Raiden slowly levitated into the air and smirked when he saw Bulma's shocked face.
"Why so surprised? I told u I had a quick way of getting around," Raiden said with a laugh.
"B-but but how? You must have some new hover technology. There's no way you can just fly without any tech," Bulma said not convinced.
"Well believe what you want, I think a spiky-haired kid we're traveling with is getting ahead," Raiden said as he gestured to where Goku ran off.
Bulma nodded as he quickly pulled out a capsule and threw it on the floor revealing a motorcycle.
"Do you even know how to ride that?" Raiden asked.
"I'm the one who built it," Bulma said arrogantly and she revved her ride and shot off after Goku.
Raiden quickly followed after he in the air fly just a few meters above the ground.
They soon caught up to Goku who was running at a good pace even though he was carrying a giant turtle on his back.
"Heyy how are you flying. I thought only things with wings could fly," Goku asked when he saw Raiden.
"I can teach you later," Raiden said with a smile to which Goku eagerly nodded.
The trio plus turtle traveled on the road for a few minutes when Raiden noticed a rather weak ki signature sitting in place up ahead.
'Probably a thief, I'll let Goku take care of it,' he thought not wanting to waste his energy on someone so weak.
Just as he predicted after they had traveled for another few minutes the group was stopped in the middle of the road by a giant humanoid bear wielding a sword.
"Hey stop right there, how nice of you to have brought me my favorite snack. Now hand over the turtle," the giant bandit said.
"Y-yea cmon Goku give him the turtle already," said Bulma nervously.
"Nope," Goku said unfased.
"If you want to leave here with your lives intact you better give me the turtle, it's my favorite food, he'll taste delicious," the bandit said menacingly.
"Goku you idiot just hand over the damn turtle," Bulma yelled.
"No way I don't want to," said Goku putting the Turtle down on the floor.
"Well in that case you die first kid," said the bandit as he swung his giant sword down on Goku.
Raiden noticed that Bulma had not so subtly had driven away while Goku was getting attacked. He wondered how she even collected the first two dragon balls with an attitude like that.
Raiden watched as Goku made quick work of the bandit eventually jumping onto his huge sword and decking him in the face.
"Well I guess we can keep going now," Goku said having taken care of the bandit. "Hey, do you really taste as good as he said?" Goku asked looking at the sea turtle.
"N-no I promise I don't taste good at all," The turtle said worried that Goku would actually try to eat him.
Goku was about to carry the turtle on his back again when Raiden spoke up.
"He Goku give him to me, we can get to the sea faster if I help carry him," he said gesturing the turtle to come towards him.
The turtle walked towards him and Raiden quickly flattened out one of his ki balls to make a platform for the turtle to stand on. He then levitated it in the air and added a little barrier to it with more ki so the turtle didn't fall off.
"Now we can go much faster," Raiden said with a smile as Goku broke off in a much faster run now that the turtle wasn't weighing him down anymore. Raiden and Bulma quickly flew and rode after him.
It took them a few hours but they eventually saw an endless expanse of blue meaning that they had reached their destination.
"Wow we actually reached the sea, you really saved me," said the turtle crying tears of joy. "Please wait here I want to thank you all for your help," said the turtle as he swam off into the sea.
Raiden watched as Goku and Bulma played in the water as they waited for the turtle to come back. Not really wanting to get wet he just relaxed in the shade of a few palm trees on the shore.
After a while of waiting Raiden finally felt the turtle's ki coming back towards them, along with an extra passenger on top of his large shell.
Raiden smiled, he had always wanted to meet the legendary martial arts master, no matter how perverted he was.
"Hey look turtle's coming back, and he's bringing someone with him," said Goku as Raiden flew down to the shore to stand by them.
"Yea it looks like an old man," Bulma said as the turtle came closer.
Slow the turtle walked on the shore and the old man jumped off his back onto the beach.
"Good afternoon. I was told that you helped out my turtle here," said the turtle hermit walking towards the group.
"So which ones helped you," master Roshi asked the turtle.
"The two boys," the turtle replied.
"I see let me, the legendary turtle hermit, reward you two," said master Roshi. He seemed to think about what to give them for a second before he pointed towards the sky with his staff and said, "Come to me Flying Nimbis!!"
"Come to me Flying Nimbis!!"
nimbus right?
would love if Bulma became more than just... Bulma XD
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1 nimbus 2 boys.. what else is he going to give?
