I twirled in the mirror as I checked my appearance from left and right.
I looked mature in my baby blue cardigan, white camisole, and crème white skirt that goes past my knees as I spun around. I couldn’t think of a different hairstyle, so I decided to curl mine a bit more to make it wavier. With a light touch of makeup, just enough to glow a tad bit and not overdo it, I could confidently say I looked my best today.
When I stepped out of my room, I instantly grew self-conscious, and I checked my reflection in my handheld mirror. My hair looked a bit disheveled already as if it had a mind of its own and wanted to ruin my first impression out of ill-will.
“Onee-san?”
I gasped as I turned around and spotted my little flower. She was in sweats and a white shirt she likely slept in. In the complete opposite of me, she looked like a lazy mess as she relaxed on her weekend.
“Ah…are you going somewhere?”
I certainly didn’t want to make this a big ordeal so I thought about the best way to respond the previous night. Now to execute my plan, I told her my story…
“A friend I met at work asked me to come out with her today. So, I’m going to be with them and just hang out.”
The last thing I really needed right now is the confusion that I’m going on a date right now.
“Is it a date, Onee-chan?!”
Hana-chan cried as she pushed me, causing me to nearly fall over. It seems she saw right through me and came to the right conclusion. That was a colossal failure.
“Why didn’t you tell me, Onee-san?! Who is it?!”
What was I supposed to say? That I was going on a date with my parents’ boss? I had to calm the situation, so I quieted her down with a pat on her head.
“That’s enough, Hana-chan. I told you, it’s just a person from work that asked me to go out with them…and I’m taking them up on their offer.”
She rubbed her messy hair and crossed her arms. After a brief pause, she looked back at me a bit warily.
“Hey…you’re not just doing this to try and forget about…mom, right? Like…you’re not going on with this person…because you don’t want to think about…your…ah…feelings?”
I had to look inside before I answered that. Was it true that this was just an escape from Mari-san? It was...but it wasn’t all in the same. I did want to move past my coma and all that I lost. I certainly wanted to…forget about Mari-san romantically so our family would be happy. But Saitou-san was a wonderful person who at least deserved to have a date and show me what she’s made of. So, with confidence, I shook my head in disagreement.
“No, Hana-chan. I’m not doing this just to forget about Mari-san. I…feel a great deal about her, your mom…but this person…is nice. I…I’m actually excited to have a date with them.”
She looked a bit skeptical at first but seemingly gave in as she shrugged her small shoulders.
“I’m not good at this kind of thing…but there’s one thing I want you to do for me, Onee-chan…”
“Hm, what is it, Hana-chan?”
“You open your heart to this person. Right now, you don’t think about anything besides them, Onee-chan. They…deserve that...I think.”
What she was asking was the right thing to do. I…had planned to do that very same thing. Right now wasn’t a time to compare her to Mari-san. Saitou-san was a completely different person to who I was attracted physically. So, I decided that I’d give her a chance emotionally too.
“Sure, I promise, Hana-chan.”
“A-And Onee-chan…before you go…”
“Oh, what is it?”
She came up to me, held me tight, and spoke with force.
“If things don’t work out…ah…know that…I’m here to protect your…heart. Alright, Onee-chan?…So…I…”
She looked a little flustered, and I wasn’t sure what she was saying, though. But I hated seeing my little sister struggle to get something out this painfully. Instead, I pet her on the head and comforted her.
“Don’t worry, it’ll be okay, Hana-chan.”
“Oh…ah…yeah.”
I still wasn’t sure what she was actually saying, but what was certain was Hana-chan was worried about things. She…is the last person I want to have to worry about anything.
“Have fun today…see you later.”
She bounced her way back into her room, likely to go play games or read more manga. I’m sure she had a lot on her mind also, and I silently hoped she could at least spend this weekend to relax.
When I made my way down the steps, mom was at the door. In her hand was a bunch of papers that looked like bills. She looked through them in a seeming daze as I hit the last step.
“Oh, hey, mom.”
“Oh…Madoka. Where are you heading, looking so nice?”
“A friend invited me to a day out. So…I’ll be gone all day with them.”
