We were part of one of the biggest merchant caravans in the kingdom
On the fifth day of travel it was stormy the rains came down hard on the thunder road in the distance as the caravans just passed the great Jewel river
A guard called out Gloucester wolves
then the guard swung for the first Gloucester wolf
and hit it then bit down hard haste candy
and then faster than the eye can see he swung his sword In a Circular motion.
killing the second Gloucester wolf
then suddenly just as the guard was slowing down a third wolf lunged toward him just as the
wolf was about to bite down on his neck his Companion. The mage uses the spell ice sphere To blow the wolf's head off. just in time to save his life
at least
that’s all we saw later On that. day
Begin to cross. Into. the Gloucester planes
Nothing Much happens for the day as the sun sets
we set up our camp
…
tomorrow we’ll enter the dark hollow woods
but before me and my sister malan went to sleep
We ask ar mother and father if they can Teach us.
A magic spell
they said yes they Teach. one magic type each
mother said what type of magic do you want to learn.malan chose
Marshall magic she was taught by eating candy to convert. It's sugars into mana. To activate the effect on herself and increase her physical prowess by her father
………….
I chose external magic. mother taught me by
Converting a.Candy into Mana. is how you summon a gummy
are magical creatures with a central core in their body
or to summon a phenomenon
Such a fireball
…….
meanwhile other parts of the caravan
Amber come help you got chores to do repairing armor today before we go to bed Yes Father I'll get right to it.
Meanwhile in other parts of the caravan
Mom.
I'm here over rma sweetie.
I told you to stay with me
okay, mom.Said. rma
I lost sight of you while I was picking flowers. I didn't mean to.Said.RMA
OK, sweetie. Just stay with mommy.
the sun begins to set the caravan gets ready for the night
We ate dinner. And.
The guards who aren’t on watch duty go to sleep To be ready for the next day.
as the sun rises so does the caravan
as they pack up and get ready for the dark hollow woods they
celebrate the twin's 27 birthday the equivalent of 7 in elf years equivalent
they had sweet loaf and jerky all of The caravan was invited to.
participated
Amber told us happy birthday she was 19
equivalent dwarf years 7 then she invited us to her birthday 3 months when they got to town told us it was going to be a much bigger affair
We all talked amongst ourselves about our day and what we wanted to be when we were grown up
RMA I want to be a princess
And then
Amber said I want to be the greatest blacksmith to have lived
And magic and Enchanter.
And then
malan said I want to be the most powerful night there ever was
And then
I said I wanted to be a great wizard
Then Mom and Dad gave us our Birthday presents.
malanI opened her birthday present she was given a dress. By mom and dad.
I malan Sad. I don't wanna dress.
I wanna be a night. I don't wanna wear a Lame... dress.
I don't want to be pretty. I want to be powerful. And Manly.
Then? DIVI Said. We can. Trade birthday presents Do you want?
Just let me open this so I can so we can trade.
The contents. I open it, I see a pair of pants and. A shirt. And I happily trade with my sister. I said. I don't mind being pretty. I like being cute.
Then Mom said. Why don't you get dressed in your new outfits?
You shouldn't show your friends.
As I. DIVI Put on the dress. My. Friends look at me.
From top to bottom. My hair is red. And With. A Light.
curl.As it. They. continued looking down. Me.
look into my eyes, bright green eyes. And onto my
freckles upon my pale skin.As they passed my Pointed.Ears.
.Down my neck to view the top of my new dress.
They said I look cute in it. As I Give a curtsy.
Me and my. Twin Sister malan .Look pretty much identical..malan
The only big difference in their appearances?
Is that I'm Feminine? She is. masculine.As she puts on Her. outfit.A good hearty pair of pants.And that durable shirt?
before they set off to continue the journey into the hollow woods
in the middle of the day in the depths of the forest
suddenly the caravan was ambushed by a cult
first came the rain of arrows killing the majority of the guards
During the fighting, the caravan was divided
In every direction
as we were escaping from the cultists
mother was shot by an arrow in the shoulder AND Then. Mother screams in pain.
ahead of us be a cultist marauder among the trees
Mother uses her magic to summon a gummy bear
it charges at the cultist marauder and kills him
Another cultist seemingly out of nowhere fires
a fireball blasts words us and
mother shelters from getting severely injured
As a caravan guard rushed toward the cultist
Giving us some time to escape towards the nearest village We ran.Purely on an Adrenaline.To escape. From the attacking cult.
Meanwhile in other parts of the caravan Amber
and she is separated from her father
in the commotion from the attack
Amber yells. Father, where are you? She hears nothing.
She continues calling out in hopes her father Will hear her.
RMA Says. Mom, lookIt is., Amber.
Asks.Merrill.RMA's Mother.. pulls Amber. along.With them.
TO escapes From. The. Cultists.
Amber. with RMA and Merrill
Asked.
But what about Father?
Amber, sweetie. I'm sure you'll meet up with Your father at the emergency escape location.
Rma is 12 the equivalent of 6 in mermaid years as they continued their escape
Through the woods
their escape was interrupted by a cultist marauder
charges towards them but Then suddenly. the cultist is stopped by a mage A member of the caravan.
firing a fireball at the cultist
in order to give the surviving members of the caravan some time to escape,
Meanwhile other parts of the escaping caravan
Me DIVI malan and mom reachthe village by nightfall
and they go to the village chief to begin emergency treatment of mother
Of the wounds on mother the best they can Bandaged.
mother said make sure to take care of your sister as she passed out
The magic sounds intriguing and the differences in years and lifetime between species is a sign there is good diversity in the world. I think I understood most of what you were trying to say, with difficulty unfortunately. Story is good, some bits of worldbuilding are fun, but the prose is neither. Keep writing please, but don't forget to read. It helps, believe me.