High in a tree, by the light of the moon, The Naked Succubus shivered.
Below her, A huge gator sat. Watching her. Menacingly. A gator, I might add, that presumably has dragon blood, given its the size of a Grizzly. A MALE Grizzly. Also, it had longer legs than its non-Draconic Cousins.
Just sayin... its a Kaprosuchus.
The succubus, to distract herself, opens the book of Forbidden arts they had gotten the 'summoning' spell from.
A black book, with a blood red ⛧ emblazoned on it. But in the moonlight, when she touched it, words appeared.
[Dis book be da forbidden tome. Don wanna mess wit dis Here Hoodoo.-Mama Succuba]
Apologies to Cliché Voodoo practitioners and Jamaicans... but not to Jamaica itself. I ate a food from your homeland recently. I was sick for three days... SO F YOU JAMAICA. YOU OWE ME A BOX OF STOMACHE MEDICINE
"WELL. That's new. Succuba... Succubus? Well. Shit. Too late now."
The book shone... and seemed to thicken.
"Did this fucker just get bigger?"
It had. Charlotte opened the book.
<HEY NOW, Dincha read mah warnin? Well, ya one o mama's now... I've added sum things ya need ta know, hot thing. Read up on ya self. And stay away from Dat hoodoo in da back o da book.>
"OK. Apparently We fucked up. Um... Thank you!"
<ya welcome, sweet child.>
Charlotte started reading the new pages.
[SUCCUBUS. Embodiments of Feminine Lust and Masculine Desires, they are ancient beings on par with Vampires. Succubi once ruled the sub-tropical Region of Leveaux, until A Daughter of the Succu-Queen Seduced a Married Cardinal of the Vodoun Church. This led to the Subsequent persecution of their kind, and the near extinction of both their race, and their Masculine Counterparts. The Voudoun were cursed, and gave up the ways of The Natural magic... becoming the Holy Order of today. The land of Leveaux was cursed, and abandoned, all blessings of the Fire-king Removed as punishment for their misdeeds. It is now called Nawlins, an old Swamp Witch word meaning Loud and Flamboyant.
Succubus Powers: seduction(males). May affect some females.
Injection barbs: powerful aphrodisiac in the tail.
Succu-ball Stomper: A flying stomp to the weak point. Breaks adamant.
Succu-blessing: makes targets more fertile.
Naughty-Nightwear engine: makes clothing from anything. They are warm, and waterproof, but are very revealing. Takes on certain traits based on materials used.(go Stomp that Gator, now, mama knows ya got dis.) ]
The book then caught fire... and knowledge flowed into her head.
A crash like a meteor was heard... and Charlotte walked away from a bloody Crater, wearing Gator-skin Lingerie.
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Brother Maxwell was a missionary. He was near the border, in his wagon, when he saw her. Scantily clad, trying to find a way past the Orders Knights.
"Young Lady. Might I be of assistance?"
The girl froze... and turned toward him.
"Umm... I don't think so, sir."
Maxwell smiled... and tossed her a robe. "Climb in, young Succubus. I'm no friend of THEIRS." He deactivated his glamour... abd the Short, pale young priest was replaced by a large, muscular Ogre.
"The names Max Swole... which I AM" He flexed "but these Fools see poor little Maxwell, Priest of Draconia."
"A Dragon Priest? I was headed toward the Dragonmount for Sactuary." Charlotte accepted his offer, and climbed onto the wagon
"Coincidence is simply Fate." He turned back on the glamor. "Now, there's a ring here, it will hide your form."
Taking the ring, She put it on. Just as they came in sight of the Border.
"HALT! Max, who's the Girl."
"AH, CLAY! This lass is an initiate. I received word that the great ones were granted a boon by the God's, in the form of a perfect mate... and that Mate needs a Haindmaiden. She shall be my gift to the new Great One."
"Alright. Go on through."
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That evening, in a cave far from the road.
She didn't know what got into her... but as soon as they were far enough away, Max dropped the glamour for good... and when they stopped... well... she couldn't hold back.
She lay there, in his arms, recalling the act... his Rippling muscles, her tongue tracing his pecs, on the way down to... the biggest Dick she'd ever seen... then it was in her mouth, and the taste was spectacular... but it didn't stop there... before he achieved release, he pulled her away, and turned her around... bent over a Boulder, she felt His giant cock Spread her virgin folds... and with a sharp pain, he was inside her... her tail wrapped his leg... and began massaging his balls, warming itself... then he moved, and she Screamed... and his pace increased, grunting with every thrust, until finally the building pressure was released... and hot Fluid gushed into her, bringing her own climax...
