
We woke not long after due to a persistent knocking on the door. I slipped out from under the sheets, still half-asleep, and opened the door. Thanks to my perception bubble, I’d known it was Hera and an unknown silver-haired woman.
“Hey, Lady Hera. This Alfia?” He commented while yawning and blinking the sleep from his eyes. Hera looked me up and down and sighed.
“Morgan, child, put some clothes on.”
“Hm? Oh, shit, sorry.” I woke up quickly when I realised I just flashed the goddess and Alfia. I left the door open because it hardly mattered now and went over to the pile of armour for the clothes I was wearing under it. I quickly wrangled my trousers on and turned back to the guests. “Sorry about that. Was half-asleep. Uh, want me to heal you now?”
“How noisy. Do it already you noisy person.” Alfia was clearly annoyed by me. I decided to ignore that and just heal her quickly.
I looked right at her soul and noticed something rather odd. The curse was wrapped around her soul like I saw previously but now I had a better view I could see that there were cracks in her soul which some strands of the curse had hooked themselves into. Before anything else I removed the curse, gently pulling it away from Alfia’s soul and, when it tried to latch onto my soul, destroyed it.
“Alright, the curse is gone. Do you want me to heal the cracks in your soul?” While she was staring at me with an expression of pure shock I got to work fixing the physical ‘disease’ that the curse had caused. Despite the Falna’s enhancement, she was far weaker than she should have been. I could fix that to an extent and I did.
“Yes, please heal her soul Morgan.” Hera eventually answered for Alfia who seemed to have been shocked into silence-hah, get it?-and I did so, getting a feel for her soul and gently fixing the surprisingly extensive damage. From what I could tell it was likely damage from the backlash of using a spell too powerful for her to control. After giving her one more look-over to make sure I didn’t miss any damage, I pulled back my perception.
“Alright, I fixed all the damage but you’ll want to eat a bit more for the next few weeks and if you can, maintain a light exercise routine. It’ll help you get back to where you should be. Oh, and you shouldn’t use spells to powerful for you to control. The backlash of whatever you used almost shattered your soul.”
“Thank you child. Please visit Meteria before you leave and give her a checkup.”
“Sure thing Lady Hera.”
“Come along Alfia. We’re going to visit your sister.”
“Ah. Okay.” Alfia was moving robotically with completely unfocussed eyes. It seemed she was in shock. Just to be sure, I gave her one last look but nothing was wrong. Maybe she was just surprised to be healed?
“Mmfh, Morgan what time is it.” I looked out the window and the shadows were growing long.
“Late afternoon, Tsubaki. Come on, wake up. We don’t want Hephaestus to worry.”
“Ugh. Fine.” She got out of the bed, her naked form exquisite as ever. I suppressed my body’s reaction to the sight and continued getting dressed, knowing that if I didn’t, we wouldn’t leave for another few hours at least. Damn my overly horny new body. My sex drive wasn’t half as strong as this Before.
We need to visit Meteria on our way out as well. I wonder if anything had changed since I healed Alfia.
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Time-skip: Grind down at the Under Resort to get to Level 2 Votes: 22 62.9%
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Time-skip: Something else... leave a comment. Votes: 0 0.0%
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Slice-of-life: Meet the Miach Familia Votes: 7 20.0%
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Slice-of-life: Meet the newly descended friend of Hephaestus, Astraea Votes: 20 57.1%
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Slice-of-life: Have Hestia descend early. Votes: 2 5.7%
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Slice-of-life: Something else... leave a comment. Votes: 1 2.9%
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Combat! Fight something! Anything! Votes: 4 11.4%
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Introduce a rival familia? Votes: 3 8.6%
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Kick the entire Morgan, Tsubaki and Hephaestus into a different fandom... leave a comment. Votes: 1 2.9%
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All of the above... which isn't really helpful but whatever. Votes: 0 0.0%
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None of the above... leave a comment. Votes: 0 0.0%



In some ways I'm surprised by how the poll is going; I expected at least one person to vote for Hestia (not that my Hestia would be anything like the Hestia from Canon) lol. I am kind of glad it isn't a popular option because I know someone would go off at me for making her a big-sister kind of character, rather than the highly fetishised version of Hestia canon uses. She would not be a harem member candidate; she made it through the entirety of Greek mythology and came out the other side a virgin. Her domain is familial love, not romantic or sexual. Of home and hearth. Not the child that was canon Hestia.
Sorry for the rant but Hestia is like, my favourite Greek Goddess, and she was done so dirty. Ugh.
Anyway.
So far there's lots of love for Astraea and lots of people want them to grind to level 2. Miach is a close second to those. Unless there is a significant change in the composition of the vote, that's likely what's going to happen.
If you want more details, check out my other comments, though if anyone has any opinions on what canon Astraea was like (if only for reference) that would be appreciated.
Thank you for reading!
Dude plz update this story i have been waiting for months come on man
Sorry man, I haven't actually got any more written. I'll try and do some more but most of my time writing is spent on an original fic.
