I open my eyes to see a brightly illuminated ceiling and tons of plushies all around me and a crying woman..
A crying woman...
What the heck???
"Young miss! Waaaahhh! Young miss, you're finally awake!" said the woman while wailing like she just encountered god
"Wha...?"
'Okay calm down Nadina, everything's okay... not. Whatever, I'll try asking something without rounding any suspicion'
"May I ask what happened?"
Contrary to what I was expecting, the maid just stared at me, dumbfounded, and blinked a few times.
"Umm excuse me, are you listening?"
"Ahh! I'm so sorry miss, I'm really sorry. Right, umm, you were stalk--ahem, I mean watching your fiance, Prince Ace, when he suddenly looked up at you. But at that time, you were caught off guard and accidentally fell off the stool you were on and hit your head really hard. Young miss hasn't woken up for 4 days already!"
"Mmm okay, I request you to write down everything you know about me"
"P-pardon me?"
"I. Request. You. To. Write. Down. Everything. You. Know. About. Me."
"S-s-sorry! Right away miss!"
'... Do I look that scary?'
"Here you go, I wrote down everything I know about you miss"
I took a look at the paper and glanced up at my maid "Everything on here is the TRUTH right?"
"Y--no.."
Suddenly, the temperature in the room seems to have dropped down a few degrees. "I want the truth and only the truth, not a bunch of your useless flattering"
"I'm so sorry, I'll re-write it, miss!"
And so after she re-wrote the information and handed it to me while shivering like a bullied puppy. And so, I took a look at the info:
Nadina Loctine
3 years old
Princess of Frostillia
Magic Elements: To be tested at the age of 5
Personality: Spoiled, Bratty and very narcissistic
Fiance: Crown Prince Ace Fairmond of Pafizika
Doted on by your whole family
... ... ... Nadina.com has broken down ... ... ...
Ohh god, I swear I just got a huge headache coming my way. My memory isn't bad, in fact, it's really good. And I would recognize the name 'Nadina Loctine' anywhere.
It's from that really crappy otome game that I randomly created because I was really bored. Its name is 'Doki Doki You Stole My Heart Desu". Aside from it's terrible naming sense (which I swear I didn't come up with), each of the 5 storylines were utter crap.
In the story 'Doki Doki You Stole My Heart Desu' there were 5 capture targets. Ace (my fiance), Spade (my brother), Liam, Reito and Myers. To put it all in one sentence.. they became really stupid after falling in love with the heroine.
If I had to simplify what I just said, before they met the heroine their IQ's were well over 150, afterwards, it dropped down to -150.
I probably ended up giving the worst endings in all the routes to the villain because I was venting out my anger at that time. Haa... I really regret that now.
In Ace's route, the villain gets a grand public execution.
In Spade's route, the villain get's tortured to death in the Loctine family's secret dungeon.
In Liam's route, the villain gets thrown off a cruise and all the nobles watch as she gets eaten by sharks
In Reito's route, the villain becomes a beggar and dies from starvation.
In Myers's route, the villain turns into a human stick and dies from extensive blood loss.
And the worst thing? I'm the villainess of the story (yayyy... not), ayy, did I offend some god in my previous life or what?
"Miss? You should get up and go to your parent, they were very worried about you all this time"
"Okayyy, coming"
I got off the bed and dressed up, and while I was passing by, I took a look in the mirror and OH MY GOSH, I LOOK ADORABLE.
Ehh, such a pity the previous villainess never really used her face for anything useful.
As I walked down the hallways I passed by many maids and butlers. Some had fearful faces while the rest tried to hide the disappointment and mocking in their eyes, but I'm not stupid and I know what they're thinking. After all, I've lived my whole life filled with these looks. And honestly, I've learned to not give two sh*ts about it. I mean, why waste your life caring about what the heck other people are thinking instead of just focusing on what you want? They can go and burn off all the excess brain cells in their miniature brain, while wasting all that extra effort to mock me all they want. In the end, it's only because they're too afraid to confront me of their thoughts, that they have to resort to physiological attacks instead, and anyone dumb enough to fall for that.... I.. have no words for them.
What can I say? I rarely get attached to things, so I'm pretty good at adapting with any situation I'm thrown in. As long as I'm not bored.
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"Nadina, what grades did you get on your most recent test?"
"Momma, I got a 99! I was the best in my grade!"
"WHAT ONLY 99?! You trash, our family is full of smart people with successful couriers. If you're going to present me with such failures, don't appear in front of us."
"B-but.."
"No buts. Your father and I are going on another business trip, go earn money to eat by yourself. We won't give money to failures like you, next time we see such disgusting grades again, you're disowned."
"Y-yes mother"
'B-but it's my birthday'
"We are doing this for your own good, it's all for you. We only reward the perfect children and won't waste our time on garbage."
