
Author here. It's been kindly placed to my attention that honestly, this story doesn't really make much sense. There are a few things I actually regret about how I introduced the story, and especially about how I went about bringing details.
I want to go back over each chapter, possibly deleting some of them and most definitely adding towards the first timeloop; ultimately, I want to create a better story. I wish to properly plan what I want out of this story and place more attention on pacing and characters.
My thought was that it may be a little premature to delete this and create another work for the rewrite, so the changes will be on this fiction itself.
I just want to say thank you for reading so far. I hope I can make a better story for you to read.
If you had any thoughts on the story as you read, I'd appreciate hearing them in the comments.


