The Way I Write

The format is going to go like this.

In the character's head              "blah blah blah."

Speaking out loud                 Rex: "Blah blah blah."

Ex:      Sally got to the store before it could close. "Thank god I got here just in time." 

            Sally walks over to the clerk: "Do you have any milk."

            Cashier: "Yes, it is in the back."

            Sally: "Thanks."

            She walks over opening the nearest glass door, pulling it open sending a slight shiver down her spine as she grabs the milk from the                fridge. Sautering back to the cashier holding more than she needed to get, unloading it upon the countertop. 

            Cashier: "That will be twelve ninety-nine."

You know what I mean, so that is how it is going to be formatted, I don't intend to change it so do as you will and I will be writing my story.

End of explanation