"Thank the Omnissiah" to be responded with, "By the God-Emperor a Tech-Priest" the to looked at each other with relief then the oh shit we're from Earth two
"Lord Commander the Chains" the Acolyte asked
"Oh yes sorry Ralof help the Acolyte with her chains" Joseph prepared with Hans for a wave attack form the Mercs
"WHAT ARE THEY DOING WITH THAT WITH MY PRISONER" some jack off yells
"Well your 'Prisoner' is really important to our Mercenary group so FUCK OFF" Hans yells back "Sir fire at will?"
"Yep we are LEAVING, Ralof how you going" Joseph ask the dumbass dicken around with the chains, "JUST FUCKEN SHOOT IT"
"Free to fire at targets" then a short burst of fire from the Ad Mechs room, "FREE WE ARE HEADING SOUTH" Yelled the acolyte
"Agreed here lets move lads" Joseph ordered, "I'll join your Reg." Acolyte said, as the 4 slowly move to leave the Guild Hall everyone not willing to fight what they still did to the Guard and the moment they got out side Hans grabbed the Acolyte and everyone ran like hell back to the woods like the VC when the Yankies find them after more than a day running the PDF took a break.
"So Lord Commander Militant may I have your Name?" the Acolyte asked Joseph
"You First Fabricator-General"
"Fair my full Name and Rank is Fabricator-General Hannah and you are?" Hannah says and Joseph Replies, "Well in that case my Name and Rank is Lord Commander Militant Joseph and Leading Officer of the Terran Old Guard"
"So why are we heading south" Joseph asked
Hannah replies "We are heading south due to it being human nations plus umm I think the elves are Hunting us with 'Summoned' great heroes but I think is some BS but knowing this world I believe that they may summon real people to fight... us with...... people from... Home." Hannah started crying and thinking that people from Earth her home will try to kill her.
"Hay hay Hannah it okay look if anyone tries to hurt my little Fabricator <Starts comfiting her by rubbing her back and hugging her> plus I need someone to fix the Toasters UCH OWWWWW Man down man down Medic." The 2 PDF laugh at their leader in respectful tones
"That makes me feel better thank you thou a good joke was needed but do you even know that I am legal?" Joseph looked at her with weird confusion and then Horror he forgot Rule 1 ask AGE he has failed
"MISSION FAILED well get them next time" Rang through Josephs head
"Look if we leave Eldar hell what would stop the Heroes from chasing us, I'm just a Fabricator-General without her Mars or her armies of Skitarii to defend her I feel unsafe and like a will die if I am attacked." Hannah voiced her main issues
"Yes I am aware Hannah look I will Guard you AS The Lord Commander Militant I have taken an Oath to Defend the Imperium of Man, I Fight in His Name, I will Protect you since you are the Voice of the Omnissiah you are my Primary Duty to protect"
with those word sheared they walk the rest of the way until the forest ended like in a straight a line on a map and his map confirmed the map shows that he was in fact about end of the Forest, "Well lads this empty land of fuck all is Human Country lets get going, Hannah stay right behind me you two take the flanks"
with the Formation set the 4 started moving into the Human country side with fuck all for Miles
"umm Joseph remember when I said I will join your Reg I got a pop up asking me if I wanted to Request enlistment into the Reg, should I join I'm unsure I can't see a High Lord being a subordinate to another."
"With that line of Logic the Ecclesiarch is our boss due to the fact he can just brand us Heretics and have us killed, not adding the fact that the masses see him as the Voice of the Emperor what he says could be made law if he just tells the people." Joseph was using a Logic loop that due to Ecclesiarch have in more then enough power to fuck over the other High Lords but don't due to laws put into place to stop that shit from happening but those around the High Lords are nearly free game.
"Wait wha OII FUCK YOU LOGIC LOOP nice try but I do see what you mean plus I guess for unit cohesion it would be best to join, Sent" Hannah said in a Tsundere tone
[High Lord of Mars would like to Enlist into the Terran Old Guard]
"Yes"
Alright. You capitalized. But did you use comma's fully? Did you forget to punctuate the Ex: "Blah blah blah"?
No. I thought you did that earlier, you said you did, XD. I'm going brain dead. Also, just say "Jackass instead of "jack off" the community will be unlikely to care much if you say curse words... "properly".
If there even are "proper" curse words... oh wait, there are.
I'm enjoying this so much
Hate it
and I look forward to
Correcting your mistakes
helping you out.
Making you brain-dead
Because I got all the time in the world to help you be successful!
Almost forgot, methinks we skipped something... Lord General? I thought he was a Junior Commisar... or junior something... I forget, you should make a glossary when you have time, I find them useful... especially when you are throwing ranks around like mad.
Now if your Confused about why Hannah and Joseph are Referring to each other the Highest Rank.
Hannah is the Fabricator-General is due to the fact if she was to Summon any member of the Cult of the Machine will call her the highest rank of the Ad Mech, the reason she called Joseph in Cp4 'Lord Commander' she had already worked through the knowledge in her mind and to an assumption on calling Lord Commander witch was correct.
Hannah's 'true' Rank is just Acolyte, but her Called Rank is Fabricator-General
Joseph's 'true' Rank is Junior Planetary Defence Force NCO, but his Called Rank is Lord Commander Militant but Joseph prefers just Commander
@Royal_Jeager but this is break day
@Royal_Jeager It was very tangled.
Either way.
@Totallyrandom their is a Glossary with Ranks and how they should work