Chapter 51 - The Aftermath
“Arghhh!!” The child screamed into the night like a crazed beast and fell to the ground. As the three finally returned to who they were.
The fight had only lasted for a few moments. A slaughter of everything that stood in her way, and that denied their happiness.
The child was no longer the short nine-year-old; instead, her body was permanently changed.
Anna gripped her head as it ached.
Cough!
She coughed a portion of sickly black blood filled with unstable mana.
In the grand scheme of things, it was only for a moment. Their hearts and souls resonated beyond simple trust, bending and morphing around one single desire. The elimination of one of the ones they hated.
Now that was over, they have split again.
[Errgh… We need to…] (Syrus)
[Argh…] (Luna)
[Aerrraa….] (Eva)
And they absolutely despised the experience that occurred within them during the brief encounter.
Syrus tried to stand up, but her knees wobbled as she was unable to put her strength into them.
Their body had taken substantial damage throughout the small encounter. Not only from enemy attacks but also through the actions caused by a combination of instinct and intelligence.
“W-h..ere’s Dad… Wher-s Mum?!" Eva cried as her hands grabbed the dirt as she tried to drag herself forward.
Luna also tried to move forward along with Eva, while Syrus tried to circulate blood through their body and sort out the damage.
There was no time to talk; they just had to find their parents.
Their mana supply was already near empty when the fight was over, but now that the fight was over, it had dropped even further.
Luna already knew she didn’t have enough mana to use her Moonlight to heal themselves. Syrus, on the other hand, could still use her Blood attribute to administer minor healing, but not only that, she needed to expel blood from their body that contained traces of other attribute mana as it was damaging them.
The bloody Anna, after a long and hard crawl, made it back to their house… They examined the area where her parents were last seen, but there was nothing but junk and parts of houses scattered around.
She then made it to the doorless entrance of their home. The fire that had attacked it had stopped before it finished destroying everything. Perhaps it was the cool breeze or the fire-resistant wood used, either way, all it meant was that Syrus did have to stop it.
It was partly burned down, and parts of it had been thrown around.
Eva coughed more blood and screamed, “MUM!” "DAD!” “Where are you!?”
Luna as well, “Please! Where are you!?”
Syrus held back from yelling anything as the sight of their burned home shook her.
They crawled around their broken home for minutes and found nothing. They went back outside to where they were before. Then back inside, then out again.
Luna finally gave up and said, [Let’s rest… We need to heal ourselves.]
Eva nodded with their body and just went silent. She didn’t enter their Soul Space, and instead just sat there quietly.
None of them talked to each other. Each could feel that the others were hurting.
Syrus continued to repair the body by circulating the blood and improper mana out. It took a while for Eva–who was lost in their own thoughts–to realise what Syrus was doing, but when she did, she helped by using Manipulation to drag out the leftover mana they absorbed out of the body.
Once they had recovered enough mana, Luna used Moonlight to properly start the healing process.
Whatever happened when Anna fought in that state, they wouldn’t be able to replicate it now. The process of using external mana from other sources made only basic theoretical sense to Eva, but any practical practice of it was insane–ignoring the fact that their body with instinct and theoretical knowledge alone somehow made an impossible feat possible.
While they kind of knew what they did while in that state, the issue was that, at best, the sequence of events was a vague recollection.
As such, the leftover mana that the body took in but wasn't able to absorb properly was still lying in the body, causing damage.
The body also started feeling the aftereffects of the stress from the rapid growth. During the fight, a large amount of mana was used with Syrus’s Blood attribute to keep the body moving properly despite the rapid changes.
After some time, they were finally able to stand up again. Syrus spoke, “Now… let’s search again.”
They went through every room of the house. The kitchen was empty, their room was empty, but their notebook was still intact, if not a little singed under their bed.
Then they entered their parents' room through the curtain that separated them. Syrus gripped the wooden pendant crafted by George on their sixth birthday. The room was devastated by the fire.
The large pile of papers for classes was simply a pile of ashes. The desk George used to carve items before bed collapsed. The bed had broken under the burned wooden planks of the roof, and the wall had fallen apart, revealing the burning forest.
“...They… can’t…” Eva cried tears of grief and longing. “WHY!”
“I…I..” Luna's throat shook as she tried to find the courage to say the words she felt she needed to say.