She looked me up and down and gave me a charming smile. When she showed that expression it always lit up my world. It was calm and relaxing, a look I haven’t seen on her recently.
“Hm, you really are maturing, aren’t you Madoka. You look nice, sweetheart.”
“Eh, where is this coming from mom?”
She seemed a bit more relaxed today as she approached me. She placed her hand on my head and pet me gently. I didn’t feel as mature as she made me out to be with her doing something like this. A testament to how tall she is.
“I’m just…realizing how old you are. You’re responsible and have your own life now, don’t you?”
Just hearing her say that made me that much more excited. I literally jumped at the thought that I was, in her eyes, more mature.
“It’s thanks to you that…I’m able to try and be more mature. So... thank you, mom…”
I closed my eyes as I felt her fingers caress my head. This brought me back to a time before my confusion with all of this. When it was just me and mom. Looking back…I felt like I was slowly becoming a different person. Unlike the selfish kid from before my coma. And mom acknowledging that was a testament to that.
“Where’s Mari-san?”
She took a deep breath like I just sucked all the air out of her by asking. I might have actually, thinking about the question more clearly now.
“She’s doing some last-minute work with Yashiro. So, it’s going to be just Hana and me today. I might make her watch a movie with me or something.”
Mom giggled at the idea. Before I could say anything she started walking up the steps.
“I’d like to spend more time with Hana! Hana, come here! Hana!”
Mom began her hunt for the dove. Now that I thought about it, I can’t recall the last time those two watched a movie together. That might be for the best that they spend some quality time together.
Knowing that Mari-san was likely gone for the day made me a little upset. I wanted to chat with Mari-san about what I was doing, so I called her phone when I made my way outside. The day was cold, and it looked like it was going to rain soon. So, I took an umbrella just in case.
“Madoka-san?”
“Oh…Mari-san. I…wanted to chat with you before I left today, but…you were gone when I woke up.”
“Madoka-san…Hm…I take it you’re going on a date today?”
“Huh? H-How did you know?”
“Saitou-bucho kept going on about a date she had on Sunday. She usually talked about her dates. She’s…a little open about her love life sometimes. I…figured it might actually be you, but you were being considerate enough to not tell me.”
Her tone was a bit low. Mari-san read into me that well to know that I was keeping something like that to myself. It went to show me how closely Mari-san actually watches me and made me feel…like I was going behind her back despite us not being in a…relationship like that.
“Yeah…sorry for not telling you.”
“No, I assumed you were worried about it. Ah…just promise me you make sure to take your time…don’t rush everything.”
I could hear her come to a stop as she opened her car door. I think she finally made her way to Yashiro’s apartment or something.
“I won’t rush, Mari-san. It’s…just going to be a day for us to get to know one another.”
“Yeah…I’m sure it is. But…as a parental figure right now…even though you both are women…sex changes a lot in relationships.”
The blood in my body began to boil. To think the first person to have this kind of chat with me would be…Mari-san. She sounded like a true mother, but her voice was a bit shaky. Of course, it would be…Mari-san…still loved me.
“I…understand, Mari-san. It’s just a date. I’ll take it slow and make sure she doesn’t pressure me into doing something I’d rather not on the first date.”
I could hear her take a sigh of relief. I…couldn’t imagine how painful this might actually be for her. As if I was cutting her…but I needed to do this. Not just to move on from Mari-san…but to help her move on from me too.
“…Good. I hope you have an amazing day. Also, make sure you mention those concert tickets to her when you get the chance.”
Suddenly, she brought back up the idol tickets. I was slightly confused, but I let it go as I nodded to myself. No matter how you looked at it…this conversation was nothing short of awkward.
“…Bye, Mari-san...”
“Yeah…”
That last word felt like it stabbed my heart as we hung up. I looked at my phone and instantly began to regret telling her. But now wasn’t the time for that. I promised to refocus my mind and give Saitou-san my full attention. Today wasn’t a day for anyone else…besides me and her.
Earlier last night, we texted about where we’d meet one another.
