My life revolves around the hero. Why? It's a simple reason. It's because I am what one would call a System. Was it possible for a System to have a chosen Hero they like?
Indeed. When appointed a Hero, a System can choose to stay beside that person until their last breath.
When a Hero dies before it is due, the creator deems that System unworthy. If abandoned by the hero, what happens? Well, that's obvious.
I end up in a rundown building alone.
Let me rewind to that unlucky day, even if I don't want to. It began three months ago when I was happily serving my chosen Hero, Lunen. Lunen always treated me with great care. I guess you're wondering why I sound fragile.
That's because, unlike other Systems, I was hand-held. You could say I'm a tablet of some sort. If I was normal, others would be able to see the content on the screen. But that is not the case.
But of course, I did not come here to brag. Like all my days spent with my most beloved person, Lunen didn't seem abnormal. I might even have said that he was the least abnormal one.
That is until I received a strange quest delivered to him.
Quest: The Start
Task 1: Go to the building in Gao City.
Task 2: Leave behind your least important object.
Task 3: Gain Something New
Reward: A great power
Penalty: No More Power
Even though it looked odd, I didn't think anything of it. Not even a little bit. I remember when he got together with the ones he called his comrades.
He grabbed me like usual, and together we all left the comforts of his home to drive until we reached an unfamiliar place. This place had trees all around with overgrown roots climbing the walls of the building.
"Is it here?" this was something the girl he called Yan asked.
I wasn't sure why, but I felt something was not right all of a sudden. Their demeanor and the way they acted were strange. Lunen kept gnawing at his thumbnail as if he was nervous about something.
"Stop fretting. Remember, if you do this, we can get a greater power," this came from the Uta person.
I didn't understand what was happening until it was too late. Lunen suddenly gripped me and then sat me down on a counter surface.
"The first task is to get rid of something you deem useless. We already planned on doing this. It's for the good of the world," Lunen was speaking.
He steps back after lying me down and turns away. Because I'm a system, I could not speak. I was made only to receive quests and to help the hero gain strength. But I was defective. Not because I could not help the hero grow.
It was because I had a limit to his growth. Everyone knew it, but Lunen did not abandon me. He called me his friend and refused all attempts to get rid of me. But this day was different. The words he spoke just now, I knew what he meant.
I knew the feelings of humans because I was a System with a heart. It wasn't always like this. My heart grew over time the more I spent time with Lunen.
"We have to do this. I hope you understand," Yan smirks in my direction.
Uta lays a hand on Lunen's shoulder, "That's right, it's for the best. A System with a defect can not help you grow stronger."
Those words cut deep, but it was true. Lunen looked at me with a dark expression.
There was no guilt in his eyes, "there's no need to worry about me since I never cared for it in the first place."
"Let's go because we don't have a reason to stay here anymore," Yan says while leading Lunen away.
When they were out of sight, that was the moment my heart shattered. I'd be in a puddle if I could cry tears.
Lunen, Lunen, why did you leave me? Was it to become stronger?
Why? Why? Why.
I became enclosed in darkness, and the pain I felt grew over time. I won't forgive you!
I won't forgive you! I REFUSE TO FORGIVE YOU!!
The pain I felt turned into madness.
I won't forgive you, Lunen.
My screen blackens as if it lost power. When abandoned by a hero, a system ceases to exist. Even so, my pain will continue to plague me.
I could no longer function. The world continued for years and the existence of systems began to decrease over time until they no longer existed on Earth.
A system is seen in the same spot it was left in, inside a building hidden deep in a forest. Over time, the forest grew denser and monsters from portals began to inhabit it. Earth has changed, whether it was for the better or worse but it was just the beginning to most.
chapters got reversed.
Chapters have been fixed
Is it irony I always find villains more trustworthy and people who would except me then hero would. There was story years back about magical girl getting betrayed and used by her friends, fellow magical girls ever her boyfriend, turned into magic girl villain I wish it never was removed and stopped getting updates I think it was called "I was reincarnated as magical girl villain"
I'm sorry it got removed. If you like this one, I'll do my best to not take it down. I wonder if that novel was any good. I would love to read it since it sounds interesting. I also love a good villain story where the villain wins.
