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I want this to be dark so there will be some choices your not gonna like

On a sunny and cold morning Men, women, and children all running around laughing, smiling, and having a generally great time. Except for one that is a little blonde boy with whiskers on his cheeks and in a black robe that covered his entire body walking along the streets with a expression that should’ve belong to a man that lost everything, and his eyes that looked like the abyss  lost the color of blue and are now dead grey , as he was walking he bumped into people but they ignored him as he was a piece of trash towards a building that had 2 floors with a sign that said UZUMAKI 

He opened the door to be greeted by a empty house, no sound can be heard the boy can even hear his heartbeat but he didn't pay mind to it as it was a normal day for him so he went to the kitchen to see what kind of food was leftover, he opens the cabinets to find 1 ramen in there and several ingredients to make food 

He grabbed the ramen filled it with boiled water and waited as minutes pass by the boy started to go up the stairs and walk towards the long hallway until he reached the end and entered his room as he went into the gloomy room the sound of the door can be heard open and with it 6 giggling sounds can be heard with laughing and talking 

“Kushina how about you make us some dinner after all we're tired” said a blonde man

“Minato you need to start taking a break and eat with the family once a while” 

“Yes daddy your always away from us”said 2 girls, these 2 girls were none other than the holders of a great beast inside of them as they were about to make some puppy eyes another voice can be heard

“What about your god mother? I’m also away from you” said a women with blonde hair and a massive chest 

“Yes! we also miss Tsuande god mother but not uncle jiraya he looks at you with a weird face” said  a little girl with 2 blue eyes and red hair she looked about 6 years old

“Zoey you have to respect people older than you you know?” said a man with long white hair 

“Not if they have a nasty face” said another girl with a blonde hair and 2 blue eyes as well but this girl was harsher she was Zena

Everyone laughed as they heard that and suddenly heard a loud thump upstairs and stopped to look up

“Something must've fallen down” minato said

‘It must be Naruto I should probably go get him to eat with us’ Kushina was thinking but got distracted as Tsuande called her out to help her cook

……..

Why? Just why? He starts to tear up and asked him self why was this happening again? Why is it always him that gets to be forgotten and left out?

He remembers when he was little baby that his parents almost died and that’s when his eye started to transform to form a red eye with a circle around it and a dot on the circle, as time went by he heard his mother call him his “sunshine” but that sunshine didn’t ever appear again as he grew up, he had the body of a well built ninja even for his age it was impressive but that body was a hollow shell as it looked like it a puppet as to how his eyes were dead,  he knows that his sisters got more attention, more love, more… affection than those around him ever gave him, he still remembered one memory from when he was only 2 years old that he got a fever but no one came to him or got suspicious that he didn’t come out of his room for 2 days until he went downstairs and collapsed in front of his family but what he got wasn’t a motherly love but a scolding as to why he didn’t tell anyone  even though he tried to they all ignored as someone called them out but they didn’t know who it was, it was as if the air was talking to them 

[Flashback]

It was a Monday morning that he went out of his room as he was walking down the stairs he saw that there was food on the table as was gonna sit down but soon saw that all the space was occupied and that everyone had a portion there wasn’t even a left over plate for him so he decided to go out and try his luck for looking for food, he will spend hours looking for food as to only find a half eaten apple and stole some candy to satisfy his hunger as the day went by he soon found out that it was dark so he went back to his house only to find out that the door was locked he tried knocking but no one answered so he had to find an ally way to sleep as morning came he went back to the house only to find that his father minato came out and asked him to not stay out to late. That was it? No where were you? No I was so worried for you? He didn’t even glance at him to say that as he was running late then he entered his own house to get scolded by his own mother again for not telling where he was he tried to but they didn’t even want to hear an excuse as she left him there standing in the front of door 

With 2 tears coming down…

[Flashback end]

As he was recalling the memories suddenly his eyes turned red and 3 dots started to form, it had been 6 years since I got reincarnated I was happy at first that I got to leave that world as no one cared for me, my parents forgotten about me due to drugs and alcohol and lack of money so I decided to end my life and then I woke up to a man that said he would revive me in the Naruto universe and grant me 3 wishes I instantly said to have enormous  chakra , to have the sharingan and to have great infinity for all elements  I was already thinking about the fun times with my family but reality struck me down as I was born in the uzumkai clan

I know how they died but to my surprised they didn’t die instead the kyubi got separated into 3 parts with my mom getting the soul of the beast but the ying and yang went to my 2 sisters which I didn’t know were born until I heard another 2  crying sounds and as I got put down into my crib, my mother left me there for my sisters.

As years passed by I only ate with them a few times and I consider that  precious time but i didn’t know that they wanted me gone because 1 women gave me an ugly expression as to  say why are you alive?

I tried to talk to her, give her a hug  get close with her too but all I got was ignored and her back 

 But that wasn't the worse of it as it was soon his birthday but as well as zena and zoey so he thought they would finally be together, a family… but what he didn't know was that his life is going to change forever.

As 10 days went by “our” birthday is important because we're soon going to enter the ninja academy, As I heard people opening the door I put on my best clothes that I rarely wear  and headed down but I soon stopped as I read something that I knew was gonna happen

[Happy birthday! Zena and Zoey]

Naruto saw the faces everyone was making downstairs full of joy, and love but I didn’t feel that I felt anger, lonely, and worst of all disappointed as even my supposed parents forgot about me but then I heard something, something so bad that I started to break down and cry as my eyes spin around and formed an image

Naruto mutated sharingan bottom right

“Today we declare Zoey-san to be in charge of the Uzumaki clan and Zena-san to be in charge of Namikaze! cheers everyone” as he said that naruto ran out the window to the most deadly part of the forest of death there he took off his shirt where you can see multiple scars big, small, 3 slashes, some 2 they were on his whole body there was even 1 on his face which damaged his beautiful face all those were him training himself for the past 3 years getting into life and death battles, practicing e chakra control, ninjutsu and genjutsu.

He started to fight everyone animal he came across while thinking ‘Whywhywhy  whywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhyWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY again it’s the same as my previous life…JUST WHY AM I CURSED WHY? He started to think that all he wanted was a family that he could call his own but fate didn’t let him, it started to rain as he looked up, you could see more scars as his body was covered in blood and the ground covered with animal corpses that will give a low level jonini trouble 

‘Hehehaha Im truly a child I could’ve solved this reasonably but here I am taking my anger out…I’m so pathetic’ while he was thinking a man sitting on a tree branch looked at him this man wore a long robe with a wooden mask of swirling 

He started to look at Naruto, more specifically his eyes which are now a mutated mangekuyou sharingan 

‘Interesting I didn’t even need to intervene and he got the MS. he would make a great addition to the team but he needs a little more time as long I manipulate him good enough he would cause this village a good disaster’ the man thought as he looked at Naruto collapse on the ground due to using those eyes which he hasn’t used or practice YET.

Soon shinobis started to come as the man left he put a letter in his pocket 

“I’m looking forward to you getting stronger but there’s a difference between someone teaching you and not so I’ll be waiting here every single day starting on the 2nd day of tomorrow  and I will teach you…Hope you’ll  make the right choice 

Ps:Don’t tell anyone ^_^” 

The shinobis looked at him and looked at his surroundings

“Why did he do this and how?” As the man said he picked him up and brought him the hokage office

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