Prologue
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GWAAAH...! I- I can't... speak. I can't move... What happened to me?
Okay calm down. Am I in pain...? No. I felt pain earlier but it has subsided. What's the last thing i can remember...? Um I was at home-.I remember suddenly getting stuck by intense pain...
It doesn't hurt at all now but... I'm conscious but I can barely move,
and I can't see.... Hmm? What's that sound. Wait sound? Well at least I can hear things at least. "Hey, OW!" Hmm? So I can feel too?
Okay, lets calm down again. "For real what is going on here?"
"Am I inside a sack? Am I being kidnapped!?" Well whatever it is i still need to get out. Oh!? I cracked it!! so its not a sack. What is this? I'll just keep pushing- *crack*
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Hmmmm. Well... Its a start, at least the grammar and spelling is good. Though there really is not much to pull the readers attention. I suggest when the full chapters start, at least make sure that there is more then 1000 words on the page before posting.
Thank you for the review. I'll keep this in mind.
I feel the same, Writing is hard I get it but try to get at least 400 words.
@COLOC_Kid don't worry I just wrote a ton so I'll definitely exceed your expectations
@COLOC_Kid it's at least 1200 words and I'll put it up at 10 am Pacific time
@Likio WOW good job
@Likio Impressive dude! I look forward to what chapter 1 has in store!
@COLOC_Kid thank you
@UppishTheReaper thank you too