Who's a good Representation?
RA
(Chirping in joy)
Damn you human...aaaah...how dare you...more to the left.
VICE
(Sees Mari looking at him)
Don't even think about it.
MARI
So who are you all of you?
CYBER RIDER
Allow me miss, they are the Representations of the Gods and Goddesses that have blessed Ness's powers. Olcan the Wolf of Gaia, Ra the Phoenix of Vulcan, and Vice the Tiger of Zeus.
MARI
Amazing, so you guys helped saved us.
VICE
No, we only follow the orders of Young Ness here.
MARI
(Toji, Raven and Wonder Woman walk in)
So, I guess my student not only surpassed me but even Superman, huh?
VICE
(Shakes his head)
No... Ness didn't surpass this Superman.
ZARA AND MARI
(Shocked)
What?!
VICE
(Looks at Raven)
You half breed, you know exactly what Ness said when referring to Superman as a God.
RAVEN
Every god has a Kratos?...what's that?
TOJI
The main character of a video game. The main dude is tricked by the god of war and ends up killing his own family. So thanks to Godly weapons, opportunities and underestimation, a human was able to kill a god.
VICE
Ness realized from the beginning he couldn't beat Superman in terms of power.
WONDER WOMAN
(Smirks)
So he used man's ego against him.
CYBER RIDER
(Smirks)
He needed a way to make Superman's denial increase to the point he wouldn't think rationally. So he thought of an hypothesis, maybe there was a way to add more powers to his current skill set. So he expanded the elements.
WONDER WOMAN
I always knew he was witty and cunning but he continues to surpass my expectations.
TOJI
He stole that idea of using he's opponents mind against them from Red Fiend. Red can't improvise as good as Ness but his strategies are still number 1.
VICE
Had Superman took Ness as someone he needed truly kill, it could've ended way differently.
RAVEN
(Looks at Ness's sleeping face thinking to herself)
Ness.
Later in Raven's room a knock is heard...
RAVEN
(Opens the door in her regular outfit to see Ness in a white tank, white sport socks, red shorts)
Ness?
NESS
(Clearly tired but gives her a smile)
Can come in...
RAVEN
(Invites him in concern)
Yes... but you need to rest, you look like you're going to pass out.
NESS
I'm fine...just glad you're ok.
RAVEN
(Panics when Ness falls on his knees right in front of her before she can stop him)
Ness?!
NESS
I'm sorry...
RAVEN
Don't apologize its o-
NESS
(Keeps his head down with his hands on the ground)
What if I ain't make it in time? He would of...just like they did before...my...not you too...Raven...I-
RAVEN
(Tears up as she can now the tears on the ground)
Ness...look at me.
NESS
(Clenches his fist in pure anger)
...
RAVEN
(Gets on her knees)
Look at me Ness.
NESS
(Looks into her eyes)
...Rav-
RAVEN
(Puts her finger to his lips)
Shhh...I'm ok, thanks to you, don't let Superman's mind games get to you. You'll never let that happen to me because I believe you'll always save me, like I'll always save you from the darkness Ness. I won't let him or anybody else take you down that path.
NESS
(Looks deep into her eyes, shocked)
You'll always save me?
RAVEN
(Hugs him)
May not be a Larson's Ritual but I'll make sure you understand that I mean that.
NESS
(Passes out)
I...
RAVEN
(Looks at Ness thinking nervously now)
He passed out...I guess I'll let a man sleep here this one time.
With that Raven proceeds to carry Ness to her bed...
Closing:
Credits
[Hook: Gunplay and (Masspike Miles)]
Got my hate up with my weight, cause niggas gon' test ya
And these bitches only with you for the fame
I'm just tryna to live ten toes on the grit
But I became a house hold name (Now I'm a house hold name)
Wanna be a rapper but they just won't let it happen
Nigga tryna trade the cage for the stage
They paid on our demises try to stop us rising
But in the process we became a house hold name
(Now I'm a house hold name)
[Verse 1: Gunplay]
Tell me why you niggas want to see me broke and dead
Don't wanna see me eating, wanna see me choke instead
And that's why my chopper be my only co-conspirator
Cocaine, coke, and Smirnoff this ain't no Smoke and Mirrors
Drunk on the road to riches in the V I'm veering off
Sleeping on the steering wheel ended up back in Miramar
I'm looking for my gift already cursed with all this curses
And with these verses I surf the Earth's surface
[Hook:}
[Verse 2: Gunplay]
I just wanna write rap songs, rock black stones
Watch craps roll, and stay off of tapped phones
I just want a clean bitch in a black thong
And just one slida rida I can bank on
I'm a legend living still ain't begged forgiveness
As I chug another Guinness, choppin' work up with the winners and the trap hoes
They try to end me from the start
Looking up to God, as I embark upon a higher plateau
[Hook:]
[Verse 3: Masspike Miles]
They try hold me back yeah they wanna see a real nigga fall
They told me life is the price and my loved ones tears was the cause
Yeah, all my real niggas feel me
Try to judge but there's nothing that defeats me
For the love of the fame
They sacrifice for a name
Cause that's the rule of the game
[Hook:]
Teen Titans
Ness…FO$T Da Writer
Zara…XxTributomxX
Cyber Rider…MediaMan18
Regina…Rosemarie Benson
Carmen…Rosemarie Benson
Red Fiend…Red Fiend
Other Characters…Me
Teen Titans- DC owned
Batman…DC
Wonder Woman…DC
Superman…DC
Marvel
Mari… XxTributomxX
Well that was a dope battle, hope y'all enjoyed, and for those thinking Ness is op now, get that notion outta your head now because he's not. I'll probably explain it in the review why when I post it so thats gonna be a spoiler warning with that. And what's up with Ness and the girls well review or pm your opinion on that. OCs still open by the way so with that I salute the peace out.
