Announcement
skip this please this is bad
skip this please this is bad
(4 Years Pre canon start)
[David Pov]
I was just sitting in class waiting for school to end, why? So I can go home and get away from the idiots that think that being Quirklis mends anything then all of the sudden my head start to hurt a ton, a monet later I herd 4 new voice in my head then I heard some kids yell out in surprise response to something, wend I looked up I saw that 4 new people in the rome, but I had seen those people before, in a game, Revali Urbosa Mipha and Daruk looked around in comfuson
Daruk was the first to say anything “umm sorry small guys for destroying the table” saying that I realize that a desk was wrecked
Urbosa was the next to speck “would any of you know what is going on”
“Why would any of these children know what happened”
“Revali” Mipha respond to Revali insult
Well that confirms their personality are the same as the game
Then a random kid says “are you a Quirk”
Revali looks insoles but Urbosa response first “what do you mend “Quirk””
Then all hell breaks loose, but the teacher gets everyone's attention, she asks “ok whos Quirk is this?” I raise my hand. She just look at me and says “go talk with the principal and I won't cont this against you ok” I agree and head over to the principal office with the 4 and wonder how this will change my life
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Yeah you need to rework a lot of the grammar of the chapter and how the chapter flows because it stops and starts
I'm going to be very blunt, and not to be cruel. I'd suggest completely taking this down and either work on your basic English skills and/or become very familiar with Grammarly or similar tools before reposting.
(I say, as I make a mistake with my English.)
@NaoIsTheBest yes I just now had this read to me with a TTS, I need to rewrite this
did what you suggested and redid the Chapter