"I-I understand..*hic* father "
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I jolt back to reality, only to realize I was dozing off while thinking about the past again. Mmm... for my dear mother and father in hell (god must be dumb if they went to heaven), f*ck you.
Aaa... that feels better. I've never retaliated against them, much less curse them when I was alive. But ever since I was reincarnated, I was able to look at things in a more logical standpoint and I'm laughing at the fact that they probably don't even know I've found a few pieces of their old report cards. They were disastrous, because I saw marks like 69, 74, 58, ect. If I'm trash, then what are they? The exclusive garbage among the trash?
After passing through many hallways and walking down two flights of stairs, I arrived in front of a pair of really imposing doors and stared at it as it stood before me. Then, I opened them and went in, but what I saw next left me dumbfounded.
"Honey!"
"Sweetie"
"Sis!"
Now I wish she won't be a generic MC in a otome game incarnation... Cuz if so all those brainless shining shimmering in heat c*cks will flood to her like hungry maggots and she the MC will fell for them that's yuck. Lol
If will be fun if she destroy their life instead just for fun since she is bored lololol
Don't worry, it's not romance x'P
Though, they might become friends, however, they'll just be another person whom the MC knows in the billions of worlds out there
Sorry, but it bothered me a lot when I read it, it's not Nadina.com it's Nadina.exe, .com is for websites while .exe is for programs.
@Alex_Grant it does say something about the age of the author: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COM_file
but these are actual executable files......
MC is already low IQ so from here on out I will not expect much from her...
Sounds like I am totally dissing this work of fiction, I am and I am not, I hope the Author looks at these comments with a grain of salt.
From my perspective she is 17 years old, certainly teens are a bit stupid, but I would hope that this girl would have more brain power than she is currently displaying.
If it were me... I was a rather reclusive 17 year old, I left school at 16 went on to do a pre course for what I wanted to train for, I found myself a cheap craphole to live in, ate cheap crappy food. I was not a self sufficient person, I had my Parents supporting me most of the way. I was incredibly selfish but even then I realized how much I needed my Parents...
If that were me, I would miss them terribly, I would feel inconsolable and alone, the me then would be lost and forlorn, now apparently her family didn't give her love? we have no history of that at all, we only see that this is one of her requests, was she abused? was she neglected? we have no idea...
If she was abused then it sounds like the right path to find a new life... but if she were like me, then I would have demanded that I be returned, sure that is cocky for a mere mortal to make demands, but it is in line with that Goddesses demeanor, she is fully apologetic willing to make amends for murdering her...
If she was unable to send me back to my world, then I would have asked for a world that was similar to the one I had just left... I would also ask that some kind of compensation was given to my Parents for this wrongful death, that at least is fair unless she doesn't give a sh*t about them at all... I would also ask for compensation as in all living expenses till I am fully settled in the world, I would not want to be stuck in someone elses home and raised by strangers... I am 17... so make myself go into that world with any enhancements necessary to live there possible, at the age I am... (by enhancements I mean awareness of language and cultural norms etc to avoid difficulties)
Why allow myself to be thrown into a crazy ass world without a care? she had no clue where she was going to be dumped and was ill prepared... she made no requests at all, I mean what if she got sent to Nazi Germany and she was a Jew? I am sure you can understand my reasoning when I said she was ill prepared... anyway it is easy to critique in hindsight, but since we can talk to the author through these comments I hope you will think about it a bit more.
@KuqKu I.. really have nothing to say to that. Honestly, no matter how many times I read it over, I can't get over how cringey and lack of sense there is here.
I'm contantly trying to improve certain aspects of the story, but honestly, I'm not that great at writing, so I sincerely thank you for the feedback, because I'm always trying to make this little piece of work better. There are quite I few things that you've mentioned which I've never noticed before and now that I do, yeeaaaah....
I honestly have only read novels on Wattpad and stuff, so all my inspiration comes off of that, therefore there are probably many sides which I've never considered. I'll try to look at it from different standpoints and correct all the bad parts in my later chapters. So yep, thanks a ton for taking the time to write all this and aid me in the development of my novel. Sorry 'bout all those..... stupid things! I should probably look at things in a less... naive way.
Though, I believe that she gets... a little smarter near the newest chapters, as I am constantly improving my pieces of writing. I'm reconsidering if I should take away some portions where honestly, the MC is just being plain stupid, and it's not even funny. Once again, this is my first story and since I have next to 0 experience in all this, comments like yours really do help me as I strive to be a better author. Thank you!
Honestly, I don't really care how vicious and dissing people are, as long as it helps me, then whatever. If I were to create a review on this story, I'd probably be able to write.... quite a few essays of the things that are totally unlogical and just plain crap (well I mean, there wasn't much logic in a made up world in the first place).
I made a few edits near the end to.... not make this chapter as crappy as it already is, so if you want, you can go and take a look at it.