She lay there, cuddled in tight, hips throbbing... and thought...
'Guys... I did it... I Lost my virginity... for you. All three of you. Rest In Peace...'
Aloud however... "FUCK YEAH! IM NOT A LOSER ANYMORE... I TOTALLY GOT LAID!"
"Indeed. I liked that thing you did with your tail, Child."
"Maxie, drop that Priest voice. Say... Ready for round two?"
"Hehehe... if I don't make it to the mountain, let my Sisters know... I Died Happy... because you're gonna kill me." He laughed, staring into her Gold eyes.
She didn't know it yet, but Charlotte earned a few titles that night.
[Charlotte. Titles: Sneaky. Gator Stomper. Liar. Virgin no more. Ogre-slayer. Ogre Eater. She who swallow. Vital Bather. Life-eater. Priest Eater. Masseuse. Predator. Sex-fiend. True Daughter of The Succubus Queen. Daughter of The Swamp Witch. WARNING. DISGUISE IDENTITY STATUS DISPELLED.]
[IDENTITY STATUS: CARLOS MANHEIM LEVEAUX CHARLOTTE MARIE LEVEAUX. ROYAL SUCCUBUS. TRUE PRINCESS OF LUST.]
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Each round consumes more of his lifespan.
Do the succubi of this world really drain life expectancy, or do they only drain vitality and if they drain beyond a certain percentage at once the partner's life expectancy is reduced?
Why didn't Max try to ask Charlotte to stop and give her a rest if he knew she was going to die at this rate?
Thanks for the chapter
It's not much life force... max will still have a few hundred years left. Ogres in this world live around 5 to 7 hundred years... it's like, 1% off the lifespan per release... so In human terms, if theory lifespan was 100 years, and they slept with a succubus 100 times, that would go down to 99. That's why succubi prisons were so popular... death row inmates literally get, to reference Futurama, death by snusnu. And what a way to go, hundreds of beautiful ladies draining you dry, hourly... (there's a mention of the only inmate to ever survive these prisons later... he is Not a pretty sight...)... unfortunately, this was used against them in the crusade... and now prisons use lilims instead... the inmates don't last a day. (Lilims are scary... why? Explained later.)
@Darkakuahebi Can succubi choose not to drain life force during sex?
Do succubi need to drain life force regularly to live or is this optional?
Are there ways to replace vital force and reduced life expectancy?
What are the differences between a succubi and a lilims?
@Gin_Otamegane well... I have to tag it.
succubi dont actively drain life force. Its a side effect. They DO draw energy from their partners biological material, which feeds a special organ in their chest, thats joined with their brain stem. Theres no way to not do so, but its really not noticeable...in fact, vampires are more dangerous than succubi. As for lilims... lilims eat souls. They look similar to succubi, but have forward facing horns, short, fat tails, and goat hooves. For lilims, s*x is the tenderizing process, and each minute the act last the more of their victims soul is eaten. Plus, unlike succubi, Lilim are ALWAYS horny. Have you seen Interspecies Reveiwers? That. And a world tree can completely reverse a succubi effect, as can certain elixers... but not a lilim. Soul damage is permanent. The lilims enjoy their victims pain and suffering, and enjoy "eating" anything that moves, including children. Their extermination is mandated by most countries. Except one, which has the prisons...
@Darkakuahebi
What does this special organ do? Is it vital?
If not about how the succubus prevents herself from draining her partner's energy during sex, how about enchanted items that the partner can use to protect themselves from the drain or minimize it?
Now that I stop to think about it, do Fire Elementals also have their life expectancy reduced by having s*x with succubi?
Yes, I remember that episode "The Lilim's Frenzied Frolic".
Do the Lilims in your novel eat the soul completely or is there something left to go through the reincarnation cycle?
The lilims enjoy their victims pain and suffering, and enjoy "eating" anything that moves, including children.
Does this also include animals and monsters?
If Lilims eat souls through sex, that means they are only capable of eating the souls of those who are capable of having sex, right?
@Gin_Otamegane
golems and other constructs are immune to lilims... but anything else is a target, including plant-creatures. Or just plants.
