The old man known as Klaus Weiss is currently in his dying moments, "So . . . This is it, huh... the lonely old man dies with no one to attend his funeral... Ha! what a joke"
His life is flashing before his eyes and all he sees . . . Is a poor, lonely man. All he ever wanted was to live a normal, fulfilling life but . . .
As an orphan, he has never gotten the luxury of growing up normal much less living a fulfilling life it's a truth of the world, a sad truth and so...
Close to his last dying breath he prays for a life he was denied "god . . . I . . . I may have been... Unfaithful... But I'm ... willing to . . . Make . . . Ame . . . nds . . ."
Soon to take his last breath he hears soul-chilling words from a youthful girly voice which made him shiver "Hehe I heard your prayer mortal amuse me . . ." Then he died, or so it seems to mortals...
(Mia Chronos/ Klaus Weiss p.o.v)
I awoke with a splitting headache new memories at the forefront of my mind I was confused for a second before that cleared up.
I open my eyes while looking around surprised by what I see, I'm . . . I'm "... Alive!" I say happily I hated the feeling of slowly dying, but now I feel full of life!
But I then take a pause hearing my new voice, "I'm a little girl?" I say while looking down, and I see a small feminine body which gets me confused but not mad per se because I go by the saying,
"...don't kick the gift horse in the mouth"
after I recited one of my favorite quotes, I mused over this matter.
Gender doesn't matter to me as long as I get to live, to clear up who I am, I review my memories so . . . I'm Mia Chronos?
What a weird last name I cogitate on the meaning before continuing the review and what I see is . . . I'm no longer on Earth, but in an alternate world like Earth called Tellus... which has superpowered people, and I'm one of them? My power is . . . [Game loop] . . .
I'll be mostly posting on the weekends.
Bad idea at the moment. If you want to gain traction, you should upload daily for at least the first week, and try to post on separate days at the same time rather than doing several in a single day. Scribble Hub has a schedule function you can use should you not be available consistently, so look for that.
@Rita152 my circumstance is how do I put it... Complex so I can't do that even if I want to sadly...
Good so far, though the grammar could definitely be better.
Is it a little better?
@Nihilism It is. Huh, well, good job! Sorry if I sound rude.
@Western42 no it's very much needed for new authors to receive such criticism!
@Nihilism So I can be as harsh as I like?
@Western42 im not a masochist!
If I was Gordon Ramsey by you for grammar!