Raiden gonna teach Goku how to fly gonna ruin story if i was him i gonna silent type wait for Mc hard work by him self if he was in danger i might help him
Goku need get nimbus cloud First later learn how to fly
Raiden gonna change story a lot
Isn't that the point of a fanfic though? Hamstringing your character to stick with the official plot means everyone knows where the story will go. I find bouncing the original characters off an OC and seeing how they would react to be the main reason to even use the main timeline in a fanfic.
@Daitengu I know that but I hope that Raiden at lest he respect Goku privacy life like other Author they respect privacy original Main character not doing crossing line to much avoid ruin story to much
https://www.mtlnovel.com/create-a-fantasy-world/
Many Author fanfiction learn mistake and start new fanfiction not interfere original Main character hard work and Isekai Main character in silent mode only help if Original Main character in danger
Example Create a Fantasy World That Author make mistake he let Turn Goku into Super Saiyan Blue first meeting Frieza and Second Avengers and Justice League plus Goku team refuse Beerus become friend only person can help him fight all villains, make downfall for The one create crossover fantasy world isekai the Main character he notice his mistake and fix it all isekai world by his many different version dragon ball said him self i will not interfere Mc hard work avoid downfall again
Other Author fanfiction and Other fans know rules of fanfiction
1 never interfere original Main character hard work only help if he in danger
2 Don't do NTR Harem stealing waifu destiny become original Main character wife, only girl you can touch those single only, Original fans dislike NTR
3 Avoid Mc always win make story boring let him taste of defeat make story interesting
4 OK had Overpowered Isekai Mc but he must not do steal glory to Original Mc to much only little glory avoid ruin story
5 Don't steal Original Mc power example happen to Dimensional door Restaurant access to different fiction anime, Dimensional Mc steal Naruto Nine tail become food, Other original fans of naruto see this become triggered and those not fans naruto not get mad
https://www.mtlnovel.com/dimensional-restaurant-in-marvel/
@salvationhope I disagree with you on 1 and 4. In this instance, Goku learning to fly early is only a good thing. Rishi's crane school bias clamped down on Goku to the point he ran down snake way instead of flying even when learning how off screen some time before the third tournament.
Goku would get a few chances to get stronger by saving time being a good flyer.
Also, I think Raiden's ki control and novel uses of it would also strengthen the z fighters instead of weakening them.
Personally I would prefer Raiden stayed a human and has to be creative to overcome the power difference with technique. Iearn that's the whole point of martial arts to begin with. Like Krillin is constantly weaker than Goku, but he's destructo disc still worked on people 10 to 100x stronger than him.
I sorta disagree with 2. Yes NTR sucks. Yet I haven't seen it in a fanfic either. I've often seen couple reshuffling how ever. Like Bulma being with Goku, cause grampa Gohan was warned by the OC thus was able avoid the full moon and was able to teach Goku more. Thus he ended up a 'bit' smarter and stronger, and dealt with the oxe king's burning mtn before Chichi showed up.
Just a conciquence of a small change early on that effected things later.
But really what you're saying with that 1-5 is than canon power ranks and couples are sacred. And OC fanfics should fangazm the MC and stick to canon. I can't agree. But I think the underlying complaint of sudden powerups with bullsh*t reasoning should gtfo is agreeable. Work for that shit.
@Daitengu I hope this one not did same mistake as The Strongest Legend of Dragon Ball
https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-strongest-legend-of-dragon-ball/
Isekai Mc Interfere to much in Original Mc ruin story
Love life of Goku and Vegeta has been change make ruin story and poor trunks that why other original fans dislike NTR or change wife might ruin future characters
Goku ends up with Bulma and Vegeta with Bulma's older sister
Author learn his lesson and will not do same mistake and he create new fanfiction dragonball Make new Isekai Mc as silent type avoid ruin story
better be careful about his fanfiction story he might lead to his ruin
https://www.novelupdates.com/series/dragon-ball-god-mu/
@salvationhope I thought it was fine. I understand Dragon Ball had issues, unlike the rabid fans. Toriyama admitted to hating writing women and would sideline them once they finished their arc. Many fanfics like to give the women more active roles. MasakoX's mecha Bulma, and keeping Vadel as a Z fighter are interesting spins on sidelined characters.
