Hi, my name is zack. Right now i'm in my house waiting to die. I'm a demon. There are lots of demons with different types, sex demons, revenge demon,s magic demons, etc. Us demons survive off of contracts.
A contract works like this you have a demon and a human and the human wants something the demon gives it to him or her through a contract and he asks for the humans energy in return what type of energy the demon wants is dependent on his type the stronger the human is the higher quality his soul the higher the quality of the soul the more energy a demon can get. The more energy a demon has the stronger he his the more power he can get the easier it is to grant wishes. also demons have to get too 100 years old before getting the right to form contracts. and if you don't form one a month after getting to the legal age to form a contract you die
A demon's power before he makes a contract is dependent on his blood purity . I have a blood purity of 2% so i'm basically screwed because with two percent blood purity i'm just a little stronger than a human and can't give them anything good enough to make them give me energy
To make things worse my type is evil demon so basically human's have to break the law and do things like rape murder etc. Just to get energy for the contract or the human dies And nobody is stupid enough to sign a demon contract without looking at it.
life is so hard.
fuck the world.
then at 12:00 a pain hit's me and the the month changes from september to november and i die a month after my 100th birthday september 1st with only memories of a sad life of being bullied by other demons because of my low blood purity if i had another chance i would have killed all the male demons that bullied me and fucked all the beautiful female bullies till they begged me to stop.
Conditions cleared fusion starting binding to world destruction system
who is that ? i ask has i pass out
(Authors note : i know i said that mc would be overpowered but you don't see a overpowered mc but get to chapter 2 and you see what you want and if we get 15 likes i'll release the chapter this week )
Interesting concept!
Constructive criticism:
There are some capitalization errors and run-on sentences in need of commas. In the future you may want to think of a way to avoid info-dumps.
Hi my name is zack right now i'm in my house waiting to die i'm a demon. There are lots of demon's with different types s*x demons revenge demons magic demons etc. us demons survive off of contracts.
please give comas, it's important. Also the punctuation and dots.
correction: Hi, my name is Zack. Right now i'm in my house waiting to die. I'm a demon. There are lots of demons with different types, s*x demons, revenge demon,s magic demons, etc. Us demons survive off of contracts.
okay I'll try harder
I think i'll release chapter two tomorrow.
i will be posting the new chapter tomorrow.
I think i'll post chapter 2 if we get a 100 views on this chapter.
i'll be using a manga has a reference for is new skill in chapter 2.
even if it hasn't gotten 15 likes it has a decent amount of readers so expect chapter 2 maybe today or tomorrow
Also, some of your letter "I" are not capitalized and "September 1th" should be "September 1st"
i'll try to work on my grammar next chapter. thank you for the september 1st" correction.
Seems good so far, just make sure to have some differences in format so we know who or what is talking. I look forward to the next chapter. Also, first view, yay