However, Syrus would have none of that. “Don’t you dare blame yourself, Luna.”
Eva added, “If you do… I’ll do anything in my power to punch you in the face.”
Anna moved through the last remaining room. The bathroom. At this point, Anna had no idea she was even trying to find… She just wanted to find one trace of where their parents could be.
Like every other room, it was a mess. Then Anna stopped as she noticed her reflection in the broken bathroom on the floor.
Eva instantly felt despair when she looked into the mirror and said, “What… No…”
There were still a lot of things that had happened in the last hour that they hadn’t processed yet. For Eva, their appearance change was one of them. But now that it was facing her directly, she was finally able to process it.
“Our hair, our hair.” Eva manically grabbed the strains of it as it flipped down in front of her face as she stared at the reflection in the broken mirror. “Go back, go back, go back, go back, it’s supposed to be black!”
If someone saw Anna now, they would assume she would be around fifteen to sixteen years old, perhaps older.
Her eyes had settled into their previous transformation. Both her eyes were a bloody amber, but her left was slightly brighter.
Anna’s hair had grown rapidly and, by the end, had stretched down to her knees. It was an uneven mess of crimson red and white, with the tips shifting to brown.
Her clothes were torn thanks to the sword slashes and beatings into the ground she received and the stretching caused by her growth. However, not a speck of her skin was showing, as, besides her face, blood had hardened all over her body as a protective shell.
Black hair and brown eyes were the gifts she received from her parents, and they were both taken from her.
For the most part, no matter where one was from, people didn’t care much about their hair and eye colour, even among families, as why would they? Those physical aspects could easily change with attributes. However, for Eva, losing that connection hurt deeply.
Eva continued to cry and pull at her hair.
Their physical appearance did look mostly like a grown-up version of her nine-year-old self. However, her face was sharper than either of her parents, and the obvious small horn that was on the left side of her forehead was a noticeable difference.
[We need to look around.] (Syrus)
[...] (Eva)
[We need to see if there is anyone else around.] (Syrus)
With their parents not in sight, they needed to make sure that everyone else was okay.
[...That’s right…] Luna took control, [If there is anyone left, we need to find them and help them.] Luna realised she was too lost in her own depression; her help would be necessary if there were any survivors.
Eva was mentally worn out and could no longer concentrate on anything, so as Luna began moving, she left the body to rest in the Soul Space. Syrus and Luna wanted to go and comfort her, but both knew neither was in the right mindset to do that.
None of them knew the exact time when the village was attacked, but they expected it wouldn't be long before they were startled awake, and when Syrus woke up, it was probably due to some of the movements of the attackers.
Syrus guessed that the attack was supposed to be a stealthy operation. Due to the evidence in play and the words that were spoken between the attackers. She didn’t know how many people were assassinated in their homes before Mern’s counterattack blew up his own house and alerted everyone, but there was a good chance many had already died.
When that happened, the whole village was alerted, but there wasn’t much that simple villages could do against trained soldiers. House after house was littered with corpses, somewhere clearing, thrown back inside a house if they died outside. Syrus surmised that this was done so the corpses could be burned with the houses.
People they knew and cared about... Mern, Henry, Albert, and so many others were just dead now.
They returned to Elly’s house, which was also destroyed, but they turned to where the trapdoor would be and removed the large cupboard that was lying on top of it. The door was still locked, so Syrus yanked it up, breaking the locks.
“They aren’t here.” Luna worriedly looked down, not noticing any of the children.
However, Syrus smiled. She jumped down the hole and walked to the small door that led nowhere in the basement. [I had a peek earlier, but it does go on for ages.] She had opened the door, and there were signs of tiny footprints in the dirt. [So, this was what they meant by adding extra security.]
It didn’t take long for them to realise that having the children stay here wasn’t just for the ease of it, but so that they would have an escape. It also explained Elly’s attitude when Anna didn’t want to stay.
[So Elly and the children could be alive.] Luna was so thankful for Eva’s decision to warn their parents; it meant some lives, and the innocent lives were at least left alive.
[Potentially, depends where the exit ends up.] The tunnel wasn’t lit, so they had no idea how long it went on.
They stared into the long, dark tunnel for a long time.
[We should follow…] (Luna)
[Yes, but our body is likely to collapse from exhaustion soon.] Syrus warned, [And I’m not sure if we can catch up to them if they were running this whole time.]
