Chapter 10: Finally, the status
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ATTENTION: Miho's internal monologue and dialogues will be written like this. So please don't be confused later on.
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Fuck!
How is it possible to have only five potential talents from over 500,000 people?!
[Don't forget that two are the male and female leads.]
Arrrgggghh!!!
Don't remind me! I'd rather die than try recruiting one of those heroes of justice types to my side.
[What of the other three?]
Let me see…
» Character Info «
Name: Xena Moora Age: 31
Race: Human Height: 160 CM
Title: None
Physique: Normal
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» Character Stats «
Level: 1 Talent: None
Potential: C Grade: F
Energy Level: lvl 1
» Basic Attributes «
Strength: 5 Endurance: 10
Agility: 4 Spirit: 10
Intelligence: 5 Dexterity: 2
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» Strengthening Attributes «
None
» Innate Skills «
【...】 【...】
» Basic Skills «
None
Fae?
[hmm?]
Please explain.
[What you see before you is the character info of an individual. You can also refer to it as an appraisal result, or in this case, the information kept by the system on individuals after peeking into the main storyline.]
So you currently have access to all the system functions, am I right?
[Of course! Getting bound to a system does have it's perks.]
My information network in the future will be sure to depend on you.
It was then it occurred to Fae that he might have dug a pit for himself. But even knowing that, he proceeded to explain things calmly.
[The name is the name given to the person from birth. No matter what the person changes their name to in the feature, this name bar only displays their original names, irrespective of any sort of cloaking.
Race, provides information of what species a being is. Again, irrespective of any form of cloaking.
A title is gained when a large group of people decides to identify or recognize you with a common name. Please note that all titles have an effect on the one that receives them. These can either be positive or negative.
Physique sheds information about the special circumstances of the body.
Level signifies the distance one is from a level up or a grade upgrade… ]
Wait a minute, are people consciously aware of when their level is about to reach a grade upgrade?
[No, but there are some beings out there with a high spirit attribute that could sense when they have reached a bottleneck, but not knowing how to proceed effectively from there.]
Oh!
[Talent refers to the superlative ability of a being. Long story short, it exposes the superlative abilities of a being.
Potential…]
Superlative?
[Oh, you are not well versed in that term, huh. Superlative is a term used to refer to all beings that can manipulate a form of energy to do their bidding. It also refers to a being that can do things other beings of the same kind cannot do. Example of talents are: mechanical modification, laser eyes, night vision, muscle enhancement, rune enchantment, magic, sorcery, etc.]
And this woman has no talent? How was she even drafted into a, 'list of potential talent', WITHOUT any talent!
[Look who's talking! Let me show you what your status looks like before taking those pills ...]
» Character Info «
Name: Miho Age: 24
Race: Half-human Height: 175 CM
Title: None
Physique: Abominable body
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» Character Stats «
Level: 1 Talent: None
Potential: F Grade: F
Energy Level: lvl 1
» Basic Attributes «
Strength: 10 Endurance: 10
Agility: 10 Spirit: 5
Intelligence: 10 Dexterity: 10
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» Strengthening Attributes «
None
» Innate Skills «
【...】 【...】
» Basic Skills «
【...】 【...】 【...】
[YOU had no talent. You, just like everyone else, are humans. Well, were human in your case. I'm telling you this to prevent you from getting full of yourself and making a fatal mistake, not to demoralize you. And this is your status AFTER taking those pills]
» Character Info «
Name: Miho Age: 24
Race: Half-human Height: 175 CM
Title: None
Physique: Pure yin body
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» Character Stats «
Level: 1 Talent: None
Potential: C Grade: C
Energy Level: lvl 1
» Basic Attributes «
Strength: 50 Endurance: 50
Agility: 50 Spirit: 5
Intelligence: 50 Dexterity: 50
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» Strengthening Attributes «
None
» Innate Skills «
【Beast morph(incomplete)】 【Heightened senses 】 【Charm】
» Basic Skills «
【...】 【...】 【...】
I'm grade C? Should I be impressed?
[I was getting to that, Grades, this is an alphabetic representation of the strength level of a superlative. This is the means of strength identification mutually accepted by the three universal civilizations. The closer the grades are to alphabet A, the greater ones strength becomes. There is an exception though, that is the grade beyond A, known by the universe as the beyond grade A, but denoted by the system as grade S.