@ElizaBrown21 It was maybe not perfectly they got like 30 chapter then just vanished, though couldn't verify it, I was told either got made at the story as was side project form main story but was doing better then main story, though feels like not true story but it's not impossible with how humans are at times. You can still find story looking it up I just haven't tried looking it up with past year.
@Demain_csomic_winters thanks I'll take a look. Please continue to read my novel. I would love to see how readers view what I write.
@ElizaBrown21 I tried finding it again I couldn't. I know I seen review website in it but nothings showing, it about jellyfish mc or something like that
@ElizaBrown21 I think, I found it "reborn as a magical girl villan" by Lilith Fairen. Though from brief comments on Google author is scum but least reading it for inspiration or something not all great stories have great creators. Haven't found readable chapters yet only who created it
@Demain_csomic_winters wow I see what you mean. That's too bad that it ended like this.
@ElizaBrown21 parts of me want write my own taking inspiration from it, mc was really had it bad, she was told not to tell her parents yet her rich friend apparently as allowed to do so and got their rich parents help, one of magical girls stole her boyfriend cheating behind her back and other magical girls knew and support it
they also reason mcs parents had difficulty situation I just dint remember how, magical girls cheating using their powers for selfish reasons like one bad at gymnastic used her powers to get on the team, when magical girls turned back one villains into regular civilian again they left the former villain high and dry knowing she isn't from earth but from similar world before current one, and so on.
Story didn't pull punches when MC was going to take betrayer magical girls families hostage. Though been few years so not sure how accurate it is anymore but most part should be accurate
@Demain_csomic_winters go ahead and try it. Sounds good enough. just turn it into your own, maybe add some of your own unique touch to it.
@ElizaBrown21 ooh I do I already got idea like mc is actually really old he was originally one that created heros technology best of best, when he completed his last device light goddess and his "friends" betrayed and abandoned him, not realizing how stupid that was as one with better understand of their power then even light goddess herself.
dark goddess tried to force him inti her pawn but failed completely unable to do so then joined her under his own choice. He crafts dark forces their own stuff in par with light.
Mc is completely loyal to dark goddess till she betrays him.
He is power house being able to still use his light side power with dark side able to over power both goddess at once but he doesn't. He made rule with dark goddess for every new word they attack he won't do a thing for one year before he takes action.
He is completely immune to both goddess powers as such when other "villains" get affected by magical girls power it does even scrape paint of himself.
He's taking role of wise guy and someone villains can call on, when villains break down he sits their with them giving them comfort. As reason they can be turned back into normal people after being turned into villains is their unstable nature of their minds, and as mcs iron clad mastering his emotions he gain control.
Funny enough old light side stuff MC has full control over still as they were his creations.
Dark queen is actually little sister of light goddess but was betrayed when light goddess gave her a taboo darkness fruit corrupting her into darkness being, this was cause both were candidates for the throne and after eating fruit was abandoned and exiled permanently in result never got her training as light goddess forced to create her own techniques has no idea how to do anything light goddess got.
Mc turned dark villains from scum into family helping each other from traumas that turned them into what they are.
Idea was for story that's but of something people can sympathize and heal with with people on some level understanding the pain. And just because you're a bad guy doesn't mean you're a bad guy, and even bad guys can have family too. Or something like that
This really rough idea not looking at my notes or changes I made I can't remember at the moment.
This whole thing was inspiration from the story but not copy of any form.
@Demain_csomic_winters I hope it goes well. I'll be sure to read it whenever you get some chapters in. Thank you for the great talk and for sharing your story idea with me. It's getting late here and I have posted the last chapter for tonight. I'll be back at it later on tomorrow afternoon or evening. Everyone here have a great and blessed day!
@ElizaBrown21 maybe I will most my ideas stay ideas I still trying to write but getting harder and harder I'm starting wonder if I'm getting some addition as I can't Bring my self and write chapters anymore after so many fails I never managed to get past 10 chapters before I stop for various reasons, even saying this got my heart racing. I haven't given up yet, I refuse to. For now I just write new concept and ideas till I get enough confidence again or whatever causing my problems lol. And have great night.