Amine: Hey Cheh, wake up! We’re almost there!
Cheh: Huh?
Amine: Well, you like to sleep! And you’re also super mysterious and weird!
Khaled: Yeah! I’ve never seen anyone with black hair and eyes before!
Hassan: If they bother you ignore them
Khaled: Mind your own business, you idiots!
Hassan: like an idiot he sees me in his own mirror… Not realizing that he is the notorious idiot…
Khaled: It sucks! You failed poet!
Hassan: You plebeian, you can’t understand art!
Khaled: If your poems can be called art, then my shit is a masterpiece!
Hassan: if your shit can recite worms, then yes.
No longer paying attention to the antics of these two, Cheh concentrated instead on the screen window that had just appeared in front of him;
[NEW QUEST]
[to conquer the world, the host will have to be five allies with good abilities!]
[Allies found: 0/5]
[If one of the allies dies before the end of the quest, it will cause the quest to fail]
[Reward: Monster Summoning Skill]
[Accept the quest? YES/NO]
Summoning monsters? I wonder how far it can go… I mean, does it summon a powerful monster, or an army of less powerful monsters? To have to ally with people would be boring… But summon monsters! Well ! For the sake of science and not at all because I want to look like a certain Sung Jin-Woo, I will accept this mission!
[the host agreed, time before the quest ends: 62 hours]
[Host at 61h59min58s before killing]
wait... KILL ?! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT ?!
[Failure of a quest in a timely manner results in death of host]
scam… It’s a scam…
Dude, freaking seriously????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am done, I am f***ing done!!!
Yeah, I know it's shit, actually I'm not good at writing ... But I was so bored during the confinement that I decided to create... this thing called "the darkness lord system".
Basically, this story was an idea that I had written on an old notebook that I had when I was about 10 years old. There was only the prologue. So I decided like any sane person, to create a stupid and crazy story to pass the boredom.
Boredom can really be a bit*h sometimes
but then I had fun writing it so I kept writing it, because in my life I really REALLY BORED
@gguma030 the premise is good, but the execution needs more work, like waaaaay more work! I propose to re-write it again and put yourself in the shoes of the MC! So base the character off a human being and not a machine!
@King.J.Elias may not be rewriting everything but I promise to improve myself and spend more time for it to be better (I like the opinion so don’t hesitate to give me that helps me a lot) ?
@gguma030 and maybe give the MC a Trauma and haunting nightmares because of the gruesome death of his sister, he will overcome it but not so easily, plus it would make him take this world more seriously, make the character grow and develop!