Potential is simply the system's estimate of how far one's strength can go before their demise. This can be change though, as special items, elixirs, and cultivation practices in the universe can increase one's potential.]
The universe sounds more and more interesting, don't you think?
[It sure does.
So, are we going to pretend that they ain't following us?]
Hmm… about six of them, aren't they?
[Close, but my scanner's picking up seven of them.]
Seven?! How is that possible?!! I can clearly hear four misplaced footsteps amongst the crowd.
[Well, you are not wrong about the number of people tailing you. But, you are wrong with the number of people watching you. Six are currently blended into the crowd; four males, one female and one cyborg. The seventh person is four blocks away using a telescope to look over here.
Perhaps you couldn't perceive his gaze amidst the stares of the crowd. You still aren't attuned with your newfound senses yet, so minor errors like these are understandable.]
Miho paused in her tracks and stared at the crowd that seemed to have made way for her. The males stared at her like a teenage boys in heat while the female in couples smacked their boyfriend's to stop them from ogling at her. The single females however, couldn't stop their lovesick and jealous eyes. After all, in this apocalyptic age, if you don't have strength as a woman the only thing you could have going for you is good looks. If a woman doesn't have either of these two things, death by hunger awaits her.
Miho narrowed her feline eyes and flashed a heart wrenching smile towards the crowd before stealthily glaring a warning towards the window of a building four blocks away.
After being done with her act, she turned down an alley. The people assigned to tail her quickly followed. Unfortunately, all they could find was an empty alley way.
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[hmm?] -> Hmm
[what you see before you is the character info -> What
No matter what the person changes his name to in the -> changes their name to
versed in that term, huh. 'superlarive' is a term used to refer -> ‘Superlative’
sorcery, etc.]
And this woman has no talent? -> remove extra space before “and”
How was she even drafted into a, 'list of potential talent', WITHOUT any talent! -> a ‘list of potential talents’ WITHOUT any talent?!
Race: Half human -> Half-human (do this for both Miho character panels)
You had NO talent. -> YOU had no talent.
You, just like everyone else are humans. -> else, are human.
known by the universe as the beyond grade A -> “as beyond” or “as the grade beyond A”
as special items, elixirs and cultivation practices in the universe can increase one's potential. -> elixirs,
The males stared at her like a teenage boy in heat while the -> like teenage boys
heat while the female couples smacked their boyfriend's to stop them from ogling at her. -> the females in couples smacked
“My information network in the future will be sure to depend on you.”
Uh, not to point out the obvious, but wasn’t that already the case?
So Miho has a pure yin body now after the lowest level pills, and made it to rank C? Sheesh, how much higher will she go once she finally gets the higher quality pills? S+? Though, the system saying she had an “abominable body” before…that’s a big oof. But at least she’s past it
“I'm grade C? Should I be impressed?”
Hardly, come back once you’ve gotten an A+! C is only average!
“After all, in this apocalyptic age, if you don't have strength as a woman the only thing you could have going for you is good looks. If a woman doesn't have either of these two things, death by hunger awaits her.”
Same for men Miho, if they don’t have strength or looks (or connections) they’re also going to be abandoned and left to die. Though maybe she doesn’t care as much about that because of her trauma
Same for men Miho, if they don’t have strength or looks (or connections) they’re also going to be abandoned and left to die. Though maybe she doesn’t care as much about that because of her trauma
Exactly
And thanks for helping to correct my mistakes. Really appreciate it.
@AvalonPenndragon Glad to help out. I’m enjoying the story a lot and look forward to seeing where Miho and Fae go from here. The tags look interesting-mecha, cosmic wars, space battles? Probably will happen after they leave Aquamarine.
Hmm, I wonder if they’ll end up having to fight Arnold or not. Hopefully not since he’ll just be a huge pain in the ass for Miho to have to deal with if they do end up fighting. Better she just takes her group and whoever else she wants to bring with her and just leave and ignore Arnold. Still, if it does come down to that I’m sure Fae will be able to help Miho deal with Arnold by making sure to remind her how to get around Arnold’s BS skill by killing him in one shot
@FallingLeaf I love your enthusiasm. Let's wait and see then.