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Should i keep this or no
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Yes Votes: 2 100.0%
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NO Votes: 0 0.0%
Total voters: 2
Characters
-Maximus/Max= Holder of the Ashura System.
Skills- 'Sealed'.
Passives- "Unyielding Wrath" & "Everything is a Lesson".
Family: None (Adopted) by Devi his sister.
-Restricted to proceed more info-
-Devi= Is 'Max' Sister and current guardian.
Skills- Unknown
Passives- Unknown
Family- Maximus
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The concept of your story at least sounds interesting albeit you having actual chapters out yet
Just starting so I'll be learning while writing. So, I'll take your guys comments so I can improve. And this is just character dump so if ppl wants to know stuff, so it makes sense to them early on or if they just want to know as the story progresses if you get what I mean.
Jay can I ask a question should I start with the mc being born or grown up?
@THEBLACKEN hm I say go with what you feel is best I'd say that decison should depend solely on you choose to write this starting as a child or being born but only if your gonna also add a reason for them being abandoned especially considering u have your character as adopted. [Also sorry if it took so long for me to reply have been writing a fiction of my own in a (Google document) while trying to come up with a good name for it