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To those of you who have read I Will Not Be Isekai'd! this far, thank you for your continued support.
This story will be relaunched sometime next week, with some better quality edits to the beginning chapters and new plot details. I'll most likely keep this old one up (unless forced otherwise), so I Will Not Be Isekai'd! will come back even better!
This story will also be available on Royal Road in the future, so stay tuned on my RR account! If you wish to talk to me personally, I have a new Discord server.
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I think that is a good decision. In my opinion the old version was too slow and repetitive, but the story and setting shows promise. (What do I mean by repetitive? The MC struggles with interpersonal relationships. The readers are told that over and over again. At some point this gets tedious. I am not saying you should cut it, but shorten it to make the story less depressing.)
P.S.: Maybe add more positive things too. The longer I think about it the more depressing the first chapters are.
Thank you for your support. I have already received some critiques from a couple beta readers, and have covered up some plot holes in the beginning, simplifying some prose along with some new plot additions. If you can, could you please elaborate on when have you first felt that the story began to be repetitive? I will make sure to look into it when I do another editing round.
P.S.: Maybe add more positive things too. The longer I think about it the more depressing the first chapters are.
@mainzmainzmainz Haha, I get that a lot on my other story as well
. I will add more happy things in the future. I'll consider revising his monologues and thoughts. 
@WanderNatamaru Sorry. I did not take any notes, so I cannot point to concrete parts of the story. I remember that the internal monologue was repetitive, but maybe I am wrong.
@mainzmainzmainz Oh well