@Daitengu I agree with you with that
But Dragon ball, Dc comics Justice league, Marvel Avengers, Better not be touch by NTR Isekai Mc those heroes had future child
If Author want NTR he suit for Fate grand order gacha spin off reason you can turn your self into Mc by wish from God or Genie or fairy example I wish ability summon all waifu from Fate grand order gacha game in real life later he summon Irisviel (Holy Grail) Waifu and he wish for Waifu summon the Omnipotence Tri-force relic can charge wish each 1 month only use if they in emergency danger
Isekai Mc can beat Thanos reason this Titan had many weaknesses example his Nigh-Omnipotence The Infinity Gauntlet only work in Marvel world but will not work in other parallel world dimension that his weakness, But Isekai Mc can't beat Nigh-Omnipotence Darkseid True form or his infinite number of Darkseid join fight to kill Mc for sure
Most worse better avoid Dc if you gonna create fanfiction reason Nigh-Omnipotence Darkseid True form most Overpowered villain to all can erase multiverse if he want plus even he go other parallel world dimension his power will not gone unlike Thanos, His True form not show up to Justice league only his Avatar has fighting the Justice league all time more scary he had infinite avatar to different Universe if he was serious he can summon his infinite avatar to fight Justice league for sure our heroes will lose even in one Darkseid hard time what if they face infinite number version of his
@salvationhope I know what NTR is, as a man of culture, but I haven't seen any myself. Then again, I avoid that tag in fics and novels. Also, I've yet to see an actual permanent couple in Marvel or DC.
There's a saying, that fan fic writers go to Marvel and DC to die. Alot write themselves into a corner and abandon writing all together after the mega nerds throw down obscure 30 yr old facts as to why the author doesn't know comics.
@Daitengu There NTR in this website fanfiction not even bother put NTR in it That is, Reborn as Batman’s Little Brother novel I mean Aquaman wife Mera having two-timing in Mc Isekai Lucas and had his child
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/101250/reborn-as-batmans-little-brother/
More worse Author Imbreak debate in pro in DC he know Original Nigh-Omnipotence Darkseid True form cannot beat by Lucas if Mc face him for sure Mc will die that why he put his own version weak Darkseid True form not Follow original version story that make plothole story
Lucas will never win in Original Omnipotence Darkseid True form had immunity to steal ability, immunity to copy ability, immunity to Synchronization, Plus Darkseid True form can erase easy Multiverse if he want but he in chill mode do nothing and letting his infinite Avatar doing the fun in different universe
Here Nigh-Omnipotence that Mc Lucas cannot be beat
Nigh-Omnipotence Presence (DC Comics)
Father of Jesus plus all angel and demon
Father of all humans to
https://characterprofile.fandom.com/wiki/Presence_(DC_Comics)
https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Nigh-Omnipotence
Nigh-Omnipotence Is Doctor Manhattan
https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Nigh-Omnipotence
Nigh-Omnipotence Darkseid True form
https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Nigh-Omnipotence
@salvationhope Depends where in the timeline you if Mera is married to Aquaman. Since rebirth event they weren't married, and only recently are. And there was alot of time before Mera stopped hating the idea of marrying Aquaman. Which happened to be the time Lucas came in.
As for sh*t powers breaking rules... That sh*t happens all the time in DC. Like Superman and Wonder Woman lifting a book that basically weighs infinity. Ignoring the fact that it would destroy the known universe. Or Wonder Woman's sword that can slice atoms But not cause an atomic explosion every time she swings it at light speed or faster. Or how about Batman dodging Darkseid's beams when Flash couldn't out run them.
I'm just saying, DC powers are dumb and can't be taken seriously.
@Daitengu Indeed
Some thing i don't like about Mera she lie to Lucas and rape him plus more worse Mera betray Diana promise
More worse Mera marry to Aquaman and Lucas is s*x friend love
More awesome in this story is Princess Diana Wonder woman marry to Lucas has blessed by other Gods even she got betray by Lucas many times she still forgive lucas same to her bestfriend Mera
Be honest Wonder woman only interesting in story she had Morale unlike others example Lucas always advantage shameless other girls even he s*x to adolescent girl even he is adult now that make him pedophile
@salvationhope I agree on the shamelessness. And I agree that it's a trashy story. But sometimes, like kiss x sis, trash can be stupid fun. Like drunk gaming.
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