Please keep in mind that I started writing this fanfic as a writing exercise (never expecting it to be at all popular, never mind the fact that this chapter has 1.5k views what the f*ck?!) and chose the fandom after reading a danmachi fanfic because the world sounded interesting... despite knowing very little about the fandom. Fast forward to after I started posting, I did more research on the fandom and... the antagonists available are shit. So I pivoted to a more slice-of-life focus. Then life happened, I lost focus, started a new (original) thing... and forgot about this. Sorry. ADHD is a bit*h like that.
Again, I'll try to get some more done for this but I'll need to reread it first cause I've forgotten just about everything and I don't even have concise notes due to this being a free-write (no plan at all).
Edit: I reread the first couple of chapters and dear god, it's bad. Like, rewrite the entire thing before continuing, kind of bad. Because it's basically a power-trip, wish fulfilment, horny free-write. Like, so much unnecessary horny.
So, yeah. Maybe just treat it as dropped so if something new comes it's a pleasant surprise?
I do feel bad at leaving people hanging but... well. I can't see myself continuing this without a full overhaul, bring it up to standard.
I'mma change the story status to hiatus. Best to not get people's hopes up.
Edit2: Nvm. Status is already hiatus. did I do that?
Is he dead?
No, not dead just avoiding life as best I can. She has a mean right hook.
Do you have a update schedule for this novel?
I did... then life got in the way. I'll try to get some of this done soon but for now, there's no schedule. Sorry. Hell, I'm responding on my phone because the bloody cyclone knocked the power out.
Stay safe everyone (especially my fellow east-coast Australians).
@__ApatheticSoverign__ Sorry to hear that
TFTC
TFR
maybe also slot it in, alfia's reaction/feelings to being healed (mostly out of bias since alfia is my fav char lol)
i'd def like to see freya's reaction to the mc soul
and meeting the miach family
I'll see what I can do about Alfia. Maybe an interlude? We'll see.
As for Freya's reaction... 'Oh, my Odr!'
Morgan: Oh, hell no!
Time to slap a bit*h.
Meeting Miach's familia does seem to be a popular choice.
Thanks for reading!
Remember not to take the MC too fast to level 2, because I don't know how Zeus is right now and he may be very interested in our MC or Freya and try to steal him from Hephesto, and if you want him to reach level 2, leave him for 1 year or so, and you can also include interactions with other families, but also, how the family develops (you can say that because he is making armor, weapons, etc. he couldn't level up that fast) but what you can do so that he doesn't stay behind in the story or something like that, (the MC realized that because he is in a non-assault family "always go down to the dungeon" a time limit will be set for promotion for each level per year, until level 5, from there it will be more difficult but since there is time you can take your time)
Eh, as far as Freya is concerned, she's not really a large problem since Morgan's immune to mind control so even if she forces him into her familia with a war game, he'd go 100% malicious compliance, sabotaging everything he can get his hands on (and she can't mind-control him into anything).
As for Zeus, I haven't yet decided how to handle him. He'd probably be fine with simply getting a member of his familia in their party as a way to keep an eye on the new kid with a lot of potential. He's already been shown to be throwing work Hephaestus' way so he's currently a nominal ally.
Another thing, as far as I'm concerned, Zeus and Hera have definitely developed levelling to an art form (after a thousand years) and can likely get their kids to level 2 within a couple of months. So as long as he doesn't go too fast he'd just be a skilled and lucky guy. Maybe 6 months +-1 or 2.
Though, keep in mind that the MC has a Growth Boosting skill. And has a doubled stat limit. So if he went for full stats before every level, he'd have the stats of a level 10 at level 5. So yeah, from that point of view, I could definitely let him take it slow.
Though it's likely someone would notice the 'Level 5' that's capable of kicking around level 7's and 8's.
Thanks for the feedback!
Oh, and as for the Under Resort grinding option, that'd likely be with Rose playing oversight. I.e. fighting against monsters way stronger than them (they're low to medium level 1's right now), being bailed out right before they're killed, healed, and thrown back to the monsters. It would be an incredibly effective way to grind for excelia because excelia increases when you are pushed to your limit.
If they shared the method they were using to grind, people would probably call them crazy idiots and assume that was the sole reason for their massive growth.
Well, that and some of the other big familia hiring him to act as healer for their soon-to-be-traumatised kids.
@__ApatheticSoverign__ Yes, but imagine if Freya says she loves him and starts bothering the family in everything or even killing the family members (she's a little crazy). Also remember that many gods when they descend see this as a game (you care about the feelings of a toy?) well that could be Zeus before he realizes everything when his family is gone and he was expelled from Orario or the other strong families in Orario.
@Houyi Hmm. Well, he's made an ally in Hera which should be enough to keep Zeus in check, and Hera and Freya hate each other so if Freya starts bothering them, Hera would likely step in there as well. I suppose the slice of life stuff is handy for building alliances and such. If they ally with Miach and Astraea and Hera, etc., they should be fine.
But yes, those a definite concerns. Maybe I could set Freya up as an antagonist...