Hi, I am the author of the series 'Yandere Stories'. Currently I have written 4 parts of the story one titled "School Beauty Alina". From the title you may already know that this is a series with yandere elements, all yanderes have some thing in common like they are violent, obsessive and don't shy away from murdering. Enough with the introduction, Lets get to the business part. I want to finish the first story in 1 or 2 more parts but I don't want it to finish this story in typical yandere fashion. I want to have some twist ending for the first story, I want suggestions from you on possible endings for the first story of my series. It's not that I have no idea regarding ending but I believe in collective minds so I am asking help from my readers.
If you want to propose any interesting ending to the story one then please comment in the comment box and you can also DM me your ideas.
These series is not going to stop, there will be story two, three and so on thereafter.
Thank you for your time.
Maybe Jennifer could be a yandere too or maybe a conspirator for Alina's plans.
interesting
Another Author of A Yandere
Yandere lovers sticks together
Kinda want to see him escape and fast forward a couple of years to see her again.
Seeing her again, sounds good.
At this point, I'm just waiting for Jaret's just desserts
It would be nice if Jaret reflected on how at the same time Alina is a psycho, him being a terrible boyfriend was part of the reason things went downhill(she could even use it to guilt him into accepting her).
From the story goes based from what i read the Alina is planning ahead of mc's future and mc is currently hanging out with Jennifer? I am correct? So why don't you use it the character personality to make a twisted events for example based of Alina is more planning type of girl what if you the arthor make a twisted events in the story to make it interesting for example what if you make Alina is the mastermind of certain events or make a new female lead just to be a mastermind (if you put it mostly yandere is commonly know that mc knows yandere lead do some dark side but i wouldn't like to be to read like that i prefer to read a story leaving few clues behind little by little like a Easter Eggs to the YANDERE Lead what's she been doing) you can make it dark or too dark based on your taste. If i was an author I'll explain the origin why the yandere lead A.K.A. Alina is became a yandere or not and explains why she became like that in the first place. By the way the mc doesn't shines in the story because do you know what he's lacking? The answer is supporting character if i was a supporting character i rather be a friend of mc maybe closer a best friend that i always react to mc's worries and gives a lot of jokes around mc to cheer him up ( if you want a suggestion i rather want you to personal message me in the scribblehub than in this chapter comment section because i don't want to spoil some event i have in mind to be honest i dont want to spoil it too to the readers because it will have negative impact but its your decision anyways and I'm not an author to begin with but a reader wants to read) i read a lot of books to be honest and stories I'm looking forward to read your novel.
By the way.. I'm not an author to begin with i just an reader and nobody.
make mc is yandere too, just to kill the other
That would be ruining the story.
From the story progressing i rather suggest it in the next volume or next story..
A polygamous relationship with jennifer. Alina understands that he loves both of them and for the shake of his happiness decide to accept her, even if it means to kidnap her.
Second option, his parents are very supportive and Alina is nice to them so they sorta "sell" him to her at the end.