Soon after the vines pierce into Deiqheyd's face and drain everything that physically made him within a couple seconds. The process was like watching a healthy human body mummify and breaking down into dust within 4 seconds. Then a transparent grey mist unseen by regular mortal eyes began to dissipate into the air, yet before long the green vines also move to encase it in a flash.
"Your karma is not done being written off, enjoy being imprisoned as a bodiless soul." The vines then retract back into the tall figure's arm after absorbing the dust particle of what was once Deiqheyd.
"Don't think I forgot about you." The transformed Yao Zi with Shimmy taken over control of the body, soon appear instantly next to the crawling Schet. Sending another waves of vines into his body, giving him the same fate as his partner.
'God Rank Scan' Using the chance now while he was still in a powerful form, Shimmy sent out a dome force field faster than the speed of light to over 10 thousand kilometers. That light soon cover continent of Thevutania within 2 seconds, causing many old masters to sense a dreadful being eyeing them. None of the old masters dare to move or retaliate for their audacity, as that light scan over them already tell them that they're no match for the owner of that light.
After getting a map of his location, Shimmy then waved one of arm out sending the door to the room flying high into the sky.
Outside in the Yao Matriarch courtyard
Everyone was in a state of panic as they were scared that an ancient beast from the ruin age has woken up in their proximity due to the strong mental burst. Except only Yao Li's eyes was still focused at her room, still using every fiber in her body to crawl one inch closer.
A couple seconds past after the initial fright, everyone was starting to calm down now as the pressure seem to have disappear. Yet before they could even focus back on their current situation, a bright light flashed in everyone's sight. Even those who can sleep through natural disasters woke up from the cold chill that came from that green light. Mysteriously, as if planned, everyone who was scanned could tell which direction that light was coming from. For those living in Sunrise City, they all knew the direction the light came from was the Yao Clan complex.
As the brightness faded away, everyone notice the appearance of a new person standing right in the center of the courtyard with the 3 Yao family gather together. The Yao Matriarch was still on the ground with her sight looking towards the open room, while both Yao Bai and Yao Shi were kneeling on the ground due to losing the tension in their body.
'Symbiote Seed + Life Essence' Shimmy shot 3 green light into all 3 of them. Shocking all of their surrounding enemies as the 3 Yao family wounds began healing rapidly in their eyes. Soon all 3 of them were starting to breathe normally again.
Nodding at its accomplishment, Shimmy shifts his attention back to the surrounding forces around it. All of them held their weapons tightly as they saw the new person literally healed their detested opponents with just a few flicks of his hand.
'Gulped" Some of the Chen clansman swallow hard as sweat starting pouring down on many of them. Just the mere presence of the new person standing there in a foreign cross armor plate with cloth put so much pressure in their mind.
"Apologies if we somehow disrespected you senior, but this is a issue involving those in this city. If your esteem Master cou-" *Cough* Before the Chen Patriarch Chen Zhou could even finish saying an excuse, a green gauntlet was already digging deep in his gut without piercing it. Sending him crashing through the courtyard wall, his condition of living unknown.
"All who attack my student's home shall be shown no quarters." The low octave eerie voice vibrated throughout the city of Sunrise city as if a disgusting creeper bug has slithered with cold claws into their ears.
Shimmy's image then appeared in the center of the group of traitors that fought against Yao Bai. Shimmy fist started flying out in rapid barrage against each of them. Green armor gauntlet smashing towards non vital areas to make sure they survive long enough to take even more beatings. For every two fist Shimmy threw, a third one would specially aim to crack their joints in their body.
*PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH!*
*SMASH*
*PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH!*
*CRASH*
*PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH! PUNCH!*
*CRUNCH*
Each flying fist breaking past the sound barrier multiple of times, Shimmy fist sent them all flying into the air. The Chen Ancestor was already raging from seeing his son Chen Zhou being assaulted while trying to be reasonable with this unknown expert. Chen Hao turn his head around just to see the his clansmen and hired traitors flying into the air.
