-Brian!!
I wake up by my mother coming in my room
'Ok mom I'm awake
-You need to get to school
' Ok mom am going
I get up of bed and get dressed to go school I walk down the road and then catch bus to get to school am on bus when a boy pick on me
Hey nerd!
the boy hits me and i fall onto the ground then everyone falls at me i ignore them and continue lestening to music on the bus
Bus stops
i get off bus and go to school the boy comes and pushes me onto road wile i walk
Haha nerd
hey!
i look in front and of me and i see a big black truck coming for me
Skrrrrrr
the truck slam into me and i fall onconshoius
.......
ow....
i watke up in a bed and look around.
i don't now this place..
i look down and i see girl body
What wait the heck?!?!?!?!
another boy i don know rush in and put hand against wall
Want to do dirty?
I assume English is not your native language. You need to get some assistance in correcting a multitude of errors with your English and sentence structure.
Also, your story starts in the middle of nowhere and leaves the reader disoriented. That does not engage the reader and leaves the reader unable to connect to the few elements of plot you provide.
I would encourage you to continue your story, but please put some effort into making it more readable and enjoyable.