I promised I’d meet her at the park near my house. So, I made my way there. The sky was cloudy like usual and looked as if it was going to rain. There was nothing I could do about that, so I held my umbrella close. I just hoped it wouldn't rain while we were out.
Curiously, I thought about what we’d do on this date. Was it going to be dinner and a movie? Or something similar like in a romance movie. My feet continued to walk as I thought about Risa more in-depth now. Why did she choose me out of all the other girls in the world?
“What made me special?”
I questioned. I’m sure I wasn’t the first girl who looked at her butt. Was it seriously because of her fate reading from Saya-san that she’s going all-in on me? I don’t actually know what attracts her to me. Maybe Mari-san was right…I don’t know too much about the person I agreed to go on a date with, and I should take it...slow.
That would be my goal then. To make sure I get to know the overly flirty, rich, popular, Saitou Risa-san and understand what I have to offer her and why I’m special to her.
“I promise I’ll put my all into understanding her today.”
With that conviction driving me forwards, I made my way to the park with haste. The pavement was harsh, but I stood my ground and kept moving with vigor.
When I made my way to the park, Saitou-san was waiting patiently, sitting outside of her car with her arms crossed. When I saw her burgundy hair blow in the wind, the scene was so remarkable that she captured me as her model-like figure drew me in.
She was in a bright red coat that flowed down along with her black dress.
Her bands were adjusted to have a curlier style that caught me off guard.
Like I was looking at a picture made by Hokusai, she amazed me just by standing there.
She looked so mature and vibrant that it made my heart slam into my chest.
Now I began to be self-conscious again. I took out my mirror and instantly regretted not fixing my hair into a different style. All I did was curl my hair a little bit more to my liking. It was simple, and I wouldn’t mess it up. Despite how I sounded, it was the first date in my head, or the first date in my memory, at least. The last thing I wanted was to look stupid…
“How…should I approach her?”
I thought about it. Should I just come in and see her, give her a cute wave as I walked in. Or maybe I should act like I don’t see her and wait for her to call me out? Before I knew it…I was coming up with all these scenarios when…
“Madoka-san! Are you going to stay over there and keep me waiting?”
I was exposed due to my carelessness.
“H-Hello, Saitou-san!”
“Madoka-san!”
She rushed up to me, grabbed me into her long arms, and pulled me closer to her. Her breast pushed up against my sides as her curvy body melted with mine. She…felt nice to hold.
“Thanks for agreeing to come with me. I plan to treat you like a queen today!”
She announced as she took a deep breath, calmed herself down, and opened the passenger door for me.
“Thank you, please take good care of me.”
“Hey…you’re not just doing this to try and forget about…mom, right? Like…you’re not going on with this person…because you don’t want to think about…your…ah…feelings?”
At first, I thought "Woah, Hana ships Madoka x Mari" but no. I'm now convinced Hana is contemplating emulating Sophia 'saving' Linda. Exciting!
And oh dearie me, I want to overanalyze that phone conversation between Madoka & Mari (and also Ayumi's behavior), but I think I should wait until part 4/4.
Overanalyze it! Do it!
Hana certainly loves Madoka. We're just unsure of the level of that love right now.
I promised some more overanalysis. Let's begin!
1) Ayumi knows or suspects that Mari x Madoka is a thing. (Because she smelled Madoka on Mari shortly before their relationship went to shit. So she was certainly bound to overanalyze things herself and probably drew the correct conclusions given how blase Mari was about the whole 'my Madoka' thing.) So when Madoka asked where Mari was, Ayumi was immediately filled with visions of Madoka going out with Mari on a date. Intellectually, she knows that Mari is busy with Yashiro so her fears won't be realized, but that doesn't silence the demons in her heart. Instead she turns to Hana, but I don't know why. My wild guess is that she's reaching out in a hurry to get closer to her step-daughter during the limited time while she still can.
If we go down the Ayumi x Mary rabbit-hole, Ayumi has these fears because she's projecting her own infidelity (emotional or otherwise) onto Mari. Hearing Madoka ask about her only drove that home. Because for their brief conversation, Madoka was evasive and then immediately asked about Mari, as if Ayumi were a rival when she wasn't mother. ~Eeek!~ A little too far-fetched methinks. Continuing!
