My name is QingTan [清谈]. Family name Qiang [強]. Courtesy Name QingLei [清雷].
I am an orphan found and raised by the Unit commander. I am the so called long lost son of Qiang[強]Shenyuan[深淵]. The former right hand man of the emperor, and the former Unit commander.
I Joined the army at the age of 17.
I became JiangJun for the fifth Division at the age of 23.
I led the fifth division through the war with the Liyu people during my second month as Jiangjun.
I beheaded the third division's Jiangjun, PanHe [磐河], after he defected during my 15th month as JiangJun.
I led the fifth and fourth division with BaoPao [暴咆], The JiangJun of the Fourth division, through the war with Jian Kingdom.
Then, I led my division to the war with the Shi People.
There, I lost my head.
And there, My soldiers lost their JiangJun.
What does one say to the fool who laughs at the face of death?
With spite lacing his voice like venom?
I, the loyal dog of the Golden Harvest empire.
I, the hero of our Ying people.
Led myself and my soldiers to our doom.
It was one such mistake I thought I would not make.
Let me begin again,
I am QingTan.
A street urchin at Jinhua capital.
And an orphan without parents.
I see you chose to redo the names. I don't think I plan on writing anything so you should take it upon yourself to explain. Lol