Stephan carried Natalie through the door of their newly bought home, freshly back from their week long honeymoon in the Maldives.
"Here we are, our new home, Mrs Richards" Stephan smiled, easily carrying the pretty blonde into the front door
"Oh you.... lets quickly get out luggage and have more... fun" she said with a wink in her eye
"Oh boy... I know what you need" Stephan said, feeling his erection rise as he ran outside to get the rest of their luggage.
They had a wonderful time in a resort by the beach, drinking tropical drinks, getting daily massages and of course, making passionate love with the sounds of the ocean lapping their room that was held up on stilts over the ocean.
Now that they were back, they were going to start their lives as Mr and Mrs Richards.
Stephan Richards was a chef, and was well respected in the city of Houston. But he was being interviewed for a newly opening restaurant in Las Vegas in the new billion dollar casino the Golden Shower
Stephan was well trained, after spending a few years in the most famous restaurants France, apprenticing under some of the most famous chefs in Paris.
It was in Rome that he met his love of his life Natalie Robinson, who was studying Romantic languages and history. She did her final year in a student exchange program in Paris, meeting through mutual friends after his working hours.
They fell in love, and finding that they were both from Texas, this gave them even more reason to be together as they could continue their relationship when they returned to the US
They became lovers throughout the time in France, spending every moment together when Stephan wasn't working.
They returned, aged 22 each, at Natalie's home city of Houston, Texas. As Stephan was from Austin, it wasn't too much of a distance from his family either.
They got married after a year, Stephan becoming an accomplished chef at the 4 Seasons hotel as a chef.
Natalie also got a job working as a lecturer in Romantic languages in the University of Houston, where her father works as a Professor of Physics, and her mother was a senior lecturer in Economics.
Initially, her parent's weren't pleased as Stephan didn't have a degree, and his family was a family of butchers. But when they found out that his parent's owned the Richard and Richards Slaughterhouse, a large conglomerate supplying meat to many of the large supermarkets, their hesitancy faded away.
Besides, Stephan was a good looking guy, matching Natalie's gorgeous appearance, they thought that their grandchildren would be incredibly good looking.
Stephan's parents even bought them a house, while Natalie's parents paid for their wedding. Stephan insisted on paying for their honeymoon, as he wanted it to be his treat to his wife.
However, while they were on honeymoon, he received a call for an interview in Las Vegas.
He wasn't too keen, as he had just bought a house and was about to start his newly married life with Natalie, but the offer to be the head chef in his own restaurant was too big to turn down.
As the owner of the new casino, and investor in the restaurant wanted to see him as soon as possible, he had to leave the very next day after returning from his honeymoon, and he was severely jetlagged.
But that didn't stop his desire to make more love all night with his gorgeous wife. He felt his lions aching from not being able to have sex with her on the long flight back from the Maldives.
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"Are you sure you can go like this? Your eyebags are seriously black. Maybe you should postpone your flight till tomorrow" Natalie said, looking concerned at Stephan who looked worn out
"And whose fault was it?" Stephan teased with a smile as he groped her butt
"Oh you. Just give me a call when you arrive alright honey?" Natalie said, passing him his bag with 2 days worth of clothes
They kissed passionately as the cab waited outside their house
"I'll count the minutes before I'm in your arms again" Stephan said as their lips parted
"You sweet talker. I'll think of you all day" Natalie said
"Rather than think of me, why don't you send me some sexy pictures tonight, to get me through the night?" Stephan asked
"In underwear or nude?" she asked
"Nude of course" he said as they parted, their hands unwilling to let go.
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Stephan arrived at the airport late, after a massive traffic jam nearly made him miss his flight
He raced through the airport and barely got to his seat on the plane in time.
"Just barely got on the plane. The traffic was crazy. It's about to take off, so I'll be turning my phone off. I will message when I land. Love you" he texted before turning off his phone
The pilot gave his usual announcement as the plane took off without incident
The flight between Houston to Las Vegas would take around 3 and a half hours. However, after achieving the optimal altitude and flying for a hour, suddenly the sky went dark.
The plane started shaking. It was bearable at first, and the pilot turned on the "fasten seatbelt" sign and gave a barely audible announcement about experiencing turbulence.
The pilot switched off the lights, diverting all his power to the engines as the passengers sat in silence. Stephan closed his eyes and tried to sleep, hoping everything will be over when he reopened his eyes.
