the person who finally broke the silence was the queen
"interesting if my memory serves me right I believe that blood rings are a sign of a warlock class job isn't that right your holiness pope Albert"
"yes your majesty and six rings as well if the old records are true that will mean he is of the same rank of the hero-king"
"What is your name young man " asks the pope
jack "
sir jack do you mind reviling what your job is" asks the pope
no, I would like to keep such information to my self "
a shame" says the pope seemingly unbothered
"with that, we conclude the summoning ceremony, heroes please rest in the rooms prepared for you"
after that 8 servants entered the room 4 butlers and 4 maids
one of each stands next to one of us
follow me sir to your room" says the butler
following the butler out of the room, Jack looks around in the decorated corridors
one thing for sure this world has some beautiful corridors
feeling amused at such thoughts jack continues walking through the corridors
jack starts to think about what he is going to do in this world
I want to have fun
and this world seems incredibly interesting
but I doubt the evil god will leave me be
and this ring is incredibly suspicious
I think I can get rid of it by ripping this finger off
so will I be free then?
no, I don't think so, he isn't a fool
huh let's see <appraisal: ex> / {Evil gods ring }>
name: [dragon gods contract]
[description]: a ring made out of the dragon gods scale signifying a pact between the wearer and the dragon
[contract details]: the dragon god will give a chance to live a free life within the world of ordata
in exchange, the dragon asks for the elimination of the heroes
the removal of the ring intentionally by the wearer will result in breaking the contract and a penalty of infinite suffering
if the contract is violated by either side will result in infinite suffering as a penalty to the offending side
[properties]< indestructible> <works as a path of telepathy between the wearer and the evil dragon god> <works as a storage accessible by the wearer and the evil dragon god>
huh this isn't half bad
so the heroes must die or I suffer and I don't know about you but ...... I don't want to
well let's kill them then like sorry but you gotta do what you gotta do
but how tho
I mean I can properly kill them now while they are still weak but the goddess may interfere
<oi do you have a place the goddess cannot interfere in
<o so you are finally thinking productively
<cut the sass
<ya I have a plan
<do tell
<i am sitting up a dungeon for you near the capital
<inside the goddess can't see shit I will send out a young dragon
<have him get wounded and running into the dungeon
<and you lure the heroes in and make the kill how does it sound
<good how long do I have to prepare
<a month from now how does it sound
<gonna have to make it count
finally arriving in front of a room the maid and butler stand on either side of the door and open the door for me behind the door is the most luxurious room I have seen it has everything
a canopy bed with golden leaf design
three couches surrounding a table
and two doors one a dressing room
the other is a bathroom "sir the bath is ready"
just what I need
"then I will be going now "
"of course sir "
2 hours later
that was heaven
lying next to him on the bead is another maid completely exhausted
time for some actual sleep
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next day
waking up I see the ceiling of the room
it's a panting
well let's get the show on the road
"status"
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name: Jack Jefferson/ job: hells harbinger level:1
vit:400=> vitality
str:550=> strength
ag: 350= >agility
def:500=> defense
mag:400=> magic
magre: 400=> magic resistance
job skills :{<???> <hell magic><war demon><summon spirit: demon><soul steal>}
hero skills:{ Skill: <XP*100> <learning *100> <appraisal : ex>}
unique skill: {<absorb>}
========================================================================<=how strong is it
<+new born dragon
and then a nock on the door
what do you guys think are the numbers balanced
What does absorb do?
A proofreader would really help here the lack of periods, or punctuation, or capitals can make it hard to look at. For example, I on its own is always capitalized as it is referring to oneself. on top of that exclamation marks ! and question marks ? are important. As an example, if your trying to make the evil dragon god sound sassy adding a question mark can help the reader better interpret how the line would sound.
first of all good morning, I am sorry to tell you that currently, I am focused on writing sage of glass: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/181079/sage-of-glass/ but if you like this story know that it is being reworked
@jokei that is great, have a great day.
Blob Nutrual
Mb absorb ring?
Wdym?
@jokei what?
@Furude what do you mean?
@jokei I mean he can absorb ring to escape evil god no one say that he is able to absorb only bodies.
@Furude yeah and technicly its made of dragon skin so he should be able to absorb it
@BRUH123 well that be braking the contract and will result in infinite suffering
@jokei
There's nothing in the contract about removing the ring and it will be inside of him so I guess you could say he was wearing it in some sense
@BRUH123 okay rn you are reading the future man i want my allseeing readers to not spoil it for the mortals of us
@jokei so I'm right?
@BRUH123 well kinda there will be a twist