Elementals are effectively immortal, like true dragons, world trees, elder vampires, royal succubi and incubi, and high elves. For example. A pheonus is a fire elemental, but when they die, they self-immolate, and are reborn. All elementals do something similar here. Succubi usually avoid the mortal races, because nobody wants that downer ending, where their lover dies... and despite what they are, in this world, succubi Mate for life. Sure, they might have fun with others, but theres only one theyll come home to... which brings us to the organ... its a piece of their heart, technically, and they'd die without it... and in addition to the life-leech effect, it exist to bind them to their chosen mate... once binding occurs, the twos souls are entertwined, abd the succubus becomes capable pf bearing children... but ONLY for that mate. Its why the ancient queen cursed the slayers bloodlines, her mate was long gone, and her children were all she had left.
Now... ill call attention to the Titles list here... daughter of the Succu-Queen... is obvious... but theres also Daughter of The Swamp Witch, abd the Name Marie Leveaux... Charlotte/Carlos was an orphan... so keep her in mind, shes important later. And as terrifying as i can make her.
@Darkakuahebi
golems and other constructs are immune to lilims... but anything else is a target, including plant-creatures. Or just plants.
Would I be right in assuming that Lilims target any creature that has a soul?
Would lilims also target undead with very rotten and stinky bodies?
A pheonus is a fire elemental, but when they die, they self-immolate, and are reborn. All elementals do something similar here.
So, they are like a phoenix that is reborn from its own ashes, right?
Do elementals keep all memories of their previous life?
Succubi usually avoid the mortal races, because nobody wants that downer ending, where their lover dies... and despite what they are, in this world, succubi Mate for life. Sure, they might have fun with others, but theres only one theyll come home to... which brings us to the organ... its a piece of their heart, technically, and they'd die without it... and in addition to the life-leech effect, it exist to bind them to their chosen mate... once binding occurs, the twos souls are entertwined, abd the succubus becomes capable pf bearing children... but ONLY for that mate.
I see. Hypothetically, if a succubus chooses a mortal as its Mate, that mortal could become some kind of undead like a lich so that it can remain at the succubus' side forever, right?
If the requirement for a succubus to have children is to have her soul intertwined with that of her chosen mate, could she still have children if her mate became a lich with a magically preserved body?
Now... ill call attention to the Titles list here... daughter of the Succu-Queen... is obvious... but theres also Daughter of The Swamp Witch, abd the Name Marie Leveaux... Charlotte/Carlos was an orphan... so keep her in mind, shes important later. And as terrifying as i can make her.
So if I understand correctly through MTL. This Marie Leveaux was Charlotte/Carlos' mother at her birth as a human and not the Succu-Queen's futa mate centuries ago, right?
@Gin_Otamegane
Marie is a terrifying old swamp hag... who is also the Mother of Carlos, though he didn'tknow it... She knew, however, that Carlos was Charlotte... she sought out the last cursed, and well... id say Used him, but Consumed is more accurate... The lady Aint exactly human.
Lilims eat souls. Any souls.tl they dont care about the body.
as for Undead, they are generally evil... few exceptions exist.
And once soul-twined, a succubus Will share their lifespan with their mate... which means, when their bond dies, Usually they follow. The Succu-Queen was an exception due to being essentially a God. One step from apotheosis.
And yes. Pheonus are Phoenix people. Their capitol is Pheonicius, a volcanic island in the south seas, surrounded by smaller islands. Their race is 100% female, but they reproduce by mixing flames, the essence of their souls creating an egg. That egg becomes a phoenix, and after 1000 years, will Evolve into a pheonus. They have dark skin, almond shaped eyes, and brightly colored hair and Feathers. They do not flap to fly. (psst... pheonicius... it's hawaii, basically...)
@Darkakuahebi
Is there any type of soul that is indigestible or toxic to Lilims? Or taste horrible?
Interesting. Would I be right in assuming that as a 100% female race the Pheonus tend to be mostly lesbians?
Is it mandatory for Pheonus to mix their flames with those of another Pheonus to create an egg, or is it also possible to do it alone?
Have you ever written a novel in which the Pheonus appear?
@Gin_Otamegane ok..OK... short answers here.
No.
Yes.
No, but it's possible with other races via ritual
And no, they were created for this story, but I'll probably use them elsewhere in the future.(and actually, I created them years ago, by accident. I shared a short story about a phoenix becoming human for love, and someone commented they love phoenixes, but had a typo. Thus, pheoni were born... and sat in my head for almost 8 years. I'm tempted to create them as a homebrew D&D race, honestly.)
@Darkakuahebi Do the children born through this ritual vary between the race of one of the mothers and hybrids?
