Hello guys, I know it's been a while since I posted on this story, so I figured I'd take this chance to fill you in on how the reboot's going.
So far, I think it's looking great. My editor and I are taking our time going over a BUNCH of fixes that needed done in the earlier chapters while going over how to progress the plot smoothly. It will be different from this version up to now, but I'm hoping it's for the better.
In the meantime, I've set up a survey to get your opinions on what you thought on this version up to now, what should be changed in the reboot, and how to move forward from here. If you guys have a couple minutes to spare, I'd greatly appreciate it if you could give it a look here and let me know your thoughts. My editor and I will take your answers and comments into account and see how we can apply it to the reboot. Leaving questions and concerns in the comments below can also be an option, but the survey will definitely give us a better idea on what to improve.
I don't know how long until we're ready to get it going, but I'll certainly give you guys a date of when it will happen. I thank you very much for your patience and understanding and I hope you'll like the reboot's new progression as much as I currently am writing it. I know it's much better than how I was in the old version, at least.
Until next time, this is Orange Rain, signing off for now.
Ngl I don't like having so much perversion around an MC that can't/won't reciprocate that perversion, especially when it's due to young age.
I agree there, he may have a adult mind but it always came off as somewhat pedo. Like all the females just didn't care that he was in a childs body.
Yeah, I agree there. I'd like for Soar to be older when that sort of stuff starts up, at least with him as an active participant. The things he was doing practically right after he summoned his familiars was a bit much considering his age, I feel. Maybe hold off on the familiar summoning (and the level of lewd accompanying them) until he's had a couple of years to adjust to having friends in his new life?
@Oopsibwokeit Or have them start of non-humanoid and have them evolve later on, perhaps.
Depends on how the familiars work.
Still sad sarise and melody is getting the cut they were definitely my favourites
100% in agreement about this. I was also really into clairs familiars as well.
That also could be because the fairies weren't a focus really, but yeah agreed.
I will miss them too, and that's why I hope he keeps the old version up (and posts the reboot as a "new" story on the website), but I can also see how the progression of the story has stalled ever since he introduced Sarise ; regardless of how much I like her, I can see how her presence harmed the overall quality of the story
@kallavin_stormborn yeah I can see how they kind of tool over the story
Sarise was great. I will say some of the results kind of surprised me in that poll.
NIce... Hopefully the message i sent you helped out, i hope you recieved it since i got no answer but oh well =P.
To bad that sarise and melody will be cut... i liked them quite a lot after the fairies, but my belief is that you dont have to cut them to get more screen time for the fairies. Its just that you focoused almost 100% on the familiars and left the fairies behind, thats a NO NO. ITs fine to only focus on some characters for a couple of chapters... but a dozen or more? sh*t happens XD.
Aunque la historia estaba más o menos solo con algo de relleno exagerado pero si lo harás mejor evita escribir de mas
Lo siento, no leo espanol.