ATHOUR NOTE: If you have any tips let me know
As grid heard that he felt a rush of blood to his cheeks and felt embarrassed then he felt agery and emiditly got definsive "hay mine is plenty big!"
[not by normal god standards]
grid was confused and decide to ask what the system meant "what do you mean by god standards"
the system responded with [you have a small "dragon" by your races standards]
"but i am human"
[no your not]
then suddenly the stats screen poped up and he read through it
[Name: Grid Age:16
Race: lowest level god Class: magic swordsmen
Health: 45/50 Level: 2 next level: 5/40
Strength: 45 Speed: 37
Intel: 44 Defense: 37
Vitality: 36 Endurance: 20
mana: 88/88 mana regeneration: 30
[mana regeneration is per minute]
Skill Points: 30
Pity Points: 5
grid emeditly freaked out and asked "how did i become a god?"
[you were given the essence of a god but you did not meat the requirements to change your race at the time you were able to see that your race was metamorphosing at level one but sense you had another level stacked up at the time before you allowed the transformation to take place and then you emeaditly leveled up again so you did not reseave the notification]
grid was ecstatic, terrified, and curers.
and then he noticed the rest of his stats and his skill points and he could guess what the pity points came from.
AUTHORS NOTE: Hay guys so this was my first time writing the chapter myself instead of just doing story the story board tell me what you think and if you have any pointers let me know.
grid emeditly freaked out and asked "how did i become a god?"
That should be immediately.
grid was ecstatic, terrified, and curers.
That should be curious.
The rest you just need to capitalised properly and don't forget coma and full stop.
thanks
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"hay".........
hmm???