Introduction: 

Okay I’m super bored right now so I’ll just go on a tangent and work on a rewrite/ critique of RWBY because good gods know that series is a shit show now. 

If I had to say the most frustrating thing about RWBY is that it does not have a good foundation for the way they want to take the show, no Justification. By justification I mean most thing’s aren’t either earned or established. In my rewrite I’ll try to justify RWBY’s current narrative the best I can without changing the story. Because in all honesty RWBY’s story so far is amazing, its just told VERY poorly. To justify things, I’ll focus on a few key points: 

1. Magic 
2. Aura
3. Semblance 
4. Characters 
5. Relationships 
6. Power Scaling 
7. Status 
8. Adam (Antagonist)
9. Shadows 

Now all these key point won’t be addressed in order, but by importance to how I justify RWBY’s story.