Just like that fire blaze on her sword as Mana was converted into a fire element.
But the sword reverted back to its previous dull state due to the absence of Mana after it was converted into fire.
The fire on the sword also wasn't any different from normal flame, it was just normal fire blazing on a metal sword.
Azrael reckoned the fire wouldn't be able to do any real damage to an Orc or even a wolf.
She sighed softly before conjuring other elements.
After some time, she could now use various elements. Unfortunately, they were only useful for daily life.
It was just that she didn't expect it to also work with Mana.
You have to remember that materializing elements were extremely difficult despite it not having any substantial use.
Just as she was thinking about it, a notification appeared.
[Congratulations! You have reached Expert Rank in Mana Control.
You have gained 1,000,000 Mission Score, 100,000 Mission Points, 10,000,000
Coins, ]
[Congratulations! You are the first to have reached Expert Rank in Mana Control.
You have gained 2,000,000 Mission Score, 200,000 Mission Points, 2,000,000 Coins, ]
[Name: Azrael Voi
LIfeform: Stage 1
Age: 17
Title:Traitor
Stats
STR : 28
VIT : 28
INT : 26
STA : 26
AGI : 26
Mana Vein : 16 Veins
Stats Points : 5
Energy Control :
Mana ( Expert ) ]
[Mission Points: 334,090 ]
[Coins: 33,610,150 ]
[Mission Score: Azrael - 360,915 => 3,360,915]
After reading the notification, she finally couldn't hold on anymore.
She felt as if she would faint anytime.
She was feeling dizzy all over.
After some time, she finally broke out of her state.
She sighed exasperatedly as if she didn't want the rewards before saying self-flatteringly, "Hah, what can I do? I am just too talented."
Just as she was reveling in joy, a system announcement appeared, this time it was not just for her, it was for all the players.
[Announcement! The rankings for today are going to be updated in 15 seconds.]
[Ranking for Mission Score for your Galaxy
No. 1 ?
No. 2 ?
No. 3 ?
…………….]
[15..14..13..12..11..10……..]
Seeing that the rankings were going to be updated, Azrael couldn't help but anticipate it.
[5..4..3..2..1..0]
[Ranking for Mission Score for your Galaxy
No. 1 Azrael Voi – 3,360,915
No. 2 Yves Voi – 361,134
No. 3 Thomas Voi – 32,356
No. 4 Xi Xiao – 2,161
No. 5 Sen Kuro – 2,150
No. 6 Sheff Aron – 1,039
No. 7 Rei Ayanami – 1,036
No. 8 …………………… ]
Seeing that there were two people with the same surname as her in this world, Azrael was not surprised.
She thought while looking at their scores
'I expected this.
I already knew it from the moment the system stated talented people all over the Universe.
If I was transported, they would also likely be transported.
Though Grandpa doesn't have as much talent as Yves and mine, he is still better than everybody here.'
Azrael looked at the Mission Score of the guy named 'Yves Voi' and commented on it out loud
"It seems that Yves and grandpa have already transformed into 1st Stage Lifefrom, while Yves should have already reached Advanced for the Mana Control."
As she spoke about Yves, her tone softened and held a hint of gentleness in them.
She quickly shook her head to break away from those thoughts.
"Sigh~ Grandpa must have not realized that adding more Mana Veins is better.
Well, he can't be blamed, without adequate talent like Yves and mine, one can't comprehend and fathom the profundities and advantages of Mana, much less trying to train with it."
She said before turning toward a certain direction.
'There is a cluster of Mana there, not natural Mana accumulating but likely Mana of 1st Stage Lifeforms' she thought while smiling obscurely.
Monsters and Beasts, who have reached the 1st Stage would naturally have access to Mana
That is why the cluster of Mana was likely the Mana of monsters gathering nearby.
She swiftly added the 5 stats points she gained from killing the Orc she was training her Mana with, to her Mana Veins.
[Name: Azrael Voi
LIfeform: Stage 1
Age: 17
Title:Traitor
Stats
STR : 28
VIT : 28
INT : 26
STA : 26
AGI : 26
Mana Vein : 21 Veins
Stats Points : 0
Energy Control :
Mana ( Expert ) ]
She absorbed the Mana from her surroundings.
The Mana absorption rate and the quantity increased greatly.
She inhaled and exhaled deeply once before departing in the direction where the cluster of Mana was, her expression cold.
Just before our lovely Azrael commented on the rankings, all the players were in a state of uproar.
They couldn't believe their eyes.
More so for players who believed they would at least be in the top three.
They were dumbfounded and disconcerted at the huge difference between the Mission Scores.
On top of that, the top three had the same surname, with all three of them having Mission Scores over 30,000.
That was not where the absurdity ended.
As the one who was on top of Mission Score hierarchy, with the name of Azrael Voi, had a total value of more than 3M Mission Score.
While the second ranked only had a value of more than 300k Mission Scores.
That means the 1st ranked player's Mission Score was almost 10 times the 2nd ranked player.
Why is Rei there? What in the fu-
i couldn't think of any other name😂
@TheFrustratedOne WARNING: ONLY LONG BECAUSE OF EXPLANATIONS AND LENGTH OF ORIGINAL WORDS: around 9 mistakes/possibilities …………….……… — Just like that fire blaze on her sword —> comma after 'that' would probably be best; blazed. . . . . . — This was her talent, she could master —> I'd suggest using the : sign instead of a comma. Not sure how to describe the sign's use, but it is usually used in this type of situation. . . . . . — It was just that she didn't expect it —> If you pause in your mind after saying (or thinking) 'that', then I would suggest adding either a comma after that, or use … I'm not sure which would be best for this one. If you don't pause, then don't worry about this particular one. . . . . . — She sighed exasperatedly as if she didn't want the rewards before saying —> I'd say there are two possibilities with this one: 1. Leave it the way it is, or 2. Use a comma after exasperatedly and after rewards. I think either works. . . . . . — Just as she was reveling in joy, a system announcement appeared, this time it was not just for her, it was for all the players —> This can be considered two full sentences in one, which is not the best idea for any writing really. I'd suggest replacing the comma after appeared with a period and capitalizing the t in this. . . . . — Well, he can't be blamed, without adequate talent like like Yves and mine, one —> It would be best to replace the comma after blamed with a period and capitalizing the w in without. This is another of two full sentences. If I remember right, this is called a run-on sentence. . . . . . . — would naturally have access to Mana —> there is a missing period after Mana. . . . . . — training her Mana with, to her Mana Veins. —> it would be best to take away the comma here since there isn't really a need for it. . . . . . . — As the one who was on top of Mission Score hierarchy, with the name of Azrael Voi, had a total value of more than 3M Mission Score. —> it'd be best to take away As since the sentence didn't 'continue' to 'explain' something due to As being the first word. . . . . . — While the second ranked only had a value of more than 300k Mission Scores. —> the word While implies that it is half of a complete sentence, that it had something before the word. It would be best to take While away unless you figure out another half of a sentence that can go before the word, but still fit and be in the same sentence…………… Welp. That was all I could find in this chapter. Also… THIRD PLACE!!!
This story is wonderful so far. Please continue.
thank you for pointing out my mistakes
@TheFrustratedOne No problem. I’ll go back through the chapters for whatever I missed, after all, this story is BRILLIANT and I’d like to help out with mistakes.