Are there hybrid succubis in this world?
How is this ritual performed? I wonder if it's similar to any of the female-to-female fertility rituals I've seen.
Interesting. What is the title of this short story about a phoenix becoming human for love?
@Gin_Otamegane oh, it's an old one, from before this site existed... and the site I shared it on dosent keep archives older than a year anymore. I used it for a contest back In 05 or 06 on The GaiaOnline Forums. Came in 5th. The user running the contest was a buddy, and my prize was a Monthly Collectable item, but sadly, due to a Hacking incident, my Account was Disabled in 2021. Assholes didn't have anything to do during the pandemic, so they hacked the site, and ruined everyone's day. I could restore my account, but all my stuff us gone. I joined it in 03, when it started... almost 20 years of Progress... gone. Including my Saved Uploads. I suppose I could rewrite it... alongside my DragonX9tailfox Story... heck, I might make em part of this one.
As for the Ritual... I've got a chapter about that planned, a bit further down the line... and yes, half-breeds exist. But They're ALWAYS half human, elf, or Dwarf... why? God f*ckery. The God that made those three races wanted them 'purer' than the others... he's dead now. Explanations soon...
@Darkakuahebi Is this DragonX9tailfox story another story you missed on this forum?
...purer? Does this mean that half-breeds with human, elf and dwarf bloodlines will never have more than 2 bloodlines in the mix?
@Gin_Otamegane Yeah, it's also one lost on Gaia... it was the first appearance of one of my OC's, Rei Shiira.(the 9tail)... funny enough, a few months later, pokemon black&white came out... and I got black. Meaning Reshiram. So, of course... Rei Shiira the Reshiram. It felt like Fate.(weirdly, The Dragon Was Zeik Crom... did... did I see the future? This scares me to this day. That and the fact that in the Sun&Moon versions, one of the starters is my Surname, with one less T at the end. Are they watching me?)
And the Three 'basic' races can make Half-elves, Half-dwarves, and half-humans... but originally they couldn't. No matter the father, the child would match the mothers race, if the mother was one of the three. But the other gods stopped that. Like I said, the Xenophobic God is dead.
@Darkakuahebi This is certainly a strange coincidence, but I think it's best not to think about it too much...
And speaking of coincidences, a while ago I had started building an OC slimegirl with dragon and 9tails fox traits and I was thinking about making her the adopted daughter of a dragongirl and 9tails foxgirl couple.
This xenophobic god certainly seems unpleasant, especially to me since I love hybrid and chimerical girls.
@Gin_Otamegane here's a taste... all I can recall of the original. Note, it was a tragic romance, and the Fox-girl didn't survive. She had a "curse from the gods, a thinning of the blood." Basically, she was dying through the entire story.
She loved him. As her tails entwined with his own, making a perfect ten, she loved him. And he loved her, As her Hands, so tiny and delicate caressed his scales, her eyes, pools of starlight gazing into his very soul... From different worlds, different Species, still the two loved... and that was enough. The world may tremble, the mountains fall, and all things burn to ash, but still they would love... and stand against all who would deny them... He loved her, and would fight the gods themselves for her, even at the cost of his soul... for she loved him. And he could not allow her to die.
@Darkakuahebi Just from this fragment I can already imagine that this story could make me want to cry once given the development time necessary for me to get attached to the characters.
Would I be right in assuming that the dragon managed to make the gods who cursed his beloved bitterly repent as they drowned in despair?
This reminds me that the last tragic story I read was "Rose Princess of Hellrage". Have you tried reading this novel?
@Gin_Otamegane no, but I'll definitely give it a try.
And sadly, the original ending I had written was bittersweet.
Unable to save her, Zeik took Rei's corpse in his arms, and Screamed his sorrow to the heavens... where the Goddess of love took pity on them. A beam of light Pierced his chest, and the bodies turned to Stone. He was then told she had chosen to reincarnate. So he asked to be allowed to follow her. Then it all faded to white... and then... 'two children sat beneath the statue of the Lovers, holding hands. They smile, and the boy says "I'll live you for eternity." The girl smiles. "I know. You already have." The two Giggled, and stood. They ran off into the Field of blooming flowers, toward the orphanage in the distance. They were orphans, but They had Each other... and that was enough.'
And that's all I recall of it. A happy(?) Ending... following a tragic one. Cliché, I know, but I remember writing it, only three pages of text, and it made me cry a few times. I think there was a scene were Rei held her dying mother, right at the beginning... but the memory is spotty.