2) Mari is jealous! For a woman living as far under the surface as Mari, the low tone for "considerate enough not to tell me" could be biting. It's a delicate guilt trip reprimand hidden under diplomatic speech. Madoka catches onto that fact, feeling like "she was going behind Mari's back" and apologizes. But Madoka attributes that to her own feelings and not Mari's delicate guilt trip. That line was so cold and manipulative.
Mari is completely choked up by the thought of Madoka having s*x with someone else. She barely managed to choke out her warning/admonishment, and Madoka picked up on it. She knows that Mari still loves her, but only sees the pain. She doesn't pick up on the undercurrent that Mari wants to be in Saitou-bucho's shoes, especially in taking Madoka to a hotel. Mari is practically screaming 'date me, f*ck me instead,' but Madoka isn't listening.
3) Madoka is repressing. She is desperately trying to love Saitou to get over Mari, so she is deliberately keeping her mind out of the gutter when it comes to Mari. Madoka has unilaterally decided that Mari x herself will never work. So she is keeping her thoughts sliding around anything resembling a discreet invitation to avoid hurting herself and the family. Prior to their one night of snogging, Madoka would have been more attentive to the signs (like at the park).
4) "Our Future" really messed Mari up. She was offered the love she wanted only to have it snatched away. Closure for Madoka awakened feelings in Mari that she is still struggling to quell. She is going to have to go in to work every day with the knowledge that her boss is dating her beloved. I am impressed by how much she managed to keep bottled up in this call. Those ellipses were delicate.
@RoseButter These are some fantastic theories! Thank you for sharing them. The 2nd one seems the most logical knowing that Mari-san is a jealous person. I can't say much but I freaking love this post!
Oh my attacking from start~ Saitou shows her boldness again, Date is looking promising (≧▽≦)
Thanks for the chapter 🤠
She's been compared to a lion before! Madoka is the meat she's on the hunt for. No backing down now!
Thank you for reading!~
Poor Mari.. Cerebrally repressing feelings for something you decided is gonna backfire so hard.. Madoka tries to be gappy but is spreading hurt.
Risa is really like hurricane. An unstoppable force of nature
I just love the fact that her forehead is still so big, you can play tic-tac-toe on it. But in all seriousness, she's hard to beat when it comes to being absolutely stunning!
Yeah, you can tell Mari-san is doing her best to stay happy for Madoka's sake but her facade is breaking as the days go on. Madoka is hoping everything will magically change as she distances herself but life isn't that simple. I feel for both of them.
“If things don’t work out…ah…know that…I’m here to protect your…heart. Alright, Onee-chan?…So…I…”
ahhhh I need to know how she was going to finish that sentence!! It made me think Hana was getting in on team "attracted to Madoka."
I'm not going to lie, when I made that picture, I was thinking..."Hana-chan looks so much like Mari-san right now...I can see Madoka and her slowly becoming a couple of things around them don't work out."
I guess we'll have to know what Hana means by "protect your heart." Could it mean she'll step in and take her romantically, or maybe help her find a romantic partner at the cost of anything to make her happy? Hana is clearly being vague with her meaning and right now it showed that what she was going to say was a struggle to her.
We know from the past that she doesn't understand those kinds of feelings. Like in The Field Trip Reunion she came to the conclusion that she "liked" Sora but wasn't sure if it was that kind of way or not. Hana is emotionally immature so she might not even know what she wants to do in order to "protect Madoka's heart."
I guess the future will tell us what's going on in her little head. Remember, she's been witnessing more sides to her beloved Onee-chan lately. It's hard to see what others are thinking because the perspective is in Madoka. All we can do is guess.
@Yairy Yeah she was struggling to get the words out that she wanted to say... Made me think of Sophia trying to protect Linda's heart!
@Emilovesdoubles Madoka did recently tell Hana about what happened between Linda and Sophia. A lot is changing in her feelings right now.
@Emilovesdoubles Same! I also drew a Hana - Sophia connection.
@RoseButter