The fight was not over. The other enemies started withdrawing.
My aircraft keep an eye on them. The problem is, soon they will run out of fuel and I cannot land them here.
[I will attack the group over there.]
71 meters away from me there are 3 enemies. That much should be enough for me.
The houses are burning, the reason to burn everything is still unknown. I shall interrogate them, one by one.
I found many dead people, scattered around. Some of them are grouped together.
[Were they a family? I still don`t understand the value of doing such brutalities. I doubt that the village was actually even fighting the attackers.]
I try to sneak towards the enemies. When I finally arrived, I saw them executing a woman, right in front of her children.
[Unreasonable actions which have no proper military value, and no actual use. Are they just doing this for fun?]
I kept observing their following actions.
[Yes, they indeed just kill the people. Why kill the entire family? Even I don`t see a sadistic pleasure in killing unarmed opponents…]
They finally saw me, no more reasons to hide.
“Drop that spear, girl!”
“You are gonna fight? Ha-ha-ha!”
And the third guy just aimed a bow at me.
[Oh my, this is going to become bad. For them.]
I forgot about my skills and tripped over. This time, however, an arrow missed me because of that.
I wounded the bowman and continued my attacks.
I should be beaten already but the belt armor is still holding.
I sliced the opponents in front of me. This Lucky me managed to kill both with a single strike!
The next on my list is the bowman. The one which just lost his leg.
“Please! Spare me!” Mission successful, starting the interrogation.
“You either tell me who you are and what are you doing here. Or I will start cutting your stomach.”
I lit my eyes with fox magic and showed him the bloodied blade.
“We were ordered to kill this village… we are just mercenaries!” The blade was positioned for dissection.
“PLEASE! I BEG YOU!”
The blade touched his skin.
“I WILL TALK! I WILL TALK! JUSTSTOP!”
For now I stopped cutting him and held my blade.
“The duke ordered us to kill them! We don`t know why! Please! Be merciful!”
‘AAARGH!’
I started the crash testing of leather armor.
For now that should be enough.
The fuel is drained fast, I must disengage soon.
I will just head back to Elina and Albert. They might need some help.
Looks like we really were late, there are no people who can be saved.
Right behind a corner of a house I found myself standing in front of two really bad guys.
My attack missed them which gave them time to regroup. One of them is wearing a brown cloak. Will it be my first time fighting a mage?
[I must take him down before I have a chance to find out.]
I am losing my time by fighting my own weapon`s pole. Should I grow accustomed to it?
I interrupted a weird chanting by hitting that idiot with the pole. Nothing serious for him but it looks like non-lethal attacks are much more successful for me. As long as I am not falling.
The mage fired a fireball at me and I sent my foxfire to counter it. I was F* burned by that fireball.
‘Fire reported on the flight deck, the bridge, the bow. Damage control teams were sent.’
A deep male voice reported the status. I did not die from the fireball but it surely made a lot of damage.
I am getting angry.
“No more fooling around.”
I dashed towards the mage but my attack was blocked by his companion. No serious damage.
I cut the swordsman`s leg off and proceeded towards the main target.
The downed bastard grabbed my leg so as expected, I fell down.
I barely stood up before he managed to hit me in the back. My arm made a ‘ding’ metal sound which shocked the swordsman.
His shock was kept forever when I pierced the back of his neck with my naginata.
The mage himself was easily apprehended. Should I cross-reference their words?
“Speak.”
“I will never tell you anything.”
Instead of continuing this discussion I prepared to cut him open.
“…”
So I just started.
“NOOOO!”
“You have something to say?”
“P… please… I have… a… family…”
“They too had a family.”
“Mo…n..ster…”
Every bit of information can be crucial for me, so I dissected him alive. Better than just wasting him.
Now I am actually feelling like I am a bad girl indeed. This is not the guilt yet but… I surely did a lot of bad things today.
“Hey, Fuji. How are you?” Albert was breathing very fast. He must be tired after all the fighting.
“Fuji, thank God! I was worried about you!” Elina was both relieved and angry. If she is going to scold me, I might postpone the self-reflection…
“Did they flee?”
“And that is her reaction…” If he expected more from me then I can only pity him.
