Chapter 20
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Adrian was having a good sleep that night.
He couldn't catch any new Pokemon, but that didn't stop him from enjoying himself in his dreams.
Antona appeared by his bedside. She was feeling conflicted.
The Guild Master had commanded her to remain hidden, but she had something urgent to do.
Unable to stop herself, she proceeded to shake Adrian while he slept.
[Master Adrian. Please wake up. Master..]
Even after trying for a while, Adrian was still fast asleep.
Having no options left, she pinched both his cheeks and shouted,
[Master Adrian!]
Adrian jumped up on his bed. Although still half asleep, he became vigilant of the shadow in front of him.
[WH-WHO ARE YOUU?!]
Antona quickly clasped her hands over Adrian's mouth and spoke,
[Master Adrian, I am a member of the Crimson Guild. I have an urgent task. Please cooperate!]
Adrian looked terrified but still spoke within her hands,
[How can I know that you are not lying to me? Do you have any proof that you belong to the Crimson Guild?]
Antona became surprised as she quickly considered the question and spoke in Adrian's ears,
[I happen to remember Master Adrian taking some of the Guild Master's clothes & then..]
[WAIT, WAIT! Hold ON!!]
Before she could continue any further, Adrian spoke up to override her further sentences.
He knew that she must be speaking the truth. Only someone of the Guild could have found out his blunder.
(...how did she found out? I was sure here was no one around at that time?!...)
Adrian tried to calm himself down, but the shame and embarrassment of having been exposed turned his face red.
[Speak no further! I know now that you are from the guild. What is it that you want?]
Antona sat near the bed & spoke,
[Master, today I happened to see you use a medicine on that poor boy. He was dying, but your medicine cured him completely! I checked on him earlier. He is becoming healthier as we speak!]
Adrian became startled as he backed away from her,
(...for how long has she been monitoring me?! From the guild days?! Is she a STAKLER?!!...)
Knowing that she came from the guild, he assumed her to be an ugly bitch and held no good feelings towards her.
However, he was scared of another fact,
(...what if she snitches about my acts to my mother?! No. I must make sure to comply to her demands... MOTHER MUST NEVER FIND OUT!!!...)
Even as he felt like he was being effectively blackmailed, Adrian smiled somehow & answered,
[Oh, you mean this?]
He quickly took out the FULL HEAL and stuffed it in her hands as he spoke,
[Ehem! For the guild, I must fulfill my duties! Take this and go quickly! The mission must be fulfilled. as soon as possible. If you need something else, you can come to me directly..]
Antona's eyes shined with a strange light. She didn't know what was going on in Adrian's mind & judged him to be a great future Guild Master.
(...Master Adrian is so kind! He is so generous! I must praise about him to the Guild Master!...)
Although her cheeks were flushed red, she kept her feelings hidden underneath & quickly bowed to Adrian once as she spoke,
[Thank you for the aid, Master. I will report to you soon.]
Antona vanished from Adrian's eyesight, as Adrian tried to see if she was still around before falling down on his bed in defeat.
[Would these guys ever leave me alone?]
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Mariana paced outside Adrian's room furiously. Her tail shook in frustration, while her furry ears were drooping low.
She was biting her thumb in frustration as she paced around.
She held her head as she screamed,
<AH! Why can't I be with my Darling!!>
To calm herself down, she looked inside the room & could see Adrian hugging his head as he contemplated something.
Looking at him being like that, Mariana was having a hard time controlling herself.
<Ah, my Darling looks pitiful~ He is sooo cute!! I want to hang around him, hug him, play with him, eat with him, sleep with him... AHH!!>
She quickly went outside as her frustrations continued to rise.
She saw Antona speaking to Adrian earlier. That was the straw that broke the camel's back.
She had held herself back all this while to wait for a perfect opportunity, but was outsmarted by Antona.
Initially, she thought they both were kindred spirits, since both could only observe Adrian and couldn't approach him.
But, her trust was broken today!!
She had tried possessing other women, but Adrian never cared about her. She even tried possessing the most beautiful escort at the Brothel, but her plan failed again.
She also found out that some bodies were highly incompatible with her possession and the person may become either crippled or turn dead after the possession wore off.
<My Darling... I wanna HUG HIM, HUG HIM, HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM HUG HIM..>
Mariana's eyes became strange as her conviction strengthened. She stared towards Adrian & declared,
<SOON, Very very very very soooon, I will be next to youuu Darling!~>
Her pupil began to turn into heart shapes. She was marveling at her Darling who was looking so pitiful.
She even started drooling imagining it.
Then, her eyes turned fierce,
<As for anyone else that stands in our way... they better prepare to disappear from this world..>
The aura around started to turn from yellow to purple as her eyes started to look devoid of life.
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Chapter 20 End
i am sorry to say this but you need a lot more to write good novel . for starters , chapters are to short , the whole story so far could be sadly scripted in 2-3 chapters not 20 . second , the whole action is a bit to shallow , we are going from one point -click - then another , like his mother - or maybe not - few words here or there are a bit to low , should be more story to characters . try reading few nowels , compare those , and maybe after some time you can write it from the start . the idea of pokemon system in a world with reverse beauty and human-demon interactions is very good , so it would be a shame to drop it - but not in this version.
Eh I don't really see any issue with this novel. Adrian ain't gonna change over night.
TFTC!
Wanting longer chapters mean the novel is well liked.
I keep getting disappointed with this novel. Author should drop it and stop writing anything. Also his Patreon account has been as arid as a desert. Highly recommended to recognise your abilities and quit while you can.
Only people suffering from brain damage can like this stuff!!
Also, haven't seen a successful Indian author yet. Maybe they can only bring out cheap stuff like this?
I am sorry to have disappointed you...
@Immortalgod this novel is funny keep writing. angrymob die in a fire, you ass
@robot You know that I'm right though
Also pointed out by Mornelith24, it's a testament that such a poor story degrades the user experience on this site!
ImmortalGod better migrate to blogger or fanfiction.net to avoid embarassment.
Cause really, who actually likes this stuff.
Most are here just to see ImmortalGod make a fool of himself.
Better find a job for yourself, since being an Author is simply not possible for you.
P.S: we know that you are hiding in your mom's basement.
@Angrymob I'm bored. This site it has so many dying stories who tell the same wish Fulfillment. if you want s*x chapters go to Centaurus, DREADWOLF, My Dungeon Life: Rise of the Slave Harem, The Incubus System, Incest Complex, Netori System. If you wish Fulfillment With goody 2 Shoe . Becoming #1 With Stun-Gun Hero!!, Reborn as Batman's Little Brother, Soul Evolution System, Exploding Attribute System In Douluo Dalu.
You don't even write anything. you have not read very much of the site. You know nothing.
I need new wish Fulfillment stories who don't have goody 2 Shoes.
I must say, the name "Angrymob" is quite appropriate for a flamer. If you dislike the novel, please explain why, so that he may improve. NO ONE is born a writer, it's a skill that takes experience, practice, and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism to perfect.
I really hate to say this because it's a overused term these days, but attributing any defects that may or may not be in his writing to him being indian is bigoted, and borderline racist.
@Angrymob woah what crawled up your ass? Author what did you to this boy?
@Immortalgod its alright man everyone starts somewhere and hey you are improving and please don't listen to people like the angrymob what they are doing is not constructive criticism what they are doing is spewing hateful racist garbage for the sole reason to keep you down don't let people like angrymob with no life ruin your hobby cause angrymob is about as un talented as you can get angrymobs only talent is his talent of dissapointing his parents
@kills
And this kids is why you don't f*ck with an Author...