"Looking for me?" With a higher base cultivation realm Chen Hao was able to react faster and send a powerful stab behind him with his fame saber. Yet he felt no resistance on his saber, he slash widely around to attack all around him. Using the moment to search the courtyard to find a hint of where the green expert is at. A familiar looking green gauntlet appear from underneath his visor, smashing right into his jaw. Chen Hao was then sent flying faster and soon pass his clansmen who were still rising in the air.
"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" A large roar came rumbling behind Shimmy's back, as Chen Zhou the Chen Clan Patriarch was stabbing a black crystal gem into his chest.
"YOU ARE COURTING DEATH!" Chen Zhou voice shakes the ground as a tremendous amount of black aura blasted out from his body.
Thanks for the chapter
ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA!
Was about to ask if this was Ora or Muda compilation
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of (the) courtyard.
'Symbiote Seed + Life Essen'
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speedy stab behind him with his fame saber
Eh... eh. Very eh.
@LazyPanda Alright I don't know if it's just been awhile or if I've just possibly erroneously convinced myself I can say this nice enough... or maybe your response makes it seem like it will be taken well when I say this poorly.
Anyway. On the somewhat nonconstructive side of things I'm increasingly wishing you didn't do a system... you're literally an item shop and magic training spot thingy away from creating a perfect amalgamation of all the system facets I dislike the most. The sci-fi system in wuxia thing kills me the most. System in wuxia is bad enough by itself, but... anyway.
On the not totally useless side of things, I like the system on the girl via symbiote idea if you really have to do it, but then it seems it's actually the usual random ass system on random ass dude that's probably a reincarnator because why not situation. And the girl is just sort of getting hit by association so... yeah.
And on the more constructive side of things... two things. First, autoclickers? You're making metaphors with autoclickers. In a wuxia. Okay I get it has a touch of sci-fi flavor and there's probably an Earth dude in the scene, but it's not even being told from his perspective. Also to a lesser degree, scanning? Possibly much less depending on how sci-fi the symbiote stuff is going to get.
Secondly, I find these fights near impossible to follow very well at all. With a bit of time, a little squinting, and a decent heap of apathy, I can at least figure out the MC doesn't appear to dead yet. But even just the basics of who is fighting whom is tough more often than not. For example I didn't even realize Evil Ancestor dude had a son around, much less that he was part of fighting anybody, and even... more less(?) that the MC had smacked him until Evil Ancestor dude popped up to shout angrily. Just before that I was guessing the MC had just smacked the Evil Ancestor dude actually. I don't exactly know why this is, though I suspect the erm, occasional questionable word use/grammar/etc is causing my brain to be trying to change things to fit together a little too eagerly. It's certainly not the main cause, but it doesn't help. I'm probably also slightly at fault for being a bit hesitant on this due to the system stuff, but I don't think that's the main thing either.
All that said, I really do like the core concept with the symbiote. Extremely powerful outside but very limited in ability to take action, able to generally increase host's development meaningfully but not super crazily (well, we don't know but it doesn't seem so), yet half-needing her agreement at least for maximum benefits. All that sets up a nicely strange dynamic between symbiote and host. Especially with the sheltered sick kid thing going on. It's a pretty cool idea. I like it.
@46rtyrty44
First of all, thank you very much for taking your time writing this. I definitely will keep it all in mind, and I'll try my best to also make sure to update previous scenes to make sure people are not mistaken for each other. Sorry for my bad use of comparison as I am still new to writing novel and was unsure of what to do a metaphor with that scene.
P.S the person who got back up is the Chen Patriarch Chen Zhou with overflowing black aura, the Evil Ancestor Chen Hao got uppercut into the sky.
'I will not run away again, I will not coward myself into letting that happen AGAIN!'
Umm coward myself?
Also at least we don't have to wait 3000 chps for the protag to get revenge yaaaa