Syrus, who was keeping constant track of the body, realised they wouldn’t be able to stay conscious for long. The adrenaline was wearing off, and using her Blood attribute to keep the body moving couldn’t last forever, especially after the body still needed to rest after all the pain and stress it underwent.
Syrus scratched their head and thought for a few seconds, [Let’s look for some proper clothes and see if we can find anything before we head out… I doubt we will be back.]
[...] Luna sorrowfully agreed.
Syrus and Luna return to their house and rummage through their parents' belongings, looking for clothes. They could’ve chosen any house to find clothes that would fit their size, and there were certainly better options for that, but they wanted something from their parents.
[A journal, is it Mums?] (Luna)
Syrus opened it, [No, it looks like Dad’s.] She immediately closed it again; it wasn’t the time to look through it.
[That seems to be everything.] (Syrus)
[Besides clothes, nothing of mother's…] (Luna)
[Don’t say that. We still have her most recent gift.] (Syrus)
Luna nodded, Syrus was right, there was the manipulation book Jen made, and it was still safe along with her notebook.
[Okay, now at least we need to get out of here… We need to find a place to stay that’s outside the village in case any more attackers come back.] (Syrus)
[Once we do… we need to talk with Lilly.] Luna's concern for Lilly was huge; she didn’t want her to fall back into a depressive state again. And maybe, in the process, she would stop herself from falling.
[.............Yes…] Syrus agreed, but for the first time in her life, she was afraid of having a conversation.
Before leaving the village, Syrus closed the basement door and blocked the path to it again when she hopped back down. Just in case anyone came back looking. After a quick debate, they decided to try and travel through the tunnel.
However, as Syrus feared, after a few minutes of travelling, they began to collapse from exhaustion.
TFTC
Thanks for reading
[A journey, it is Mums?] (Luna)
Journal?? Journey doesn't seem to make sense here.
Luna was concerned that Lilly was huge
Big Lilly. I think its funny imagining Lilly like 8 feet tall even if it's probably a typo
Once again there's a lot to process both in and out of the authors note. Tyftc
Thanks for reading and the grammar fixes. Yeah the second is a mistake, but that is a funny image .
The mana outburst teleported Jen and George away to "safety" and thus whether they survived is entirely dependent on where they got sent and their condition on arrival.
Big comment time
Typo
she helped by using Manipulation to drag out the left mana they absorbed out of the body.
Leftover not left?
Oops I missed one. The good thing about rereading a chapter multiple times to analyze a bunch of stuff is that you notice them
Appearance:
[Hmm… I’m glad it didn’t happen… but I wonder what would happen to our appearance… if we didn’t hold back the changes.] (Lilly)
[Hrmm? Oh yeah, you only had one gift, ummm, yeah. Not sure, five gifts is a lot.]
From chapter 13
... yeah it sure would be a lot. Doubt it'd be as much as this though.
They also mention how itd probably be pink if they all mixed
Pink is nowhere to be found.
Little detail I noticed:
Syrus's hair was crimson red (or uh "bright red hair with crimson eyes" in ch 2, but ch 2 also describes lunas eyes as "light pink" when they're described as "pale pink" in ch 1 and 34. This is the kind of trivial discrepancy you notice when you've read something too much.)
Luna's hair was white
Eva's hair was brown
Anlesa's hair is crimson red and white fading to brown.
I originally thought it had something to do with attributes, but the choice of white instead of pink, and the specific use of "crimson red" makes me think its past life hair colors. The brown also wouldn't fit with any attributes.
The horn is clearly from Eva's 2nd attribute. They eyes are an interesting case though. The amber definitely comes from Eva's 2nd. But maybe some blood since they're "bloody amber" the lighter one might also be something from Luna, no clue though, and the change from "pale pink" to "light pink" (ch34) in Lunas soul space appearance is another screw in that theory that I don't know how to manage.
As for her age, I think she de-aged after the fight to a teenager.
and above in purple light was a woman with a flaming sword aimed at his head.
This line from chapter 50 pretty clearly says "woman" and I wouldn't consider someone who looks 15-16 a woman.
So my speculation (with no evidence supporting it) is that their body changed to the age Lilly was when she died. I don't know why it would do that, especially since Eva aged down to 9 in soul space, but I felt like throwing that idea out there.