“We have nothing more to do here…” There is one last thing.
“I interrogated one of them.”
“Yeah, I heard it.” Well, sorry?
“They were hired by some ‘duke’ guy. Anything rings?”
“Yes, but first let`s get away from here.”
“Then I will be going first.”
[Just hang in there boys!]
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Yes, its easy to misunderstand who speaks. Votes: 25 75.8%
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I have no problem with it. Votes: 3 9.1%
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As long as I get when Fuji speaks, everything is fine. Votes: 5 15.2%
She is scary. Stop watching innocents dying, before you take action. If you attack while the y are distracted killing the innocents it makes the fight easier and looks like she tried to help....
Thanks for the chapter ❤💙😊😎.
Ah, I like it
"time to reform. One"
reform -> regroup
"Better than just waste him"
waste -> wasting
Might want to say why dissecting him rather than merely killing him isn't a waste. I'm guessing it is gathering information about anatomy and pain reaction for interrogation?
"actually felling like I"
felling -> feeling
"surely made a lot"
made -> did
Sorry if I am still making those weird mistakes. Thank you for all your hard work!
love!!!
How does her ability works? While reading I was thinking her ability as 'stands' like in jojo's bizzare adventure, is it similar to stands?
I have no idea what 'stands' stands for. Her abilities work like in Azur Lane.
I am still confused about what is the "character" she's supposed to be playing exactly, and I don,'t know if it's gonna be revealed later or if I just missed something.
I would guess that the prideful and kill-happy personnality come from this character as well as the nationalism for a country he was clearly never part of.
The MC is a somewhat distorted personality of the 'original' character. He has some sides but does not follow the character completely. The MC is a 'bad actor'.
@AFP_Writer The mc is a bad actor ok, butI don't know what she's supposed to be actoring, and I don't know if I'm supposed to know it.
@Dradel Just accept that there are many shenanigans in the MC's behavior. After all, V1 has many flaws, because I was learning how to write a novel.
It's really confusing what the heck is going on, feels like you're skipping three steps every other line.
Yes, I know about this issue, I am trying to improve the quality of my writing but I still need to find a good way to write without having to skip parts.
@AFP_Writer I know a bunch of sources to help with writing, want some links?
@Death_Threat_Collector That will be great!
@AFP_Writer
This site has tons of great advice but is a bit hard to navigate at times:
https://www.springhole.net/writing/index.html
These YouTubers have some good stuff on writing too:
https://www.youtube.com/user/RedEyesTakeWarning
https://www.youtube.com/c/TerribleWritingAdvice/videos
And here's a discord:
https://disboard.org/server/553282299618394154 It's more aimed at RP, but that's largely identical to normal writing.
I know another server but I can't make or find invites to it too easily, check this out and then come back if you want the last one.
@AFP_Writer My primary recco to you from my own experience is this: focus on the action, not the reaction. You should also show more of the character's personality and thought process.
not this:
I will just head back to Elina and Albert. They might need some help.
Looks like we really were late, there are no people who can be saved.
Right behind a corner of a house I found myself standing in front of two really bad guys.
My attack missed them which gave them time to regroup. One of them is wearing a brown cloak. Will it be my first time fighting a mage?
[I must take him down before I have a chance to find out.]
I am losing my time by fighting my own weapon`s pole. Should I grow accustomed to it?
I interrupted a weird chanting by hitting that idiot with the pole. Nothing serious for him but it looks like non-lethal attacks are much more successful for me. As long as I am not falling.
But this (adding some extra detail beyond the basics on assumptions and shit):
Looking around the flaming ruins I see Elina and Albert struggling with their foes, after a moment's hesitation I rush towards them.
Before I get there two of the attackers step before me, forcing me to come to a halt. For a moment our eyes meet and I glare at them, then he starts chanting. Magic? Better not find out, without a moment's hesitation I lunge forwards, his friend blocks the blow but I forced him to backpedal, interrupting his casting.
I went a bit all-out, but hopefully the example will help you.
@Death_Threat_Collector While I don't plan on remaking the already made chapter but I will try to improve the chapter I'll make, thank you for advice!
@AFP_Writer Fair enough, just meant as an example. You're welcome, I hope to see you do well!