Well that is all I wrote back then, after sending it in for review I stopped at this point. I was told to stop and I did, so if you want more of this novel speak up! I can write more, and continue what I had planned I just don't know if anyone has an interest in this. If anyone is wondering yes, I did start working on another novel by now that is similar to some extent with less sexual themes and overall content, to satisfy the bad reviews I was given by my author peer group back then.

Please write below what part did you like the most, and dislike the most! Also if this story continues it will only get more sexual, and to keep interest it will attempt every fetish, that was the plan at least.