Ren
Age : 3
Parents : Reo / Saya
Gender : Male
Mana : 342
A reincarnater who was spending most of his time playing games. Died at the age of 15 in his past life. In this world, he has dark brown hair and brown eyes. He hates to get involved in troubles. Has a family of a father and two mothers and 9 sisters. He is the youngest in the family. He was collecting used panties like a manga protagonist when he was a baby because he was bored and have nothing to do.
Sophia
Age : 18
Parents : Reo / Saya
Gender : Female
Mana : 312
Ren's oldest sister. She wants Ren to spend more time with her. She gets jealous when Ren complements his other sisters.
Rem
Age : 16
Parents : Reo / Saya
Gender : Female
Mana : 455
Aurora
Age : 14
Parents : Reo / Saya
Gender : Female
Mana : 281
Likes swords. swordsmanship is her hobby. too busy training with swords. She handles the sword better than Violet. She has a Hardworking and tomboy personality.
Eliana
Age : 7
Parents : Reo / Saya
Gender : Female
Mana : 177
Lily
Age : 5
Parents : Reo / Saya
Gender : Female
Mana : 143
She gets interested in what her family is doing. She has a Childish and Friendly personality.
Violet
Age : 17
Parents : Reo / Claire
Gender : Female
Mana : 1132
She has the highest magical power between her sisters. She doesn't stay at home so much because she works as an adventurer. She is brave (Clair note: she is an idiot).
Nora
Age : 12
Parents : Reo / Claire
Gender : female
Mana : 932
She is twin with Nana. She cares so much about her important books. She got so angry when she learned that Ren stole her book then she threatened him that she will strip him naked if he doesn't return the book.
Nana
Age : 12
Parents : Reo / Claire
Gender : female
Mana : 928
Camilla
Age : 3
Parents : Reo / Claire
Gender : female
Mana : 137
The youngest sister. She acts cold toward Ren for an unknown reason. She has a calm personality like her mom.
this novel is droped right? such a shame... well it was fun while it lasted
And till this day no update...
You can add this information to the glossary on the main page of the story, and you can compress it using the spoiler tag.
the fighting scene of chapter 3 is less intense. Can you make a fighting scenes more intense, interesting.. like for an example like this "She slammed against my sword from overhead and dodged with a backflip, but then, she did an upward kick at my chin immediately after that…."
if you do that in your novel it will become awesome!!!
i think that you are right but fight in chapter 3 was mean to show us the difference of strength between really strong humans and dark lords so making it into more intense fight would make it feel less one sided.
Why did you stop broo