After we wake up I was surprised to see little Bonney again. Luckily nothing happened between sexy Bonney and me last night, since she was in a moment of weakness and I didn't want to take advantage of her. We went to the bathroom and washed our faces and our teeth. We got dressed-up and went to prepare breakfast, apparently she likes the green robes I made for her, since she doesn't wear her old clothes anymore... maybe they give her a bad memory.
After breakfast, we went to help little Adam grow and after a couple of hour, mid day was aproaching and I finally passed the 600 ability points mark and can make my first Goddess Rainbow Fruit. This should give Bonney a nice permanent strength boost and also will unlock her potential to gain even more. I went to Bonnet, who was laying on her back probably tired of using her powers so much lately.
After we took a nice bath and we ate lunch, I called Bonney over, "Little Bonney can you switch back to Big Bonney, I need to talk about something serious about a little gift I have for you. It should help you tremendously in the masteries of your Devil Fruit powers and should boost your strength too. It hurts a little, atleast when I ate it, but your experience might be different... I will be with you the entire way, to support you and nurse you back to health... is entirely up to you though, if you don't want to I will not force you nor will I resent you." I said to Bonney with a solemn tone.
I see her thinking a little but she nodded in the end, she switched back to big Bonney and her robes opened up a little near the top and also her panties are showing. Need to control my self... I extended my arm and from my palm a rainbow light started growing, my ability points were draining fast and a round fruit started growing on it. After a flash of seven colors the Goddess fruit was created, and I think I heard a giggle coming from my mind... What was that... well whatever, I handed Bonney her new gift and she looks at it with wide eyes. Damn using almost all my ability points is bad... I feel so sluggish...
After a couple of minutes of just staring at it Bonney finally said something, "just when I thought you could surprise me anymore, you go ahead and made a devil fruit... I'm flattered but eating two fruits will kill me. I don..." Before she could finish I explained the properties of the Goddess fruit and once again she looked at me with wide eyes and then back at the fruit. "If it's like that, then I can't accept something so valuable. Look how much weaker you look just by making one, is that even healthy for you, please don't put you health at risk for gaining a shortcut for me... I may be weak now but I'll be stronger... just..." Once again I stopped her and just gave her a smile, then I said to her "It's not much I'll just vount this as training. It's only a fruit to me even if I know the value of it in your eyes, It will help me in the slightest to eat it or selling it... so you should eat it, as a part of my vow to you, since you stand under my cool shade it's only natural for a fruit or two to land on your head." I smile but then a shuckle entered my ears... she was laughing.
Without hesitation she just ate the Goddess fruit and I saw how she started glowing. She glowed with all the colors of the rainbow... and pink, lots of beautiful shades of pink, the light show continued getting brighter and brighter, she look to be in pain and I grabbed her hands and gave them a reasuring squeeze. She calmmed down a little but was still in pain, the light show got to the point were I couldn't keep my eyes opened and after what felt like hours, she stoped glowing.
"I made it..." she said as to reasure me and then she fainted, but before she hit herself on the wood floor, I caught her in my arms. She grew about a head taller, and her green robes were ripped completely in the front guess her sisters grew a lot too... I need to focus and get her to bed... But first she needs a bath... are this the impurities that are mentioned in cultivation novels... some of them got on me but it's ok... wait why didn't I secreted any when I ate mine...why does Bonney powers don't work on me.
After I washed our bodies clean, I laid Bonney on our bed. Better get dinner ready since the sun is setting, I can try out my fishing net to get some fat fishies. After about 20 minutes I catched 6 fat fishies, the lake is filled it them. After filleting and skinning them I threw the bones and skin at the lake for the other fishies to eat, and went to prepare dinner.
I started the two fire pits with the metal plates on top, I set one medium sized pot and filled it with clean water from my awesome bottle, and let it boil, then added some rice I bloomed on the spot and added some oil and let it sit... wish I had some salt but mr. Owner didn't even know what it was... can I only get it at water 7...
I seasoned all the fishies fillet with the spices I bought at Baterilla, I diced some garlic, ginger, onions, scallions and peppers and went to the improviced stove. I oiled a large pan and stir fried the vegetables then I added the fillets and added a little water and the ginger and garlic, which I diced again into mush, and cook it on a really low heat and waited.
I checked on Bonney again just to make sure she was fine... I need to make her new clothes and fixed her small robes too... She also need some shoes... better make that thight high boots though, I missed those... Better wait until she wakes up to make her new robes though, don't want to startle her while taking her... Measurements... better get back to the food before I jump at her...
The food was ready and almost like she was waiting for the food, little Bonney appears from the bed room door, she is wearing her fixed robes. I heard a small rumble and she blushed a little, I smile at her and invited her to sit with me and we ate our dinner of white rice with with stir fried fish with a side of avocado. Even if I didn't use salt on the rice... the fish turned out great... Hopefully I don't gain too much weight with my current comsumption rate... I don't wanna end up like Linlin... please whoever is listening... I think I heard that giggle again...
