Raiden panicked as he looked at the ball of destruction in his hand, he had moments if not seconds until it exploded, leaving destruction in its wake.
He would've flown up taking the ball of ki with him, but he didn't have enough ki for even that, having drained it all during his practice.
Having no other option Raiden did the first thing that came to his head, he chucked the ball of ki as high as he could, putting all his strength into the throw.
The glowing ball of ki flew into the air leaving a trail of blinding light. It reached the apex of its flight and combusted with a blast of white light that shattered glass for miles around the explosion with the shock wave.
Raiden who had been floating in mid-air flew back with the force of the blast and hit the ground with a small thud. His vision started to darken as he heard footsteps come running towards him.
"You little bastard what are you doing? Are you trying to kill us all!" said the enraged voice of king Chappa.
"New Years came early.." Raiden managed to croak before finally passing out from exhaustion.
After the little incident where he almost blew up all of south capitol, Raiden decided to take it easy with his practice.
He drastically lowered the amount of ki he was experimenting with, so if he did lose control he wouldn't be able to cause harm to anyone.
And his training paid off. By the day Raiden left for papaya island with Chappa and Yajirobe he had a small glowing white ball rotating behind his back.
After two months of practice, he could finally keep a decent amount of ki stable outside his body and under his control. The amount was about a fifth of what he could with his body and even if that didn't sound like much, it meant he had pretty much increased his strength by 20 percent.
The idea to keep it as a ball floating behind him was from Naruto, when he finally awakens six paths mode, Raiden thought it looked really cool.
But there were still complications. Keeping the ki stable and condensed around him required him to focus on it at all times. Even though the ki wouldn't explode like last time, because of the greatly reduced amount. It would still start to leak into the surroundings and slowly lose its luster if he didn't hold it up.
While he had pretty much mastered using the ki during daily life, even during his spars with Yajirobe and Chappa. Where the ki floated around him and could fire surprise blasts at them as a sneak attack. It was still a headache to keep it stable as he slept. He would go to bed with a ball of glowing white light and when he woke there would do nothing there.
He was forced to meditate every morning to draw out ki and prepare it for the rest of the day, but even the time it took to do that decreased significantly when he realized he didn't have to use only one arm to draw it out.
When Raiden used ki blasts he mainly used his arms as the outlet for it so naturally, he had also used his arms to prepare the ki for his ki balls. But then after a few weeks, he realized how stupid he was. Hadn't he shot a ki blast from his mouth during his spar against Yajirobe?
After that, he started using his whole body to outlet ki for the ki balls which made the process much after than before, shortening the time from hours to minutes.
Now ready with his new technique Raiden was almost sure he would win the tournament.
On the day the tournament started Raiden arrived at Papaya island dressed in his normal training gi, but over it, he was wearing a crimson red robe that went down the length of his back. He wasn't walking by slowly gliding a few inches above the surface of the ground so that his robe flowed behind him. With the glowing white sphere behind him, it gave him a truly majestic appearance.
Which was then promptly ruined by his short stature and babyface.
Chappa led them to the table where you have to sign up for the tournament since he had been here before.
"We want to sign up for the tournament," said Chappa to the monk that was taking care of the process.
The monk looked up from the stack of papers in front of him and took out a pen, "Names please." He asked.
"King Chappa"
"Yajirobe"
"The Sage Raiden"
Yajirobe and Chappa both looked at Raiden with a confused look on their faces and Raiden couldn't help but laugh.
"What. It sounds cool. Like I'm a magician." Raiden defended himself.
Raiden heard Chappa mutter something about brats as they made their way into the tournament building to get assigned a block in the preliminaries.
Good thing learn his lesson stop being arrogant and impatient may cause his life
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hey keep up the good work, I'm loving this.
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Thank you for the chapter ( ●w●)
He has a floating grenade now.. oh no..
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Mc needs to find shenron and wish for saiyan body and give goku a run for his zennies.
I think that'll be stopped by the god who reincarnated him for punishment.
Not like he learned his lesson considering this chapter or the past. Still reckless, still borderline sociopath.
Then the title/plot of the novel would be pointless. Point of the story is being born and surviving in DBZ as a human.
@KidBuu699 that maybe true but dbz plot wise; humans are physically weak with high ki aptitude than most races. if nothing changes mc will end up as another yamcha. that guy died more than kenny. "But so far i'm liking the story"
@teku I mean he could always go for the magic path really and unlike most ppl who are too proud to learn technique from each other he could learn and make new one unique ones with his mastery over it not just and bigger and badder explosion as some new attack also there is guru and supreme kai to unlock his powers further beyond idk why other ppl than gohan never did that
@Surfing_Cipher yeah i'm just worried the author will take a avoid dbz plot and dbz main characters like; Mob without system in Naruto world. the mc was like i don't want to mess up time line. But i say have fun with the timeline don't fear changing it. like right now goku is with bulma looking for dragon balls and hasnt met roshi yet and king chappa wins this 20th World Martial Arts Tournament based on dbz timeline.