Suddenly, the plane started really shaking as even the overhead luggage compartment suddenly opened and luggage started falling everywhere!
A mother was trying to quieten her baby, who was strapped into the basinet.
The plane suddenly dropped, like a rock in the sky as everyone was barely glued to their chair due to them wearing their seatbelts.
A few stubborn passengers flew into the air, glued to the ceiling as the plane plummeted while the engines screamed helplessly, seemingly not able to pull in enough air to fly.
Everybody started panicking and screaming, while the baby suddenly stopped and was frighteningly quiet.
Just then, the engines suddenly managed to do something as they desperately pulled air into their turbines and started moving forwards again.
Unfortunately their plummeting caused so much momentum heading to the ground, the pilot struggled with all his might to pull the nose up.
It was then, that a bright light was seen through the windows and the engines screamed, pulling with all their might
"Mayday.. mayday.... aaaagh!" the pilot screamed as the announcement was turning on and off, the pilot presumable pressing the wrong button.
At the same time, those in the window seats were all screaming, seeing land approach them at extreme speeds.
The plane plowed through a forest filled with massive trees, as the wings snapped off, and the fuselage tore open as people, still attached to their seats were thrown everywhere.
Stephan himself was thrown out, together with his seat, still stuck to the two people next to him as their seats were connected.
He screamed and covered his head with his hands as the 3 of them, Stephan and an elderly couple were flung into the forest.
The whole seat slammed into a large tree, and Stephan coughed blood as the old man's top body from his waist up was broken off, leaving only his waist down still stuck to his seat
The old woman screamed, seeing her husband die so brutally as the two of them fell to the ground, the seat twisted as they landed.
Stephan was somehow fortunate as his seat landed back down as he landed on his back, cushioned by his seat.
Even so, the impact caused severe internal injuries as he coughed blood, and his back was possibly broken!
But he was the lucky one. The old lady, attached to the twisted seat next to him. landed head down. smashing her head and upper torso as she landed on the ground!
"Uuuuugh" Steven groaned, in shock but alive. The jarring impact on his back made him feel like he had been torn in two.
He lay still for a very long time, barely able to say anything, let alone move.
"Help! Anybody!" he tried to yell, but his voice was barely louder than a whisper.
All around him, were evidence of carnage, as trees were burning, and dead bodies were in pieces everywhere.
He could see a man, impaled on a tree as his body fluids drained to the ground.
On the tree next to him, a woman was on the ground in an obscene position.
Her butt was in the air, and her skirt was thrown up, revealing her panties. But it was not a erotic view as her legs were askew and pointing the wrong way, and her arms and head were missing.
A basinet was on the ground nearby, town in two and only blood could be seen flowing down both broken parts of the basinet!
"I've got to get out of here" Stephan thought as he unbuckled his belt
He crawled out of his seat, moving with his arms, as his legs were still not listening to him.
"Please.... help me" he heard a whisper, turning around to see a man, trapped under his seat.
He braced himself on a tree and slowly stood up, glad that he wasn't paralyzed after all, and limped over to help
One by one, he started helping to look for survivors.
Well, the previous project is abandoned and a lava is made and repeated with this novel.
The wife of the protagonist will be a whore or a woman who loves the mc but is raped only to become a whore, she will prefer the cocks of another black before the mc, the mc will not be able to anything about it because no matter how much power he gains he will always be a beta lover of horns.
Then this project will be abandoned and repeats the same NTR plot with the next 5 novels before the author comes up with something innovative.
You know why I keep discarding stories and start another one? Because I have some "readers" who follow me novel after novel, just to vote 1 star and write negative comments about every novel I write.
If you don't like what I write, don't read it. Don't follow every novel just to downvote.
I seem to see the same comments from you in every novel. You say you don't like NTR, yet keep following a novel writer that writes NTR. Maybe you should admit that it is your kink
Must be fun to criticize, yet produce nothing of your own.
Well, I'm sorry, man, your novels are fun to read and they make me feel smart even though I'm clearly not.
Since I got hooked on Eternal Isekai thinking that everything would improve I've been waiting for it to happen in another of your novels, the fact that it doesn't happen is frustrating but the story behind the overused NTR is interesting so I'm still hooked.
In short, even if it is annoying I will continue reading each novel and I will give a critique according to my thoughts about his novel although they are usually negative, I can say that I do not have the mind open enough to enjoy the netorase, horns or the violation of the MLF but I do enjoy seeing the protagonist impotent or sometimes I dislike it.