Going forward:
Where to go from here is the big question. The first problem is what do you do about public attributes. The plan was fire and manipulation, but with that appearance, I don't think anyone would believe that. My guess is fire and exotic or manipulation and exotic depending on what they choose to do.
Money is another problem. I can't imagine living off the land would work out too well, so they need money. Im a little surprised they didn't loot the corpses for money (since they were pillaging they definitely had stuff on them.) But that probably didn't even come to mind in the moment. They have a few options i can think of:
1: sell stuff made with manipulation. That would probably be emotionally taxing on Eva, but for their own survival she might have to push past that.
2: mercenary/hunting work. Would be tough, and I don't even know if anyone would even hire Anna, but it's still a possibility
3: traveling healer. This is would put a very large target on their back from the church (if they don't have one already), but if they're going to act against the church anyways, it might be fine to set them off early. Probably a terrible idea though.
4: baggage carrier. This was a wild idea I had yesterday. Use space magic to act as a baggage carrier (probably for a merchant). Luna doesn't know much space magic besides teleporting though (at least I don't think she does)
As for their main objective for now I can see it as a few things (pure speculation)
1: take down the Aurora church. That's a giant task, but I can imagine Luna going really hard for that. Seems more like a long term goal though.
2: find elly and the other kids. Depending where the tunnel goes that's probably a task in it of itself.
3: look for Jen and George. Having their death be ambiguous means that's something they will probably do at some point unless they get confirmation they're dead.
4: survive. Might be hard enough for that to be their main focus for a while
5: something from Jen's journal maybe? Maybe try to find their grandparents if they're even alive. Jen and George are 34 and 35 iirc and IDK the average lifespan in this world so they could be dead already.
Authors note:
I'm glad you made the childhood arc longer. 25 chapters would have been a lot less interesting for me.
I'm so glad eva had character development before now. I might have dropped it if Eva remained like she was at the start. Old Eva was honestly not very enjoyable to read. How she acted during their 6th birthday was honestly kind of a mood killer.
If I had to rate the characters from favorite to least favorite my list would probably be
Luna
Eva and Jen
Syrus
George
Luna is honestly not first place by a lot.
I can't choose between Jen and Eva. I like them for different reasons
Syrus honestly is only that low because I know so little about her first life.
George is great but someone has to be last place. It's more process of elimination than anything against George.
Misc thoughts:
Space is a nothing:
So I know that Luna probably doesn't know a lot of space magic, but it's only been used 3 times the entire story.
Once in the mana outburst at the end of 49
And twice in ch 50 with teleporting behind people. It was mentioned early on that practicing space magic was something that had to be done on its own, but there was never any mention of actually practicing it. So...did she practice it?
Other villages:
There's 8 farming villages on the border near Ihere. I'm wondering if they attacked any of the other 8 as well. If you only needed to attack one #4 would be the ideal choice due to its longer distance from the other villages.
Eva's 2nd attribute:
Oh wow I'm talking about it again how surprising. (I'm not going to talk a lot this time)
[Examples of more common exotic gifts would be Ferocity, Instinct, Blitz, Berserk, Incarnate, Slumber, Morph.]
Quote is from ch 39
Honestly just a name alone isn't very helpful. From this list 'incarnate' and 'Morph' are the only two that sound possible for Eva's 2nd attribute
Anlesa³:
I made a dumb joke last chapter and I was actually kind of right. That's kind of frustrating in a weird way.
Enjoying it:
I'm really enjoying the story if that wasn't obvious by my redicously long comments. I ended up rereading the entire thing yesterday while I was working on writing this comment. Partially for any details I forgot or missed and Partially for enjoyment. That's why there's so many random specific details this time around. Writing these overly long comments is a guilty pleasure of mine. Most people would probably think I'm weird for writing an essay about an amature web novel, written by a person I don't even know. I enjoy it though. Thanks for writing this series.
That was a long comment, and I didn't even get out every idea I had. (Stuff that didn't relate to this chapter mostly)
Well, prepare for my my own big comment
Their will be more appearance changes next chapter
They also mention how it probably be pink if they all mixed
Well in this case, they kind of mixed in certain areas. But mostly didn't mix (But some areas they did mix *Cough* Eyes). There is no set standard way with how attributes can affect appearance changes. Sometimes all attributes will manifest equally, other times not. And sometimes the colour doesn't even relate to their attributes, and they can also shift over time. In this situation it's a little random, but also a few purposeful choices .
