update xxxx to xxcx from chapter x onwards
that way you can understand what was in place on what chapter. if i can edit this chapter that is. if not i will add it into a announcement in the chapter itself.
also i know some of the things in the update and even mentioning it will turn people off. reason i mentioned such in the update is because there will always be some rich people doing such i agree its wrong and as such i made it that if proff is gained they can be sentanced to experience it themself as punishment meaning in the case of our world the police will have a easyer time getting rid of them so making our world safer faster.
update log
all living beings are linked to there soulmate. that means they can understand there emotions to a extent. not fully as where is the fun in that.
universal currency has been added. all currency can be converted to such. doesn't matter if its physical or not.
all living people are given a gift but with a condition of it not being over powered.
all major citys will now have a teleportion gate square run by staff that are paid for there work. if you wish to work there please apply. temp staff will be allocated for the first year
karma system has been simplified. now everyone knows there karma and can pay a price to change it
added simple work for workless and children to earn currancy
a universal shop has been opened which people can enter via there mind and buy items. all items will be teleported to there shop inventory
added ability to buy skills/spins on the lottery wheel. all skills bought are given immediatly.
added purchace of fantasy visit tickets in gate. with a price the ability to travel to other world is possible. the ability to temp visit is also possible.
added story dive to gate squares which allows people to purchace the ability to dive into certain storys.
so as to not disturb normal living certain fetures in shop will be blocked untill universal age of 21.
granting universal age of consent to being alive for 18 years. also applys to long lived races.
granting universal enforcer. rape of people underage will lead to rape karma being increased massively. (this exception was made due to current world having it and how wide spread it is) once threshold is reached will lead to force teleportation to universe 9652306217 also known as prision universe where sentanced to a variety of punishments. including forced temp body change to artifical body to experience the crime you comitted from the victims side.
victims of the above once saved can have another person with good karma remove memorys and trauma and fix there body. and in some cases even regress them back so they can reexperience life at a cost.
other crimes that can lead to universe 9652306217 are dependent on the law of the world you are in.
universal world law brought into effect. doing certain crimes to the world your in and its people will increase karma. once karma for that certain crime has been comitted enough enforcer will act and force teleportation to universe 9652306217.
if crime is observed and report made to the universal enforcer that breaks universal law karma will not be calculated and immediate send to universe 9652306217
if petition is made to universal enforcer law in planet can be changed. law in universal law can also be changed for spesific planet. warning of law not being present will be shown before transportation and will be told to every occupant of world 1 world week before implentation.
installing universal internet. now able to talk to other world via internet and able to talk in certain world forums. laws of that and your world will apply to you if browsing other world forum. if one world has a law and the other does not the law will still apply.
safe period due to being fresh update installed. period of 1 month where old laws apply.
ability to purchace a get out of jail card given to prisioners but price based on karma rating. prisioners also have ability to gain universal credit.
ability for other worlds to petition change of law in current world (does not apply to private worlds)
more updates to come
You should run this through Grammarly.
Does "I will always be subsequently reincarnated with my memories and ego protected and restored upon birth whenever I die" count as a valid wish in terms of OPness, is combining different things together allowed so long as the end result isn't 'OP', and do the wishes follow your intent as best as possible, or do they try to monkey paw you?
If I can add more things, I'd add "PTSD / Trauma / Insanity / Eldritch insanity immunity between lives (as in, psychological and soul damage of any kind doesn't carry over)", "I will always be born with a body capable of magic if the current world supports it, specifically Wizardry (IE, intelligence/study/research-based spellcasting/spellcrafting)" "I can potentially be reincarnated into different worlds" "I can potentially be reincarnated as any kind of sapient being" "I can spend currency to influence the selection of the new life I'm being born into", "Everything that belongs to me that has a conversion rate into currency does so when I die" among other things. If I was ever in this situation, I'd be spending a lot of time carefully choosing my clauses and what to add, getting it to just before the line of OPness (if it grants me a way to measure that) (not that I'd want to be OP per se, but when gifted power, get as much of it as possible when you have the chance, because who knows how much of it you'll need)
I have run it through Grammarly but it requires me to pay to get the pro version that helps fix problems like flow and such also the words it meant to fix don't show up until I go for a re-edit after uploading the chapter.
I will always be subsequently reincarnated with my memories and ego protected and restored upon birth whenever I die. this does not count as opness but eventually, it would take such a massive toll on the soul that it would be destroyed. granted if said person somehow gets a skill that allows selective memory deletion they can keep going forever but it wouldn't be them after a couple of cycles.
you can combine different things together but it does not give you a "do you wish to proceed with this wish" it just takes what you say tells if it op or not then immediately grants it to a t so that means there is no messing around or take-backs.
also as you will be reincarnated (if we are going by what you say) there will bring over everything as it wasn't stated. but if you do clearly state to get rid of PTSD and such then it could grant it, but if you add too many clauses to it for instance. "I wish to be able to be reincarnated to a world I choose each time I die and that any mental illnesses are to be removed with the ability to use any magic that the world I am going to is capable of doing as well as repairing all soul damage, and added into it the ability to pick what I am to be reincarnated as and use the currency I gain which will follow my soul to pick and choose what I would like to add or take away from my new life" this wouldn't work.
on top of that adding too many clauses will cause it to misinterpret what's said as after all, it's an update that's still being installed so that means it cant deal with very complex things in gifts as gifts arent exactly part of the update but more of a consolation gift. if you get what I mean?
Always knew our world was still running on universal xp! While all the cool planets have universal 10.
(Also a few grammar, and sentence building errors)
i always hope ours is gathering xp but that actually isn't the thought I had for my story. the thought I had is what would happen if our world is an old copy of a bundle of different worlds that gods and goddesses created? what if some of the stories we make gave said gods/goddesses ideas for other worlds? what if to thank us for it they update our world to the recent part of the universes? and that's all I got so far.
i noticed about the grammar and sentence building. i am not very well written. i read a lot but I just don't understand how to make it flow better or such, so my only idea is to hopefully write and it will get better later on, and if so come back and fix it. granted I do have Grammarly on so my writing isn't as bad as it normally is
Wait...
Is this your phone number author?
9652306217
nope just random numbers put together also made sure its in the billions as there is loads of other story out there and I want to make it that my world is like what ours would hopefully be like if it received a update. granted I hope I can make it interesting and accurate to a entent.