This is my first time publishing my writing, and feedback is appreciated. I have no beta reader except myself, and I do not plan on having a schedule for releases. I apologize if that bothers you; honestly, it would bug me too. I’m just too apathetic to care about consistent timing. Maybe someday.
CW:character death
For anyone not familiar with Monster Girl Encyclopedia, the setting is your typical world of swords and sorcery. Since the beginning of the world, the Order, led by the Chief God of Light and her chosen Heroes, fights back against the Demon Lord and his armies of monsters. Except, somewhere along the way, one strong hero joined forces with an aspiring succubus named Lilith, who usurped the previous Demon Lord with his help. The newly crowned Demon Lord then cast a spell that turned all the monsters into Monster Girls. Now, Monster Girls claim husbands instead of taking lives. Unfortunately, Monster Girls can only give birth to more Monster Girls, so humanity must keep fighting to avoid the extinction of both sides while Lilith bides her time, preparing for her second grand spell.
On to what's different from the original setting.
Roughly a millennium and a half after Lilith became Demon Lord, she has managed to cast her second grand spell, allowing Monster Girls to give birth to human males. As a result, society has advanced significantly, with features like better plumbing, architecture, and city planning popping up. With the help of magitech, one could consider their technology to be almost on par with Earth's, at least on the Monster Girl side. However, humanity continues to flounder technologically, and they are stuck in the dark ages. Humans visiting demon realms became increasingly common, before stopping altogether due to the lack of humans outside Monster Girl society. Well, almost. Only the radically anti-monster faction of the Order remains, desperately struggling to keep the old ways of humanity alive.
One fateful day, a young child begins to cross the street, oblivious to the solid red hand shining at him from across the sidewalk. A young man; the child's teacher, in fact; notices and rushes out to pull him back to the safety of the sidewalk. It's too late, however. A semi is coming toward them at the speed limit, and it's all the young man can do to shove the child out of harm's way back towards the sidewalk. His death is merciful, nearly painless in how quick it is. The young child will grow up haunted by that day, but that is a story for another time.
Moments later, realms away from Earth, on a planet known as Eos, an infant cries out. A lonely soul, stripped too soon of its greyscale life, has been given another chance. But not even the Fates can predict the consequences of repurposing unused thread; consequences that will span across nations and even dimensions...
One of the biggest issues I've had with MGE lore in the past is how much compulsory heterosexuality is baked into pretty much all of its setting mechanics. Becoming a monstergirl in that setting inherently means needing to feed off the sexual energy of men to survive, no matter what the person themselves wants. Bisexual monstergirls are also constrained by that heteronormative framing, where the "husband" is a fundamental concept (sometimes even a biologically-rooted one) in the setting and other female partners are considered far less important (they're not literally necessary for the monstergirl's survival after all). When it comes to the one trans-themed monstergirl, the Alp who starts off AMAB, the lore also makes zero distinction between "wanting to be a girl" and "being attracted to men" when it comes to what causes the "boy" to transform. Taken altogether, one gets the impression that the original creator doesn't really think there *is* a difference, and that gender and sexuality are essentially one and the same.
Obviously your story is going to be a properly trans narrative, and I'm curious to see how your take on the MGE lore will address or rewrite some of those deep-seated queerphobic setting mechanics that stem from an original creator who probably never gave much if any consideration to queer people in the first place when making them. I'm looking forward to seeing a version of a monstergirl setting that still allows for a diversity of different genders and sexualities within it!
Yeah, it’s a work in progress. Not sure yet what the spirit energy workaround will be.
@chaos-in-theory42 How about a system that mimics how things like public healthcare are funded through taxation? Like, just say that one human produces more than one mamono's worth of spirit energy, and say that the spell distributes that energy evenly amongst all mamono instead of just that human's partner. This also means intrinsic support for transgender humans.
This might not work since I've never read MGE, but I think it would be interesting.
@chaos-in-theory42 Legalise prostitution?
@kaithar no. I realized there's an item created by golems that's literally just powdered spirit energy, but apparently it's bland. I'm pretty sure they've started pressing the powder into pills though...
@chaos-in-theory42 it's a solution :p
Not a good solution, but a solution. Actually, I was picturing a setup that's like a trendy cafe where you can nibble the wait staff as well... like, you visit for lunch and order tea, cake and a bit of spirit energy... but it's still the same thing unless there's a non-sexual way of transferring energy that I don't know about (quite possible, honestly).
Also, regarding the original point, I strongly suspect that the reason MGE is so heteronormative is because it's all fundamentally the author's own kink that just happened to get popular enough to sell. It's surprisingly difficult to write the kind of material MGE has if the subject of the material isn't someone you could have a relationship with, perhaps the author has concluded that it is preferable to avoid trying to enlarge the mechanics to handle non-hetero pairing instead of doing a bad job of it. Look at the amount of BL that's a standard straight pairing with a cosmetic s*x change and some terrible trope writing... imagine if that level of quality was added under the intent of diversity. Just my theory on it though