@teku I mean like mob in naruto he could play things in the shadows and take care of small fry enimes like 17 in cell saga and so on but him suddenly being the mc and defeating main villains wouldn't make sense such as perfect cell and buu as he should not have plot armor
@teku Humans are weak like that because one of them hasn't found the path to power yet. Did Yamcha and Krillin have an all powerful human teacher throughout the story? No, after a while they became the strongest human and they had to find out how to get stronger on their own.
For humanity there have been two experimented paths throughout the show. You have the path of science with the androids and then you have the Ki path that Krillin and Yamcha did. Personally I would avoid the android path because that goes against what I said earlier about being human.
So what the MC needs to do is experiment with Ki and find a way to bring humanity(at least certain humans) up to the level of those other races. Since there are so many races at those higher levels it should be possible. In my opinion the best way to do that would be to take some inspiration from some Xianxia novels(He is already using naruto so why not). I would bet "Qi" and Ki would be similar so have the mc become the first body-refinement "cultivator." Find a way to nourish and refine his body with ki to increase its strength. Would suggest starting with the bones and then just working out from there.
If any wishes were going to be made to Shenron I would go in this direction. Perhaps a wish for knowledge if such a system existed elsewhere in the universe. Perhaps guidance from the dragon. Perhaps making his body better adaptable to the energy. As long as the mc gets a compass/radar to find the dragonballs he could track them down once a year to make more than one wish.
Personally I would do the body that easily absorbs/adapts to Ki. . . .Would also probably find one to make me a harem protagonist so I could have Bulma, Android 18, and some alien chicks. Never really got that about the main characters and the dragonballs. With them having a one year cooldown for earth and then a three wish ones on Namek you would think a lot more wishes would be made.
@KidBuu699 I mean namekians will deny to do any of those and personally think harem based is a bad idea both bulma and 18 plays vital roles as in trunks (future one too) also with kirrilin and his love which mellowed her out
Also the humans already have a trait its called energy controlling sayains could make and withstand very large amount of ki but can't use very specific and delicate ki control the things like mc with his ball control I think mc can easily learn instant transmission and other which include magic would be nice for him to have healing magic like the namekians
@Surfing_Cipher Mc doesn't have to be a good guy. He doesn't have to be a bad guy either though. He is trying to survive in the world not become its hero.
Personally I think the amount of time to go to Namek and back wouldn't be worth it in the long one. Plus you would have to get a ship and who knows what dangers you'll run into in space. Better to just continually get earth's dragon balls then risk the unknown. That is unless the mc knows the location of the Big Bete Star and can take control of it like Cooler(Meta-cooler). However, who would want to be a machine? Takes the enjoyment out of life.
With the Android 18 and bulma thing I agree and disagree. The mc doesn't have to be a puppet in this world following everything in the story. If he doesn't change anything then he will just be another mob character. Not very interesting. Bulma I could see him avoiding for trunks to exist but once again the Mc could do the things trunks has to do but he is more important.
Android 18 on the other hand I see no solid reason as to why she has to stay with Krillin. Another love interest could "mellow her out" and krillin does not play a vital role overall and neither does there daughter.
Instant transmission and healing would be nice but like I said the mc needs to develop something to strength his body. He needs to make it so that his body can take a beating like the saiyans can. Healing is nice but unless its insane regeneration like the Buu's it won't be worth much with a weak body.
@KidBuu699 you do remember it was krillian who chose not to bow up the bomb for cyber puss and everyone just freaked out
@Surfing_Cipher I believe I pointed out that the MC of this story could take over plot points of the original show. Not sure if I did straight out say that but I'm not going to read back to find out. However, that goes back to my point about Krillin sparing 18 by not blowing her up. If the mc plays his cards right that could be him in that situation instead of Krillin.
Any good insert character fan-fiction will realize that introducing their character to the story will change the timeline. For example so far the mc has taught two other earthlings how to use Ki. Teaching Yajirobe will probably not have the big of an impact overall but King Chappa should. Yakirobe will go off on his own but most likely Chappa will teach his other students, at least his main ones, about how to control Ki. After you teach so many people, especially a big name like his, the idea will get out there and get attention. More and more earthlings will know how to use it.
Anyway back to 18 and Krillin. All of Krillin interactions with her could be replaced. His story events could be replaced or even forgotten especially since later on he is more of a comic relief character(Android 13 movie it was really bad for him).
Really the only thing I think about him that is positive is his Destructo Disc move. I'd steal that like other villains have and instead of Naruto sage balls floating around I'd make it small Destructo Discs.