Chapter 1 – New Life in « The Rise of The Demon God »
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Read it on Amazon/Kindle the tittle is The Rise Of The Extra’s : Volume 1, thanks you 😊
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Great start I'm hooked
Okay, first of all, this is not how you write a story, it's a summery. Second, it is way too fast paced.
Thanks you for reading my story 😊
There are several ways to write and each writer has their own way, I don't think we should all be the same way and I know it's fast because I myself don't like slow stories and still I write for me so thank you for reading
@IsseiVeskitos I recommend you give a read to anything that's not a Webnovel and read your own material. While I agree that everyone writes differently try taking a critical eyes to your work and the work of someone else's, and compare it.
@SthUnlimited Ok