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i would give you a cookie of appreciation but it seems to have disappeared.
Ofcourse it disapear... You are eating it
No worries though I found some
are you really going for the angle that an oceanic island doesn't have salt? There is salt in all the water surrounding it and you can even taste it in the air if it is a harbor town. I know water 7 has special salt from the aqua lagune but that doesn't mean the rest of the world doesn't know what salt is.
some other notes, "just when I though" should be just when I thought, and sister should be plural to sisters as there are 2 of them unless they have grown to be one superlarge uni-boob.
But I like your story and the way you're going about it, not rushing, letting things develop, you might go a bit too fast in the carnal relationship direction but otherwise nicely done OC away from the main cast.
Well when Sanji tasted salt for the first time it was in water seven. He is a cook so I took it for granted. But there would be a fix for the salt issue. I know what you mean that there should be salt at the market and all since they live near the ocean.
For the carnal stuff developement, just imagine, being an otaku weebo that has a ton of wifus, husbandos, etc. Then suddenly you meet one of the top of your favorite anime in person... That is basically the love at first sight tag. Bonney's affection are related to the high charisma, I think it's similar to Boa Hancock, but a lot less extreme, her charisma is over 9,000.
As for the mistakes give me a sec. Also a masive uni-boob XD
Done thanks for pointing those out
@Ruiso, I didn't remember that Sanji said that but that could be a decent explanation (or a plot hole in the original story). And I definitely get the idea of suddenly seeing a fictitious person you liked being very close being tempting and the way you write lily's perspective is actually quite funny and understandable from her side. It's just that Bonney seems to be reacting to the looks and it gives the feeling that in a few nights their sleeping together is going to become 'sleeping together'.
The reason I just caution for rushing this is that Bonney was just betrayed, her grandmother killed and she condemned to a life of slavery. She manages to escape then suddenly meets a very pretty and divine lady who knows a lot about her and wants her help. So her whole life is destroyed, all she knew is destroyed everything she thought about her future is changed. She won't have a stable sense of self or a stable sense of self.
A few days of happiness and care could let a 16-year-old girl believe it's love, but immediately jumping into a fully sexual relationship would twist her whole psychological self around lily as the center of her world. It can be an interesting relationship to explore and could throw up some complications later of dependency that might be interesting.
But if you take a bit more time to let her recover her worldview and center herself and slowly build a relationship between lily and Bonney step for step you can create a relationship with a bit more depth beyond devotion and mild brainwashing to just have fun.
Of course, you could just ignore the mental and character development and focus more on the story. Just keep it simple and light-hearted, collect all the waifus for the crew and have fun sailing the sea, and having adventures. But I think you could make the story a bit better by going for the character growth beyond the simple layers.
Still looking forward to the story as the story itself is interesting, with some actual variation in fruit from the normal logia and being free to explore whilst still having the opportunity to interact with the Strawhats or the fallout from their actions. So have a cookie
@neurocomia well the salt incident with Sanji was when he learn from the old man in water 7, that even a simple dish with a little bit of salt would turn really good. He also tells Sanji the method for extracting salt from the sea.
Bonney's feelings are being affected by Lily's increasing Charisma, the ordinary good looking individual aside from exceptions like Hancock is around 25, her defense against lust is actually turning into a kid. Since a kid doesn't have sexual desires, she knows she is falling for Lily but with all the sh*t she has been through, she doesn't want to have that sort of relations. It will happen after Bonney's sh*t has been sorted. The Charisma in itself isn't brainwashing, it's basically like how Boa Hancock just nned to look at someone and that person regardless of gender would feel their lust level rising, it's just that Lily's charisma stat is not as high as Hancock.
Also it was Bonney's aunt that was killed protecting her while the one that sold her out was the major of another island that would not be mentioned. I'm not gonna say it was her mom, cus there are rumors that Bonney is a child of Big Mom... Btw she and her aunt are not blood related, for the stated reason since I want my story to be as aqurate as I can get it as long as I doesn't f*ck me over. The story is based around 12-15 years before the start of the show, if you or anyone reading this comment wants to know as I don't think it would be immersive enough to officially stated in the novel.
@Ruiso interesting to know the date, and nice to know you keep track of details like that, they just make the world setting a lot more alive.
@neurocomia its easier to do a world setting when there is an already one availible and I just need to add, but not break it.
The official year is close to a special event that I'll be messing with... that I may or may not has linked to Bonney's past, my past since her official past is still a mistery. I think there is enough clues in this story to find that link... Please if anyone is reafing this and you know what event i'm talking about don't spoil it for the others.
Just gonna point out that in the very start, helmeppo flipped out because rika's onigiri contained sugar and not salt...