Inside a modern yet well decorated villa , a wealthy looking man in his early thirties was seated on the sofa with one leg over the other while surfing through his phone
The sound of a tv could be heard in the background
"Breaking news! We have just recieved word from government officials regarding the strange storm phenomena thats been occurring for the past week "
The female news reporter spoke
" The government advises the public not to panic"
" As Meteorologists and other well know experts claim the reason the storm has this strange purple color is because of solar storms occuring on our suns surface as well as several other factors involving global warming "
" Government officials have also recieved word that this storm will pass in the next few days and deny any outrageous claims that we are in the apocalypse "
The man looked up at his tv and smiled thinking to himself if he was normal person he would also be worried about this storm
And who would blame him? Seven days ago a dark cloud started forming over a city he was in while busy with buisness
On the second day the cloud started spreading at an alarming rate and soon the entire world was covered in a dark cloud
On the third day the sound of roaring thunder was continuously heard around the world
On the fourth light rain and the occasional peels of lightning started to occur
While on the fifth day,the cloud started to change colour becoming a mixed shade of dark purple and black
on the sixth day the peels of lightning turned from white to the colour purple
and now it was the seventh day and this storm was still ongoing
If this wasn't the apocalypse then what was?
Chuckling to himself the man picked up the cup of tea on his table
~ding ~
~ding~
Looking at his phone that just recieved a few notifications , the man slowly sipped his warm tea then put it back on the table
He picked up his phone then opened a message
{Congratulations on completing your 10 thousandth mission
Code name : God of death
Heres the agreed upon price}
{Hello!
175 million USD has been transferred to acount
2 x x_7x x x_6 }
---Outside the Villa---
The dark Clouds over the villa started spiralling and soon a purple magic circle was formed
All the purple energy in the clouds were absorbed by this magic cirlce and suddenly a large bolt of purple of lightning descended
"Booom!!"
Striking the entire property and destroying everything on it and of course taking the mans life
--- unkown dimension ---
A lone soul was floating in an infinite space filled with darkness
"What the fuck was that and why is it so dark in here "The soul spoke outloud as he touched his head then tried to stand up only to find he was floating
'Wait where's the ground?' He thought to himself when suddenly
"You're finally here"An ancient voice or voices? Spoke
Causing the entire dimension tremble as though it would shatter just from the entities words
'What was that?' the soules eyes became vigilant as he looked around but could only see darkness an invisible energy surrounded him and he started floating up straight
The soul put on a 'sincere' smile and asked the 'empty space '
" Hello are you the devil? "
The voice seemed to not acknowledge his words as it spoke on
" It took great power for me to accomplish this, so i hope you do not waste your chance , i would rather it be a God of my creation who rules over my inheritance than Gallaway"
As the voice spoke its voice would constantly change
sometimes it sounded like a man at other times a woman ,sometimes it sounded young and seconds later it would sound old
"Therefore i have chosen you to be my inheritor "
"Inheritance? No I'm good thank you so much for the offer , now could you please let me out i have a cat who probably misses me " the man spoke to the dark space with a 'smile' while internally he thought
'Who's Gallaway? And what's all these strange things 'it's' talking about , was i kidnapped by another crazy fanatic? '
A ball of of purple energy apeared in the dark space and headed straight to the soul
The soul didnt even have time to react when the ball suddenly struck him
A sudden influx of memories started entering the soul mind and he soon became unconscious
"But first i will put you through trial" The ancient voice spoke again
Suddenly the dimension started to tremble as the darkness was absorded in the center of the dimension creating what looked like a black hole
The unconscious soul powerless to fight against it was soon absorbed
The black hole suddenly released a wave of red energy before it disappeared
"Dont waste your second chance my child"
the ancient voice said as the dimension 'vanished'
the story has promise however you need to work on your grammar and spelling a bit. Maybe ask a native english speaker to check over your work to help you fix any hiccups.
yeah to add to that point, and I don't mean to be a grammar nazi, but 'sole' means "the under surface of a person's foot.", I think you mean 'soul'.
That still didn't stop that from me enjoying your work though. I am up for proof reading, and a lot of people on the scribble hub discord server are very friendly and they have a dedicated channel for this type of thing.
@cheesepop hello and thank you for the correction if you spot anymore spelling errors please notify me , i plan on releasing a few more chapters I've been sitting on so your feedback would be much appreciated
Thanos for the chapter
Nice