As for the NTR fetish, I don't think I have it... or at least I hope so, but thank you for your concern.
In addition I do not think I can produce something of quality as several of the obscene novels that I have read here, after all they are months of efforts but I will not stop giving my opinion (criticism/hate) towards a novel in which I have been hooked, there are some in which I did not but I enjoyed them in silence.
I'm really sorry if I'm upset but I'll keep opining about your novels but contain my hatred / criticism of them.
Excuse-
@Slaped No worries man. If you are reading because you like them and find them fun. No problem. I am open to criticism too. But it is disheartening if it is too much of the same.
I'm writing for fun anyways, whenever an idea springs to mind. Not as if I make any money from this
@Slaped Also, the only reason I am keep writing NTR is because I can't find a more extreme motivation for the protagonist to take revenge, grow stronger etc.
That is why with each novel I keep trying to make it as devastating and drastic as I can
Somehow killing his family, or his dog (like John Wick) doesn't seem like a strong enough motivation.
@Liampark Yes, it was quite blinded of me to give a bad rating without going beyond chapter 1, I will try to read 20 chapters before giving a real rating and criticism.
using NTR as motivation is a rather tragic way to give the protagonist a motivation to make it strong but the protagonists end up being strong but quite submissive, it is a bit frustrating that they take everything in silence.
Sometimes I just hope that the protagonist can overcome the woman who hurt him, sometimes I want him to support that woman, etc. but it all depends on how that character is developed and what is his role in the story.
As an example, the isecto woman of eternal isekai, in the first 50-100 chapters felt quite heavy and sad but after a while it felt as if her only role was to be constantly violated, I lost any empathy for that character in chapters 120-160. by the way, I've read all your stories after Eternal isekai and Eternal isekai makes me taste heavier, but also with one of the worst main character, the type is decaida more and more with the passage of time, rindio after he went back again just to surrender, at the end of the novel just felt submissive and completely lost.
The guy couldn't outsmart himself and it was to be expected after everything that happened, I put up with it a lot and ended up dead for most readers.
Honestly, I can't think of you not using the NTR to drive the novel as it's your touch but sometimes you abuse a lot of it in a very short time from the last time you used it in the same novel and it gets heavy and repetitive. to be so you don't get to connect with any female character because you know that just like the previous one, or even worse, if desarollaras but the relationship of the characters, and to use the ntr/rape caeria more heavy for the readers, in that case you can do whatever you try to the two characters to continue their relationship or make the protagonist exceed that character and that it is nothing more than the last.
The previous protagonist's encounter with Melanie was a good drama but Melanie's weak mental strength only ruined it, it's normal in rape victims but it was still disappointing.
It just balances things out more.
But don't pay too much attention to me, those are my thoughts as a reader but not as a writer.
Although I can not deny that I like the way you do the novels, they are easy to read, neither too long nor too short, also leaving me waiting for the next chapter. I think if I had known that one of the reasons why you leave novels in a dozen chapters was for readers, then I would have been calmer and less blinded.
I really want to see that you can create a darker story than Eternal Isekai, although I'm sure it would be difficult to read but the more you polish your writing skills the better the experience will be reading it.
By the way, I strongly think that "The Eternal Revenant" is one of your best works, it was super interesting from the beginning to the end.
Thank you for taking the time to answer my delusions.
@Slaped Thank you for your comments. I can see that you have read many of my works. Thanks for your readership
It's true I dropped many of my novels. But I think for most of them, the world building is enough for me to just continue if I get an inspiration for how to continue. Some I think I can even finish.
But most times the real reason I stop is I go to other books or movies to get an idea where to go, but end up having a new idea for a novel instead. So I start something new, but always have an intention to go back.
We shall see. Sometimes I leave a novel so long I have to reread it to remember all the things that have happened, because as you say, some of them are very similar and I might have confused the characters.
The Eternal Isekai is one of the ones that was the easiest to write for me because at that time I had lots of ideas. I will continue that one day, but I am stuck right now for ideas.
You can see my level of inspiration when I release many chapters a day, then it drops to once a day, then it suddenly stops because I ran out of ideas. Or I have an idea, but the way the story is built, I cannot use that idea already and have to start another one.
I guess this is why real novelists take time to write a proper novel. Even those that write long running series probably already have a storyline well thought out in advance.
I'm nowhere near that level at all