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After some consideration, I will be completely reworking the prologue and the first part of And There Were 10 while also changing some things in other chapters but it will be minor. These chapters will be going to another book so this old one won't be updating anymore.
Also, I won't give Ben mana since I gained A LOT of feedback from that and after thinking about it, It would make him WAY too overpowered, especially if he can learn to go into his anodite form.
P.S.: This also caused me to start reworking my future chapters as I have a new idea that will blow some of y'all minds so I will start uploading new chapters on Monday.
In the meanwhile, Heres a picture of a cat :)
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I do have one question about the SI's knowledge? Throughout Ben 10 there's constant conflict with ben trying to go for one alien but then he slams down the watch and gets a random one instead. It's how a lot of episodes conflicts keep going or get started, but in the final episode(at least of this Ben 10s continuity) it's revealed that the reason why he kept getting random aliens was because he kept slamming on the watch and it wasn't designed to be handled like that causing the selection to randomize.
I’ll be honest, that’s disappointing. It’s been awhile since I read a Ben 10 story and I was excited to see what you would do with his magic considering his encounter with death and the void, i’ve Read enough Ben 10 stories elsewhere to know how the omnitrix can be used in most of its forms so I mostly look to see how one works with the characters themselves and how they deal with bens alien heritage, I wish you the best but I’m rather tired of pure omnitrix stories, so I’m afraid this is were we part ways though your writing itself is good so far so you should do fine.
It's saddening to see a reader go but I appreciate you for staying with me up until now👍