Syrus's hair was crimson red (or uh "bright red hair with crimson eyes" in ch 2, but ch 2 also describes lunas eyes as "light pink" when they're described as "pale pink" in ch 1 and 34. This is the kind of trivial discrepancy you notice when you've read something too much.)
Eva's 2nd. But maybe some blood since they're "bloody amber" the lighter one might also be something from Luna, no clue though, and the change from "pale pink" to "light pink" (ch34) in Lunas soul space appearance is another screw in that theory that I don't know how to manage.
As for her age, I think she de-aged after the fight to a teenager.
Yeah, Luna's eyes were pale pink in her first life, then were technically lighter the moment she was reborn (In her soul they were always lighter than her bodies, but she would have no way of knowing that), then they became a more stronger lighter pink as time progressed.
I originally thought it had something to do with attributes, but the choice of white instead of pink, and the specific use of "crimson red" makes me think its past life hair colors. The brown also wouldn't fit with any attributes.
Correct and incorrect. Anna's hair is a crimson red, while Syrus was more of a bright red in her first life, but her soul version did shift to match her eyes a bit more. Now the 'The brown also wouldn't fit with any attributes', , huh very strange indeed, the white and reds are attribute related. I wonder why that odd one out is there.... But yeah, it's mostly, in this case, 99% attribute related, but the brown was a hint to Eva's second attribute ability.
and above in purple light was a woman with a flaming sword aimed at his head.
This line from chapter 50 pretty clearly says "woman" and I wouldn't consider someone who looks 15-16 a woman.
In this case, it's just used for emphasise. Serious face vs currently sad teen.
I like your guesses for main goals, and for money solutions.
And that's all I'm going to say .
I'm glad you made the childhood arc longer. 25 chapters would have been a lot less interesting for me. I'm so glad eva had character development before now. I might have dropped it if Eva remained like she was at the start. Old Eva was honestly not very enjoyable to read. How she acted during their 6th birthday was honestly kind of a mood killer.
Well, I'm happy you also find this version more interesting as well
The 6th birthday was interesting chapter, Eva was very conflicted, but it was required for the avalanche that was the chapters 18~21. I have good memories writing those.
Space is a nothing: So I know that Luna probably doesn't know a lot of space magic, but it's only been used 3 times the entire story. Once in the mana outburst at the end of 49. And twice in ch 50 with teleporting behind people. It was mentioned early on that practicing space magic was something that had to be done on its own, but there was never any mention of actually practicing it. So...did she practice it?
Yes, but not to extent she would be able to do much. The mana outburst doesn't require practice to get a powerful effect. Then the straight up short range teleportation, yep, she wouldn't be able to normally do that .
There's 8 farming villages on the border near Ihere. I'm wondering if they attacked any of the other 8 as well. If you only needed to attack one #4 would be the ideal choice due to its longer distance from the other villages.
Good observation, .
Quote is from ch 39
Honestly just a name alone isn't very helpful. From this list 'incarnate' and 'Morph' are the only two that sound possible for Eva's 2nd attribute
Answers soon? I'm still figuring out the ratio of emotional just the trio figuring out what happened & what to do. And reveals on powers and attributes.
Anlesa³: I made a dumb joke last chapter and I was actually kind of right. That's kind of frustrating in a weird way.
Once again, you figured out something before I even said it . Though this time, it was more heavily hinted at , since the fight wasn't from Anna's perspective, and she was doing things she wasn't able to normally do.
I'm really enjoying the story if that wasn't obvious by my redicously long comments. I ended up rereading the entire thing yesterday while I was working on writing this comment. Partially for any details I forgot or missed and Partially for enjoyment. That's why there's so many random specific details this time around. Writing these overly long comments is a guilty pleasure of mine. Most people would probably think I'm weird for writing an essay about an amature web novel, written by a person I don't even know. I enjoy it though. Thanks for writing this series.
Thanks, thanks a lot. Nothing weird about it. I'm glad this story has been able to provide you enjoyment, as an author that makes me the happiest.
Answered most things about the appearance, and the events that already happened, but kept it vague or no answer for future stuff.