Interlude 1
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Was this the beginning I envisioned? Now, all my writing could do was carry on. The world beneath the keyboard would live, diverging from a set system.
World count: 5008
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Yo, ngl author, you manage to capture the essence of ORV in this one.
:D Thank you! Would you like to read another chapter?
@Coffeeporse67 Of course, I would love to read more
@Coffeeporse67 gladly! really captures what it would be like when humans have no choice but to kill and thrive for survival, I'm not sure if I could survive in these scenarios as well
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@Tac hey, can I ask a question?
@Sadre Can I ask you a question?
@Coffeeporse67 Yeah, sure.
@Sadre how do you think I could improve the story if I were to revise it? TBH, what I wrote was a long spew of random words.
@Coffeeporse67 oh uh, I'm not a writer, so i can't really help you on that one. Don't want to misguide you with my dumb ass opinion and ruin your story.
@Sadre Ok, fair enough XD. Still, thank you for sticking around to read my story.
@Coffeeporse67 yes?
@Tac Do you have any advice on how to make the story better?
@Coffeeporse67 Well not certainly I'm not pretty sure on how to write a story myself
@Tac Well, as a reader, you can still tell when a story if iffy or not, right? Still, thanks! :)