Inside Red Base Grif, Sarge and Ash are talking.
"Great idea, sir. I finally agree with you." Grif says to Sarge.
Donut walk into the base. "Hey, guys. We might have a problem here. Somebody, and I'm not gonna say who, might've thought that one of the cyborgs parts we need for Simmons' surgery was a cupholder. And somebody, not naming any names here, might've left it, along with their favorite smooth jazz compilation CD, in the Warthog. I just don't know who would do such a thing."
Ash looks at Grif. "Hmmm."
Grif ignores Ash. "Was it you?" He asks Donut.
"Yeah." Donut says and Ash gasps. "Uh, no!" He clears his throat and talks in a slightly deeper tone. "I mean, no. Dammit."
"Nice going, Pinky." Ash says to Donut.
"Grif." Sarge gets his attention. "You, Explosive brain and Easy Listening stroll on down and retrieve that part from the Warthog, posthaste!"
"Sir, do you think it's safe to be outside the base right now?" Grif asks. "For all we know, the Blues could've already fixed their tank. They could be advancing on us as we speak."
"Pansy." Ash mumbles.
Grif turns to Ash. "Shut it."
"Ahh, corny dogs!" Sarge says. "Even with Lopez helping 'em, it'll take them months to get that tank online. Much less to get it movin' again."
"I hope you're right, because if I see that tank headed towards me, I'm totally gonna freak out." Donut tells the three.
Currently on a hill in the middle of the canyon.
Tucker, Lopez and Shelia the tank are on a hill.
"Man, I sure hope they don't totally freak out when they see us coming." Tucker says.
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06-28-2022
hmmm, it feels so natural ash's intregration. I love it.
Well, you've caught up. So I do hope you enjoyed the story, since there won't be any more for tonight. But I'll get right back into it around noon tomorrow.
@Baxterbro hey you want my advice. Instead of posting new chapters. review those you wrote a second time. fix grammer errors and more. and add stuff if you feel like it. maybe even photos of the characters or the other teams convos etc. gets more word count. Though I do like what you are currently doing. I jsut don't want you to dry up so soon.
@Baxterbro Investing your effort into one book whole heartedly can produce great results when it's something you love.
@MoonWinchester I love Red Vs Blue and I love Ash as a character. (And I only have two other ocs that I really love.) And I can’t wait to get to later Seasons where he starts to find the truth about himself. And people posting comments on my stories(like yours) make me fell really motivated to write.
@Baxterbro I'll always be here and follow you all the way, rooting for you every second
@MoonWinchester you are a true solider. Unlike those dirty blues!
@Baxterbro buuut like, didn't we save you?